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You Will Pay For This! _ Chapter Six
Dana : (shrugged her shoulders) Hey, dont look at me. I didnt know, I have to be a mechanic, along with a professional tennis player, a good lover, and above all, maintain this hotness. (touching herself) Im not a superwoman, and I cant do everything. (she laughs)
Tina : (laughing) Shut up. (slapped Dana on the arm) So, call triple A, then.
Dana : Okay, let me see your cellphone?
Tina : What? You dont have yours?
Dana : No, I forgot.
Tina : Great! Just great! (slapping the steering wheel) I left mine, at home.
Just then, they heard a honking sound coming from behind them. They turned to look, and it would be their savior….
Bette : Damn. Alice! Why did you beep the horn?
Alice : Um, Miss Porter, do you not see my girlfriends friends car, not going anywhere?
Bette : So?
Alice : God! What if they need help?
Bette : And?
Alice : My God, when did you become and inconsiderate *****?
Bette (thinking) : Around the time, when that woman… Tina Kennard… showed up.
In Tinas Car….
Dana : (looking at the car behind them) Oh, its my sugar-plum, and she came to save me. I mean, us.
Tina : How come shes sitting in the passenger seat?
Dana : Um, thats because its Bettes car, and shes driving.
Tina (thinking) : *****!
Dana : Come on, lets ask, If they could give us a ride home. Well take care of the car tomorrow.
Tina (thinking) : No, please.
Back in Bettes car…..
Alice : (looking at Bette, strangely) Um, Porter, could you unlock the window, so I could ask my girlfriend, if she needs anything.
Bette : (swiftly) No.
Alice : Porter! Right now!
Bette (thinking) : Alice, you are lucky, I love you. (as she unlocked the window)
Alice : (rolled the window down, screams out) Baby, are you okay? We heard you, trying to start up the car. We want to make sure, if everything is all right?
Bette (thinking) : Not me. I was going to leave.
In Tinas Car….
Dana : Awww. Do you hear that, Kennard? My sugar-babies is so sweet. (pressing the button to roll the window down) Kennard? What are you doing?
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(112 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
Well this chapter wasn’t as funny but it was still light hearted. That what I like about your story it isn’t serious as the other stories on this site. Good Job.
Thanks for another great chapter…this story is just too funny…looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
HEADACHE!!!!THAT WAS THE MOST FUNNIEST SHIT EVER..YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT IT WAS A FAB.CHAPTER..THE NICKNAMES CLASSIC..PLEASE POST REAL SOON
don’t listen to Neg8740! I was laughing my b*tt off. I love the silly pet names Dana and Alice has for each other! Especially Sweet Potato Pie!
When life gives you time, please write more! Can’t wait for this Bette and Tina to “come together”; I’m sure the games will be interesting….
Go scoobee; go scoobee.
A headache? (lol) Maybe, I should stop writing then. (this story, I mean)
i love it!
Damn Bette and Tina is so cute and so funny, and now Bette id driving Tina to her apartment and what they do on that time. Post soon please, thanks!
I love this story, but I must admit it gives me a bit of a headache.
LoL…always a treat to read your stories Soseover;) Dana’s nicknames for Alice are hiliarious! Lovin’ it as always, please update soon!
Can’t wait to see how they pass the time on the ride to Tina’s.
Can’t wait to see what happens when they get to Tina’s apartment! Hint…hint.
Megga- It doesn’t give me a headache! Haha, I love this story, can’t wait to see how this part of it unfolds. Please post again soon!
I’m not awake yet. So what time next month are you posting SAM….. LOL.. TK
This story is hilarious! I just love the “sexual tension” you’ve mention between Bette and Tina. Perhaps opposite attracts maybe the cause? Can’t wait for an update…..great job!
LOL! you are making me laugh so hard. the names you come up with are great. please post soon.
Great chapter, any minute they will be ripping each others clothes off and be having hot sex in the saab. LOL please don’t slow down, you need to post sooner.
Not funny! Hah! Are you insane?!! I was LMAO! I loved the bit with the window locks! You are such a hoot! I love this so much! Thanks for the great time!
NIIICE! I can’t wait to see where you’ll take this story! The tension between them it’s so funny! The part when they are sitting in the car waiting for Dana, and Tina is all nervous, and Bette is thinking about food! That just cracked me up! Now lets see… what should I give you…4 stars??…Or maybe 5 stars?…Hmmmm.. so hard…. Yeah rigth!!! 5 stars to you soseover… Was there ever a doubt!?
K
Great chapter, You are still funny. Love it.
pressure????? ummm seems it makes u more funny….lesbian princess…lol…never dissapointin’…post soon
What was that??? I am soooo in love with ur story.. so it’s not over soseover..go and get us some more!!
Shit Sose…you bad ass girl. This is to much to handle. Alice and Dana being so fucking cute towards each other. And do take some pills for your headache – so we can go on with this story. Post soon