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You Will Pay For This! _ Chapter Six
Tina (thinking) : *****!
Dana : (about to open the door, turned back to look at Tina) Oh yeah, youre sitting in the front. I see, my vanilla ice cream, have moved to the back seat. Usually, that means she wants to fool around.
Tina : God! You two are sick! That b.. Bette and I will be in the car. Dont you care?
Alice : Oh, dont be jealous, because Im getting some, and youre not. How long has it been, a year? Wow, no wonder youre always cranky, but Kennard, next time, dont put yourself out, thats not *****. (she laughs)
Tina : (punched Dana in the arm) Shut up!! At least, I don’t call my girlfriend with weird pet names…. my ***** princess? sugar babies? sweet potato pie? That’s so sick! (she laughs)
Dana : (laughing) Shut up! My pookie-ookey loves it. Now, come on. Lets go.
The two women walk up to Bettes car. Dana, wasted no time jumping in the back seat, where she made herself comfortable on Alices lap, and the two was quickly caught up in their own world. Tina, however, was standing in front of the door, like she was waiting on something….
Bette : (getting frustrated. She peek her head, out the window, to look at Tina, and angrily said) What are you waiting for?! Do you need me to get out the car and open the door for you, ma’am?
Tina : (ignoring Bette)……
Bette : (chuckles, as she whispers) Oh, I get it, youre afraid of me, huh? Thats why you wont get in my car.
Tina (thinking) : Oh no, you did not. Afraid? Of you? Please. Dont make me kick your *****.
Bette (thinking) : Reverse psychology, baby! I bet that will get your ***** in my car, so fast. I know, how your stubborn ***** works. Gosh, I just want to get this over with. Drop your ***** home, and never see you ever again.
Tina slammed of the door, obstructing Bette’s thoughts. Tina, putting on the seatbelt, she could feel Bettes eyes piecing through her. She turned, to see Bettes staring….
Tina : (clenched her teeth, politely and softly, since Bette is giving her a ride) Yes?
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(112 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
Well this chapter wasn’t as funny but it was still light hearted. That what I like about your story it isn’t serious as the other stories on this site. Good Job.
Thanks for another great chapter…this story is just too funny…looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
HEADACHE!!!!THAT WAS THE MOST FUNNIEST SHIT EVER..YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT IT WAS A FAB.CHAPTER..THE NICKNAMES CLASSIC..PLEASE POST REAL SOON
don’t listen to Neg8740! I was laughing my b*tt off. I love the silly pet names Dana and Alice has for each other! Especially Sweet Potato Pie!
When life gives you time, please write more! Can’t wait for this Bette and Tina to “come together”; I’m sure the games will be interesting….
Go scoobee; go scoobee.
A headache? (lol) Maybe, I should stop writing then. (this story, I mean)
i love it!
Damn Bette and Tina is so cute and so funny, and now Bette id driving Tina to her apartment and what they do on that time. Post soon please, thanks!
I love this story, but I must admit it gives me a bit of a headache.
LoL…always a treat to read your stories Soseover;) Dana’s nicknames for Alice are hiliarious! Lovin’ it as always, please update soon!
Can’t wait to see how they pass the time on the ride to Tina’s.
Can’t wait to see what happens when they get to Tina’s apartment! Hint…hint.
Megga- It doesn’t give me a headache! Haha, I love this story, can’t wait to see how this part of it unfolds. Please post again soon!
I’m not awake yet. So what time next month are you posting SAM….. LOL.. TK
This story is hilarious! I just love the “sexual tension” you’ve mention between Bette and Tina. Perhaps opposite attracts maybe the cause? Can’t wait for an update…..great job!
LOL! you are making me laugh so hard. the names you come up with are great. please post soon.
Great chapter, any minute they will be ripping each others clothes off and be having hot sex in the saab. LOL please don’t slow down, you need to post sooner.
Not funny! Hah! Are you insane?!! I was LMAO! I loved the bit with the window locks! You are such a hoot! I love this so much! Thanks for the great time!
NIIICE! I can’t wait to see where you’ll take this story! The tension between them it’s so funny! The part when they are sitting in the car waiting for Dana, and Tina is all nervous, and Bette is thinking about food! That just cracked me up! Now lets see… what should I give you…4 stars??…Or maybe 5 stars?…Hmmmm.. so hard…. Yeah rigth!!! 5 stars to you soseover… Was there ever a doubt!?
K
Great chapter, You are still funny. Love it.
pressure????? ummm seems it makes u more funny….lesbian princess…lol…never dissapointin’…post soon
What was that??? I am soooo in love with ur story.. so it’s not over soseover..go and get us some more!!
Shit Sose…you bad ass girl. This is to much to handle. Alice and Dana being so fucking cute towards each other. And do take some pills for your headache – so we can go on with this story. Post soon