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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 11b
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Tina knew Bette was close, so quickly bought her to a rhythm, harder and faster until she could feel the beginnings of Bette’s ***** overtake her. She curled her fingers quickly finding Bette’s spot as Bette’s body found the release it had so desperately craved.
Bette came like Tina had never seen anyone come before. Her body jerking off the floor, her head thrown back in ecstasy.
Tina lapped at her juices, her tongue exploring the full length of Bette. She had almost licked her dry when she reached up and pinched Bette’s aroused nipples while taking her ***** in her mouth and sucked HARD!
With a bloodcurdling scream, Bette came again, her body violently shaking as she involuntarily lifted her upper torso into the air with the force of her *****.
Barely pausing for breath, Tina continued her devouring of Bette’s body, her skillfull hands taking Bette to the edge once again.
“OHHHHH YESSSSS!!!!!”
Bette could feel herself becoming dizzy as wave after wave of orgasms crashed over her. Oh god, she thought, I think I just died. She could barely breath, her lungs desperately trying to drag in enough air to sustain at least some minor brain activity. She shivered with desire as the aftershocks would jolt her body suddenly and without warning. Tears filled her eyes as she tried to come to terms with the emotions swimming around in her head.
Tina crawled back up Bette’s body, slowly regaining her senses. Taking in the bite marks she had left on Bette’s smooth flawless skin, and misunderstanding the tears she could see slowly escaping from Bette’s tightly shut eyes, Tina thought she had gone too far. She blushed deeply and looked down. “Oh god” she whispered. “I’m sorry, I don’t know what came over me.”
Bette slowly opened her eyes to reveal an expression of complete and utter contentment on her face. “I think you’ll find I did baby!” Bette responded raggedly.
Reaching out her hand, Bette drew Tina closer, a look of pleading crossing her face. “Kiss me T, Please?”
Tina’s heart melted as she bent her head down and tenderly took Bette’s lips with her own.
They kissed softly and tenderly as they lay in each others arms, each kiss becoming lighter, but with no less passion.
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Stunned and amazing great post!!!!!!!!
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
K
WOW, that was one of the hottest chaps I have ever read. Perfect! Love this story, don’t stay away so long. Can’t wait for more.
Thanks, I really enjoy reading this story..keep it up pls…
“The best writing is rewriting.” — E. B. White
Hey, tbsaver! Please never apologize for wanting to make your work the best it can be. You have the right to alter your work until you’re satisfied with the final product and wholeheartedly proud to call it your own. Kudos to you for expecting the best from yourself. Amazing revision. I also enjoyed the previous version, but I agree with you that manifesting Bette and Tina’s emotions made their connection even more special. Thanks for all your hard work!
“and no matter how much you squeak…………I decide how we play the game! Understand? – YIKES!!!
Glad to see that I am not the only one stuttering around here. I can now say that I have at least one thing in common with Bette!
You were right, by the way. The first chapter 11 was wonderful, but this one is definitely true to your story. No matter how vivid a sex scene is written…the build up, the sensualness of the actual act in itself, is so much more fulfilling when we can share in the emotions and thoughts of the characters. One of the reasons I think that reading a well written sex scene is much more of a turn on, than watching it on screen. Thank you for this shot of adrenaline before bed!! :)
Great chapter T.B. I love this story and miss you when you were away. This is the first B/T story that I have read where they are pretty much equals from the onset (They are both already lesbians and neither one is turning the other out.), and have thier own strong sexual histories. I would love to see what happens when Bette gets Tina back to the USA and introduce her to the gang. What will be thier reaction to someone who truly tamed the PORTER. Please continue.
I love Tina the hunter :-) I really enjoyed the first chap 11 but this one is even better.
Wow, what a rewrite. This was intense in it’s intensity! Your words were so vivid–what a nice fantasy sequence for the show it would be!!!
11 was wonderful… but OMG 11b was WOW & amazing … you know I’m hooked THANK YOU!!!
Damn so hot and sexy,love it. Post soon, thanks!