Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 11b
Login to add story to favorites
(50 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Tina noticed the sudden change in Bette, noting her flushed cheeks and shallow breathing, Tina moved her mouth to mere inches from Bette’s ear before whispering “Of course this is way too easy” She said. “Have you ever watched a cat after it has caught a mouse? The way that it plays with it’s prize, picking it up between it’s teeth to carry it off..Holding on tight enough to keep it captive, but not hard enough to kill it?”
Tina looked at Bette intently, feeling the heat build between her legs. “Sometimes the cat deliberately lets the mouse go, before chasing it again and recapturing it!”
“Well little mouse, Tina said, “Do you want me to play with you?” Tina paused, and lifting her head slightly looked up, her eyes staring intently at Bette, her mouth forming into a satisfied smile, and licking her lips seductively
Bette’s breath caught in her throat as she saw the expression on Tina’s face. The raw want evident in her eyes.
“Oh my god!” exclaimed Bette breathlessly, “You look like you’re about to stick an apple in my mouth, and have me for main course!”
“Not main course,” Tina purred sexily, her eyes roaming hungrily over Bette’s body, “but you’d be purrfect for dessert!”
Bette’s eyes widened as her breathing became more erratic. “Show me” she said hoarsely.
Tina lifted the weight of her body off Bette, rolling away from her to set her free.
Bette felt her stomach drop with disappointment, as she could no longer feel Tina against her, to be quickly replaced by a million butterflies fluttering wildly at the sight in front of her.
A completely naked Tina kneeling on her hands and knees, her hair dishevelled by their earlier activities. Bette didn’t think she had ever seen anything more beautiful.
“You like to be in control don’t you?” Tina asked.
“Yes” Bette replied with more than a little apprehension.
“Why” Tina asked
“Because I want please you” Bette replied.
“Well,” Tina continued. You have til the count of three to escape. Tina paused for effect “and then all bets are off. Oh, and once I catch you, you’re mine to play with!”
Tina continued getting more and more aroused by the second. “and no matter how much you squeakI decide how we play the game! Understand?” Tina finished with a flourish, flashing Bette her best ***** smile.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Stunned and amazing great post!!!!!!!!
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
K
WOW, that was one of the hottest chaps I have ever read. Perfect! Love this story, don’t stay away so long. Can’t wait for more.
Thanks, I really enjoy reading this story..keep it up pls…
“The best writing is rewriting.” — E. B. White
Hey, tbsaver! Please never apologize for wanting to make your work the best it can be. You have the right to alter your work until you’re satisfied with the final product and wholeheartedly proud to call it your own. Kudos to you for expecting the best from yourself. Amazing revision. I also enjoyed the previous version, but I agree with you that manifesting Bette and Tina’s emotions made their connection even more special. Thanks for all your hard work!
“and no matter how much you squeak…………I decide how we play the game! Understand? – YIKES!!!
Glad to see that I am not the only one stuttering around here. I can now say that I have at least one thing in common with Bette!
You were right, by the way. The first chapter 11 was wonderful, but this one is definitely true to your story. No matter how vivid a sex scene is written…the build up, the sensualness of the actual act in itself, is so much more fulfilling when we can share in the emotions and thoughts of the characters. One of the reasons I think that reading a well written sex scene is much more of a turn on, than watching it on screen. Thank you for this shot of adrenaline before bed!! :)
Great chapter T.B. I love this story and miss you when you were away. This is the first B/T story that I have read where they are pretty much equals from the onset (They are both already lesbians and neither one is turning the other out.), and have thier own strong sexual histories. I would love to see what happens when Bette gets Tina back to the USA and introduce her to the gang. What will be thier reaction to someone who truly tamed the PORTER. Please continue.
I love Tina the hunter :-) I really enjoyed the first chap 11 but this one is even better.
Wow, what a rewrite. This was intense in it’s intensity! Your words were so vivid–what a nice fantasy sequence for the show it would be!!!
11 was wonderful… but OMG 11b was WOW & amazing … you know I’m hooked THANK YOU!!!
Damn so hot and sexy,love it. Post soon, thanks!