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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 11b
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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 11b
After the two exhausted women had sufficiently gained their senses back, Tina gently unwrapped herself from Bette and stood up slowly.
“Don’t go,” Bette Whispered
Tina looked down, a smile gracing her lips. “Shhh, I’m not going anywhere, I just want to make us more comfortable.”
Tina walked across the studio to the far corner, and picking up the oversized cushions and throws proceeded to create a make shift bed for her and Bette. “Come here” she called softly.
Bette lay on the cushions, Tina partially on top of her. Her head resting on Bette’s shoulder. They lay wrapped up in each others arms for a while. Tenderly stroking each other.
“So I guess me being ***** isn’t an issue for you then?” Tina lifted her head, smiling lovingly into Bette’s face.
Bette laughed at Tina. “Well I would guess not.!”
“Besides,” added Tina, You couldn’t escape, after all I am rather good at hunting down my prey!” She said, unable to stop the light hearted giggle escaping her lips.
Tina looked deeply into her lovers eyes, watching how they sparkled with mischief. Somebody pinch me she thought. This has to be a dream! Do you have any idea how much my life has changed since you stumbled blindly into it? she wondered.
Bette held Tina tightly in her arms, her expression softening at the sound of Tina’s laugh. I can’t believe I watched her heart breaking just a short time ago she thought. Now look at her, God she’s so beautiful when she smiles.
Bette tenderly ran her fingertips down the length of Tina’s spine, delighted to feel Tina quiver at her touch.
So she’s in a playful mood! Well two can play at that game Bette thought.
“Prey?” Bette queried playfully. “Well if I remember rightly Miss Kennard it was your prey that won that particular game of cat and mouse!” Bette said, lightly smacking Tina’s ***** to prove her point.
“Oh really?” Tina responded, raising her left eyebrow in challenge. “So I’m the cat?!” Tina asked, hoping that Bette would fall neatly into the cheese laden trap she was about to set.
“Yes” Bette replied nodding her head in affirmation
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Stunned and amazing great post!!!!!!!!
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
K
WOW, that was one of the hottest chaps I have ever read. Perfect! Love this story, don’t stay away so long. Can’t wait for more.
Thanks, I really enjoy reading this story..keep it up pls…
“The best writing is rewriting.” — E. B. White
Hey, tbsaver! Please never apologize for wanting to make your work the best it can be. You have the right to alter your work until you’re satisfied with the final product and wholeheartedly proud to call it your own. Kudos to you for expecting the best from yourself. Amazing revision. I also enjoyed the previous version, but I agree with you that manifesting Bette and Tina’s emotions made their connection even more special. Thanks for all your hard work!
“and no matter how much you squeak…………I decide how we play the game! Understand? – YIKES!!!
Glad to see that I am not the only one stuttering around here. I can now say that I have at least one thing in common with Bette!
You were right, by the way. The first chapter 11 was wonderful, but this one is definitely true to your story. No matter how vivid a sex scene is written…the build up, the sensualness of the actual act in itself, is so much more fulfilling when we can share in the emotions and thoughts of the characters. One of the reasons I think that reading a well written sex scene is much more of a turn on, than watching it on screen. Thank you for this shot of adrenaline before bed!! :)
Great chapter T.B. I love this story and miss you when you were away. This is the first B/T story that I have read where they are pretty much equals from the onset (They are both already lesbians and neither one is turning the other out.), and have thier own strong sexual histories. I would love to see what happens when Bette gets Tina back to the USA and introduce her to the gang. What will be thier reaction to someone who truly tamed the PORTER. Please continue.
I love Tina the hunter :-) I really enjoyed the first chap 11 but this one is even better.
Wow, what a rewrite. This was intense in it’s intensity! Your words were so vivid–what a nice fantasy sequence for the show it would be!!!
11 was wonderful… but OMG 11b was WOW & amazing … you know I’m hooked THANK YOU!!!
Damn so hot and sexy,love it. Post soon, thanks!