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    You Will Pay For This! _ Chapter Six

    Story written on June 4, 2005 by Soseover.
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    Sexual Tension.

    You Will Pay For This! _ Chapter Six

    The Year: 2005 of May, the ninth
    The Meet: In Bettes car
    The Location: The Country Club
    The Setting: Parking Lot (Garage)

    Unfortunately, mother nature had a different plan for them. The dark clouds starts its formation, as the wind and rain begin its collaboration.

    Dana : (looks at the sky) You have got to be kidding me?! (talking to sky) We were about to play, don’t you want to know, who will win? I know they did! (points to the people, who’s running into building)

    Alice (thinking) : Wow, my baby is kind of loco in the cabeza. No wonder, she’s dating me. She’s definitely a keeper, this one.

    Dana : (yelling at the sky) Why, why?!

    Alice : (a hinder of patronization) Oh, I’m sorry baby. Come on, let’s go.

    Alice grabbed her girlfriend’s hand, the other hand shielding their heads from the rain (like that would help), and ran toward the bleacher where their bags are located. Leaving the two adversaries to speak their truth….

    Bette : (scoffed) Well, well, I guess mother nature, doesn’t want me to embarrass you anymore. So, she rains, knowing that I would have kicked your *****………. in tennis.

    Tina : (laughs, and walked up to Bette, and stopped centimeters away from Bette’s face) Puh…leaze! Remember whom you’re talking to Bette Porter. I beat you, ten years ago. I’ll beat you, again, in anything!

    Bette : (flustered) You remembered….

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    Though, before Tina could respond, Alice and Dana returned, with their bags.

    Dana : (grabbed Tina by her forearm) Gosh, Kennard! Its pouring. Come on. Lets go!! (Tina didnt get a word out, as she is being dragged up the steps, by her friend)

    Alice : (standing in front Bette) Earth to Bette! Its raining!! Do you want to stand here, looking like you had just seen a ghost, or can we leave? Sheesh! (as she begins pushing Bette up the steps)

    The four women made their ways to the locker room. They changed into their spare clothes, and were out of the door. Outside, in the garage. Tina and Dana, inside of Tinas car.

    Tina : (frustrated) Damn! It wont start! (looks at Dana) Now what?

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    Comments

    1. Well this chapter wasn’t as funny but it was still light hearted. That what I like about your story it isn’t serious as the other stories on this site. Good Job.

    3. HEADACHE!!!!THAT WAS THE MOST FUNNIEST SHIT EVER..YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT IT WAS A FAB.CHAPTER..THE NICKNAMES CLASSIC..PLEASE POST REAL SOON

    4. don’t listen to Neg8740! I was laughing my b*tt off. I love the silly pet names Dana and Alice has for each other! Especially Sweet Potato Pie!

      When life gives you time, please write more! Can’t wait for this Bette and Tina to “come together”; I’m sure the games will be interesting….

      Go scoobee; go scoobee.

    9. LoL…always a treat to read your stories Soseover;) Dana’s nicknames for Alice are hiliarious! Lovin’ it as always, please update soon!

    12. Megga- It doesn’t give me a headache! Haha, I love this story, can’t wait to see how this part of it unfolds. Please post again soon!

    14. This story is hilarious! I just love the “sexual tension” you’ve mention between Bette and Tina. Perhaps opposite attracts maybe the cause? Can’t wait for an update…..great job!

    16. Great chapter, any minute they will be ripping each others clothes off and be having hot sex in the saab. LOL please don’t slow down, you need to post sooner.

    17. Not funny! Hah! Are you insane?!! I was LMAO! I loved the bit with the window locks! You are such a hoot! I love this so much! Thanks for the great time!

    18. NIIICE! I can’t wait to see where you’ll take this story! The tension between them it’s so funny! The part when they are sitting in the car waiting for Dana, and Tina is all nervous, and Bette is thinking about food! That just cracked me up! Now lets see… what should I give you…4 stars??…Or maybe 5 stars?…Hmmmm.. so hard…. Yeah rigth!!! 5 stars to you soseover… Was there ever a doubt!?

    22. Shit Sose…you bad ass girl. This is to much to handle. Alice and Dana being so fucking cute towards each other. And do take some pills for your headache – so we can go on with this story. Post soon

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