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The Burden of Control – Chapter 2
Kit: But how was Tina involved in all of this?
Bette: You mean, you havent seen her at The Planet lately.
Kit: Actually, no I havent. Her hours at the Center changed. She hasnt stopped in for breakfast in weeks.
Bette: Maybe she just has a better offer.
Kit: Why do you think she and Helena are together?
Bette: I dont want to discuss it.
Kit: I want you to. Bette, this (gesturing to the floor where the spill was) is not the way to be dealing with your problems.
Bette: Now isnt that the pot calling the kettle black?
Kit: I guess. But I realized that I had a problem and I sought help Bette. II want to help you.
Bette: Nobody can ***** help me.
Kit: Youre right. They cant.(pauses) Not until you let them.
Bette: Yeahwell, last I checked, I was a little low on friends these days.
Kit: Theyre still there, Bette. Itsjust a difficult situation. You have to look at it from their point of view.
Bette: Yeah. I fucked up, I know. Its the story of my life.
Kit: Betteits not like that. They care. They ask about you all the time. (pauses) They just dont know how to approach you.
Bette: Phone? Mail? In person? Im not a hard person to reach.
Kit: (sighs) Maybe you should try going to them.
Bette: If they were my friends, they would have told me. They should have ***** told me. They KNEW about
Kit: Bette you dont know that. You havent spoken to them. You dont know what they know or how they feel.
Bette: Sure I do. I know everything that goes on.
Kit: What do you mean?
Bette:
Bette manages to get to her feet and starts pacing in the kitchen, clearly agitated
Bette: ***** *****. Shes ***** with my jobshes managed to convince
Kit: Jesus, Bette. Have you talked to
Bette: Yeah well, Franklin is a little too occupied by
Kit: Have youhave you talked to Tina about any of this?
Bette stops pacing. For a moment Kit thinks that shes going to once again retreat to her bedroom. Instead Bette took a seat at the table and rested her head against her hands.
Bette: I cant.
Kit: Why not? You two were doing so well.
Bette: She hates me. She must ***** hate me. I mean I thoughtthought there was still something left between us. When she was therestaying over the house. Things seemed like they were going so well.(pauses) I was wrong.
Kit: Why, Bette?
Bette: Because. Because if there was, she would have told me.
Kit: Told you? Told you what?
Bette: She would have told me that she was pregnant.
TBC?
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(51 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
Come on !!!!!!!!! post soon
This was fantastic! Heartbreaking!! Cant wait for next chapter!
I was looking to see if you posted and to my supris there it is , i love this story and i hope that Bette fights hard for Tina and does’nt just sit back and do nothing. Looking foward to more
WOW GREAT JOB…THANKS POST SOON…
Oh damn this is so good and love it!
K
Great chapter. Poor Bette. I like the emotion from her in this. Things just didn’t happen the way I thought they would on the show. I like this better :)
oooh…first to post! Again!
hahahaha “Tina’s sleeping with Franklin?”…that’s great. I love Kit, she’s too funny. So I gather that whole “Bette brings Tina flowers at teh C.A.C, goes off on Helena, and finds out about the pregnancy” doesn’t happen in your story? I like the flashbacks, are you going to have one when she finds out about the pregnancy?
I’m glad Kit’s there for Bette. Hope the girls come around. Haha, like Bette said… they could call her, or mail her, or stop by and see her.
Great update. Can’t wait for the next installment (we will find out why Bette’s at the doctor, right?)
like this story!!
Damm girl this shit if fucking great, I’m glad kit is there so bette can vent.
Ok so maybe if you stop proofreading your writing so much you could post sooner?? Just a though. I don’t care if you mis spell a word, or don’t have a coma. LMFAO at kit’s “tina’s sleeping with franklin”
You left us with a cliffy don’t tell me your one of those mean writer who likes to make us sweat for the next update LOL, don’t worry I will still be here waiting for the next one.
YOUR doing a great job!!!
I love your version. I love Bette and Kit’s interaction, that was something the show was missing last season concerning Bette’s affair.
I can’t wait for the next installment.