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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 11b
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“Am I a big cat?” Tina asked
“I’d say you were a perfectly proportioned cat!” Bette replied, “with curves in all the right places!” Bette said, wiggling her eyebrows suggestively.
Bette was beginning to feel the stirrings of passion, as the two lovers teased each other, both knowing exactly where this would lead them to!
“Has it ever occurred to you, that I let you think you were in control?” Tina asked, hoping that Bette would take her cue.
“And how exactly do you figure that one out? Laughed Bette. “I seem to recall making all the moves”
“Ah but you are forgetting one thing my little furry friend.Who is on top of who here?”
Bette threw her head back and laughed out loud. “Oh please!” She said. “You are not seriously telling me that just because you are lying exhausted on my chest that makes you in control!”
Tina noted the challenge in Bette’s eyes, and instinctively knew what her next move would be, waiting until she felt Bette’s weight shift under her , Tina quickly moved her hands onto Bette’s forearms effectively pinning her to the floor, thereby preventing her from flipping Tina over onto her back.
Bette’s face registered the shock she felt as Tina had second guessed her. She watched as Tina slowly lowered her face to within inches of her, her stomach turning summersaults as she realised that for the first time in her life she was with someone who was happy to take control. Generally speaking, one thing every lover of Bette Porter had in common is that they were always content to allow Bette to take charge in the bedroom. Bette preffered to give rather than receive. She was generous with her body if not her heart, and to receive was to give someone else control which Bette didn’t do without a fight.
Suddenly Bette realised that the thought of Tina removing that control from her was an incredible turn on. She was tired of always being the strong one, of feeling the weight of the world on her shoulders, of never letting go. The memory of her recent intense ***** making her body flush with excitement. God she thought. If I feel like that after making love to her, what on earth is going to happen if I allow her to continue where this is going?
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Stunned and amazing great post!!!!!!!!
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
K
WOW, that was one of the hottest chaps I have ever read. Perfect! Love this story, don’t stay away so long. Can’t wait for more.
Thanks, I really enjoy reading this story..keep it up pls…
“The best writing is rewriting.” — E. B. White
Hey, tbsaver! Please never apologize for wanting to make your work the best it can be. You have the right to alter your work until you’re satisfied with the final product and wholeheartedly proud to call it your own. Kudos to you for expecting the best from yourself. Amazing revision. I also enjoyed the previous version, but I agree with you that manifesting Bette and Tina’s emotions made their connection even more special. Thanks for all your hard work!
“and no matter how much you squeak…………I decide how we play the game! Understand? – YIKES!!!
Glad to see that I am not the only one stuttering around here. I can now say that I have at least one thing in common with Bette!
You were right, by the way. The first chapter 11 was wonderful, but this one is definitely true to your story. No matter how vivid a sex scene is written…the build up, the sensualness of the actual act in itself, is so much more fulfilling when we can share in the emotions and thoughts of the characters. One of the reasons I think that reading a well written sex scene is much more of a turn on, than watching it on screen. Thank you for this shot of adrenaline before bed!! :)
Great chapter T.B. I love this story and miss you when you were away. This is the first B/T story that I have read where they are pretty much equals from the onset (They are both already lesbians and neither one is turning the other out.), and have thier own strong sexual histories. I would love to see what happens when Bette gets Tina back to the USA and introduce her to the gang. What will be thier reaction to someone who truly tamed the PORTER. Please continue.
I love Tina the hunter :-) I really enjoyed the first chap 11 but this one is even better.
Wow, what a rewrite. This was intense in it’s intensity! Your words were so vivid–what a nice fantasy sequence for the show it would be!!!
11 was wonderful… but OMG 11b was WOW & amazing … you know I’m hooked THANK YOU!!!
Damn so hot and sexy,love it. Post soon, thanks!