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You Will Pay For This! _ Chapter Six
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Bette : (leans in, closer to Tina, as she whispers) Do not slams my baby, ever again! She’s tender…
Tina : (deliberately, but politely opened the door, and slammed it again. Then looks at Bette) I’m sorry, I couldn’t hear. What did you say? (she smiles)
Bette (thinking) : Oh my God! This woman…. I so want to kick your *****, Tina Kennard…
Tina : (smirks) So?
Bette : (afraid that Tina would hurt her baby, again. She smiles) Nothing. Nothing. I didn’t say anything. (Bette puts the car in drive, and drove out the garage, and into the afternoon rain)
The two women in the back were not that oblivious, to what was going on…..
Dana : (whispering in Alice’s ear) Do you feel that?
Alice : (whispering back, in Dana’s ear) Yeah. I believed it’s called sexual tension.
Dana : (whispers) Yes! And they don’t even know it.
Alice : (whispers) I know. They want each other, so bad.
Dana : (whispers) Do you think, we should help them?
Alice : (whispers) Okay. (Then Dana whispers her devious plan to Alice)
Bette looking through the rear mirror, and sees the two women whispering. Bette wonders what they’re up to…
Bette : Hey, you two, what’s with the whispering? (as Tina turned back to look at them, to see what Bette is talking about)
Alice : (smiles sheepishly) Nothing, Porter! Just nothing. (laughs) Hey, could you drop me home, first. Then, Tina and Dana, at Tina’s apartment.
Tina : Dane, your not going to your apartment?
Dana : (smiles) No. Besides, you and I, we need to talk. Remember?
Bette (thinking) : Thank God! At least, I don’t have to drop Tina… home, last. That would be ***** hazardous!
It wasn’t that long, until Bette was at Alice’s apartment.
Alice : (hand on the handle, about to open the door, but turned back to her girlfriend) Um, baby, didn’t you leave something at my apartment? Why don’t you come and get it? Porter could wait a minute. Right, Porter? (tapping Bettes shoulder)
Bette : (smiles) Um, yeah sure. But make it…
Alice and Dana, was out of the door, before Bette could say anything further. Leaving the two adversaries, alone, again. However, none, acknowledge the other’ presence. They wisely chose not to speak, or else, there would be a smackdown in the car. Rather, they just ignored, pretending that no one else was in the car. So, they waited…
Tina (thinking) : Damn, Dane… What’s taking you so long?
Bette (thinking) : Hmmm… Italian or Chinese?
Tina (thinking) : Sheesh! It’s been five minutes. Get your ***** down, right now, Dane!
Bette (thinking) : No, maybe Thai… yeah, Thai. Okay, Porter, tonight you’re having Thai.
All of a sudden, Bette’s phone rings……
Bette (answered): Hello? Alice. What? So, Dana is staying with you? Okay. Yes! Yes! I said YES, I promise to take Tina home. No detours. Yes. Scouts honor. All right. Bye. Okay, I’ll give it to her. (then puts the phone in Tina’s face) Here….
Tina : (wasn’t even aware that Bette was on the phone, as She was too deep in her thoughts) What?!
Bette : (covers the receiving end of the phone) Don’t used that tone, with me! And Dana wants to talk to you.
Tina : Shut up! Now, give me the phone. (then snatched the phone out of Bette’s hand, answered) Hello? What? Well, can I stay at Alice’s until the cab comes? You two? At it, already? My God! Dana, you can’t do this! Dane! (click) Dane….
Tina slowly turned, and looks at Bette…..
Bette (thinking) : Hmm… is she going to give me, back my phone? I mean, You are lucky, I promise Alice to take your ***** home, or else, I would make you walk in the rain.
Tina (thinking) : Damn, damn, damn, maybe I shouldnt have yelled at her. Oh, man, this is going to be an interesting ride.
………..TBC……….
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Well this chapter wasn’t as funny but it was still light hearted. That what I like about your story it isn’t serious as the other stories on this site. Good Job.
Thanks for another great chapter…this story is just too funny…looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
HEADACHE!!!!THAT WAS THE MOST FUNNIEST SHIT EVER..YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT IT WAS A FAB.CHAPTER..THE NICKNAMES CLASSIC..PLEASE POST REAL SOON
don’t listen to Neg8740! I was laughing my b*tt off. I love the silly pet names Dana and Alice has for each other! Especially Sweet Potato Pie!
When life gives you time, please write more! Can’t wait for this Bette and Tina to “come together”; I’m sure the games will be interesting….
Go scoobee; go scoobee.
A headache? (lol) Maybe, I should stop writing then. (this story, I mean)
i love it!
Damn Bette and Tina is so cute and so funny, and now Bette id driving Tina to her apartment and what they do on that time. Post soon please, thanks!
I love this story, but I must admit it gives me a bit of a headache.
LoL…always a treat to read your stories Soseover;) Dana’s nicknames for Alice are hiliarious! Lovin’ it as always, please update soon!
Can’t wait to see how they pass the time on the ride to Tina’s.
Can’t wait to see what happens when they get to Tina’s apartment! Hint…hint.
Megga- It doesn’t give me a headache! Haha, I love this story, can’t wait to see how this part of it unfolds. Please post again soon!
I’m not awake yet. So what time next month are you posting SAM….. LOL.. TK
This story is hilarious! I just love the “sexual tension” you’ve mention between Bette and Tina. Perhaps opposite attracts maybe the cause? Can’t wait for an update…..great job!
LOL! you are making me laugh so hard. the names you come up with are great. please post soon.
Great chapter, any minute they will be ripping each others clothes off and be having hot sex in the saab. LOL please don’t slow down, you need to post sooner.
Not funny! Hah! Are you insane?!! I was LMAO! I loved the bit with the window locks! You are such a hoot! I love this so much! Thanks for the great time!
NIIICE! I can’t wait to see where you’ll take this story! The tension between them it’s so funny! The part when they are sitting in the car waiting for Dana, and Tina is all nervous, and Bette is thinking about food! That just cracked me up! Now lets see… what should I give you…4 stars??…Or maybe 5 stars?…Hmmmm.. so hard…. Yeah rigth!!! 5 stars to you soseover… Was there ever a doubt!?
K
Great chapter, You are still funny. Love it.
pressure????? ummm seems it makes u more funny….lesbian princess…lol…never dissapointin’…post soon
What was that??? I am soooo in love with ur story.. so it’s not over soseover..go and get us some more!!
Shit Sose…you bad ass girl. This is to much to handle. Alice and Dana being so fucking cute towards each other. And do take some pills for your headache – so we can go on with this story. Post soon