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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 2

    Story written on July 6, 2005 by tibette99.
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    Kit worries about Bette (continued immediately from the last chapter)

    PREVIOUSLY

     
    In the dim light Kit could see the toll last nights revelations had on her sister. Bettes eyes were bloodshot and attested to the fact that she probably got little or no sleep. There was the beginning of a bruise along her cheek and Kit absently wondered if Tina did it or if Bette had done it to herself after Tina left. Whatever happened between Bette and Tina left its mark on Bette, literally and figuratively. Looking at Bette sitting there Kit was suddenly at a loss for words. She opened her mouth to speak, to say anything to alleviate the tension building in the room, when Bette beat her to it.

    Bette: I fucked up.

    Three whispered words spoken with such sorrow and condemnation that it broken Kits heart then and there.

    Kit: Oh Bette. What happened?

    Bette: I fucked up. And now shes gone.

    Bette stood, placed the object in her hands on the coffee table, and walked out of the room. Kit watched her leave, sighing as she heard her enter the bathroom and start to run water for a shower. Rubbing her eyes tiredly, she stretched and moved to stand when something caught her eye.

    On the table sat Tina Kennards commitment ring.


    Kit: Oh baby girl, what happened here?

     



    Kit sighed and turned back to her book. That had been over three months ago. Unable to stand living in the house without Tina, Bette had taken up residence in Kits spare bedroom. The girls, hurt by Bettes betrayal, did all they could to comfort Tina. They insisted that they were still Bettes friends, but found it hard not to choose sides. They expressed their discomfort with trying to support Bette when she was so, in their opinion, obviously wrong. Bette never once disagreed with their decision. In fact, she encouraged them to help Tina in anyway possible. The few times Bette accidentally ran into Tina at The Planet always ended with hurtful words on Tinas part.  But never once did Bette attempt to make excuses for her actions.  She just remained silent, allowing Tina to vent her anger and disappointment. Eventually the girls saw less and less of Bette at their morning hangout. She only went when she was running late for a meeting with a client; otherwise she drove a few blocks out of her way to another coffee shop. Apparently coffee shops were a dime a dozen in West Hollywood.

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    3. I was looking to see if you posted and to my supris there it is , i love this story and i hope that Bette fights hard for Tina and does’nt just sit back and do nothing. Looking foward to more

    6. K
      Great chapter. Poor Bette. I like the emotion from her in this. Things just didn’t happen the way I thought they would on the show. I like this better :)

    7. oooh…first to post! Again!
      hahahaha “Tina’s sleeping with Franklin?”…that’s great. I love Kit, she’s too funny. So I gather that whole “Bette brings Tina flowers at teh C.A.C, goes off on Helena, and finds out about the pregnancy” doesn’t happen in your story? I like the flashbacks, are you going to have one when she finds out about the pregnancy?
      I’m glad Kit’s there for Bette. Hope the girls come around. Haha, like Bette said… they could call her, or mail her, or stop by and see her.

      Great update. Can’t wait for the next installment (we will find out why Bette’s at the doctor, right?)

    9. Damm girl this shit if fucking great, I’m glad kit is there so bette can vent.
      Ok so maybe if you stop proofreading your writing so much you could post sooner?? Just a though. I don’t care if you mis spell a word, or don’t have a coma. LMFAO at kit’s “tina’s sleeping with franklin”

      You left us with a cliffy don’t tell me your one of those mean writer who likes to make us sweat for the next update LOL, don’t worry I will still be here waiting for the next one.
      YOUR doing a great job!!!

    10. I love your version. I love Bette and Kit’s interaction, that was something the show was missing last season concerning Bette’s affair.
      I can’t wait for the next installment.

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