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At this Alice interjects Are you saying there was something missing? Looking at Dana and motioning with her hand back and forth I mean we were there it did look perfect. So much so that we all wanted what you two had. Could you have changed something? Alice was struggling to get what Bette was saying.
Actually yeah, we were missing some essentials components in relationship handling skills. You know the things that help you manage a relationship better. These are the skills that you learn in business or through life but never really apply to your personal life. Its like being book smart but having no common sense to speak of. You know the standard things you learn in business 101 little essentials like, control, communication, conflict resolution, sharing responsibilities and then you have to kick in commitment. At this part Bette pauses and waits for their comments with and expectant raised eyebrow.
It seems that neither Alice nor Dana were willing to rise to the bait so seeing this Bette feels compelled to call them on it Oh come on guys I can take it. I wouldnt have brought it up if I didnt think it was something I could talk about now. Ask the question I know you want to, its OK really.
Dana finally with a little hesitation asked Bette what made you cheat?
Chapter 57 – Transparency
At this Bette just smiled a sad smile as she really did want to have this conversation but wasnt sure where to start. She must have caused why else would she have goaded these two in this direction. Why did I cheat? Yeah why? You get the prize Dana, thats the question I think you guys have wanted to ask for quite some time. Give me some grace here if you dont mind as I think I need to say this for some reason. God knows I have put enough thought into this so I might as well expand my answer a little so it will make total sense to you. You guys dont mind do you? Bette asks as it suddenly occurs to her that they might not want to hear this so she looks up with the question in her eyes.
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I really liked Bette’s explanation. I hope it helps A and D. Love this.
I like your Bette and I love your stories thank you so very much
I love how Bette is so opened…GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
OMG Jwet that was simply awesome, Bette has completly stripped herself bare and opened up, my biggest worry is the foundation secret will this be her downfall? I hope not! She has to come clean to Tina about this, she can’t carry this secret about with her as she moves slowly forward on building her relationship with Tina again.
Looking forward to next post Jwet, thank you.
OK WOW!!! awesome, when I read it the first time!! But the 2nd time I’m just pissed off now, WTF why is bette telling them this, when she is lying her ass off to tina about the foundation??? J you better make Bette tell tina, I can’t take this right now. I mean how can she sit there and feel good about herself trying to save A/D relationship. Ok sorry for the harsh comments, it from lots of crying god damm TK’s story, and what it made me do, then there was the no sleep with me having to be at work at 6am, working 12 hours today, so I’m really crabby right now and want to kick bettes ass!!
Ok Jwet, I think brutally honest needs to be added to the soft and squishy. Not a bad thing, only good can come of it for Bette with all her friends seeing the changes she’s made and the lesson’s she has learnt.
I,m afraid Bette needs tp tell Tina about her part in the foundation otherwise the relationship they are trying to build again, is based on a foundation of lies, fess up Bette or this will be your ultimate downfall.great Jwet as usual.
i truly love your insight into relationships and i love theway that you write bette as so insightful and self-reflective
Great and sad. I find myself with techgal, wondering how Tina will take the news if she figures out Bette’s involvement in the foundation.
That was incredable very touching and sadly vary realistic which is what makes you an excellent writter and this an awesome story…oops im getting mushy must have hit a nerve,,lol looking forward to more thanks
wo, deep. can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction to Bette’s secret. Great story.
OH boy…very elucidate chapter..and very sad cuzz this kind of thing coult happen to every one who loves someone VERY MUCH but have fears to open…i´m pretty sure they wont live a lie and to make sure they really will trought every thing and start clean they have to talk and Bette needs to have the same talk to Tina and it better Bette tell about the fundation before Tina knows for herself… Bette has to learn not to hide and show herself cuzz Tina loves her no matter what..thanks really amazing chapter i love it but this is not a secret..lol ;-)
excellent!!! i know someone who should read it!!! ok cya later. Thanks once again.
I’m with Bette&TinaForever. This was simply amazing. But it’s time for Bette to fess up to Tina about the foundation and I hope Tina doesn’t get too angry. Thanks for such a wonderful update! Loved it!
I think you put your soul into this one…it certainly speaks to mine. NC17’s are great…but noting beats gut level honest feelings. This is my fave by far.
Wow good chapter. This is amazing and hope Bette will be honest with Tina about the MYV Foundation. Post soon, thanks!
Hiya Hiya… I love this so much. Thank you for the comments about mine. I swear I don’t know where it comes from. 20 yrs I guess on the job maybe. Still I didn’t know how to write until I started reading your story. OK i admit it. I slept thru English class. Any way the excitement is coming for you story and I can’t wait. Thanks for being such a sweet mentor.
Woo, loved it!! Bette’s depiction of her relationship with Tina was so well written…I was completely blown away!!
“As Bette is saying this out loud her mind immediately comes again to her biggest secret. The one she prays she will never have to reveal to Tina, the MYV Foundation.” Omg, what will happen if Tina ever finds out…eek, hope her reaction is good. I’ll just have to keep on reading, thanks Jwet, wickedly awesome chapter!
I’m concerned that even while in the process of rebuilding Tina’s trust and re-establishing their relationship, Bette’s involvement in the foundation may have laid the seeds of their ultimate undoing. Again.
Gosh, this could be sad.
Thanks for your analysis of what it takes for a relationship to succeed. Something to consider…
I continue to throughly enjoy your story, what a shame Tina wasn’t there to hear Bette’s thought’s, please continue, looking forward to your next chapter.
Hi, I read ch 1-16 this morning, and I just wanted to let you know how much I’m enjoying the story. Hopefully it won’t take me long to get completely caught up…
Great as usual, I absolutely love this story. Can’t get enough of it actually :) Please post again soon.
I got one word for you…wow! That was amazing and I can totally see the Bette on the show explaining her feelings and emotions on why she cheated like that. Awesome.
Better catch up on my story, I’m posting more often, heh. Kidding. Love ya to bits, woo!
This is powerful stuff. I love Bette’s willingness to open up to her friends and try to convince them not to make the same mistakes! But geez, I hope Bette takes her own advice and comes clean with Tina about the Foundation…