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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 11

    Story written on August 4, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “My road of good intentions led where such roads always lead…”


    Everyone’s jaws hit the ground at the news of Bette wanting to play herself in the show.
     
    Tina: I’m sorry Bette, I just don’t understand. First you’re angry because I wrote the show to begin with, then you have me change the characters names so no one will know it’s you and now here you are. I’m sorry, I’m just confused.
     
    Bette: What more is there to understand Tina. I want to audition. That’s all there is to it.
     
    Tina: Do you even have the script?
     
    Bette gave her a cocky look.
     
    Bette: I’m pretty sure I know the lines, after all, they were mine.
     
    Alice: You can’t argue with the truth TK.

    Tina gave her friend a cold glance that could freeze the ocean.
     
    Tina: Yes, Alice, I know, thank you.
     
    Alex: Just hear her out.
     
    Tina: Fine Bette. Go ahead.
     
    Bette let her eyes lock directly on Tina’s.
     
    Bette: When I told you I loved you I meant. It wasn’t some joke. I never wanted to be some summer fling for you Tina.
     
    Tina had to interrupt.
     
    Tina: Bette, that isn’t in the script.
     
    Bette refused to stop.
     
    Bette: I thought you and I were “we”. I changed my entire life for you. Do you understand that?
     
    Tina: Bette please.
     
    Bette: No. You need to hear me out. You owe me that much.
     
    Tina: Let’s not do this here in front of everyone.
     
    Bette: Why? Suddenly you want to keep our relationship private? I don’t think so Tina. You were willing to hang all of our dirty laundry out there for anyone to see. Now it’s my turn. Now I get to say how I’ve been feeling!


    Bette was made of stone. She had prepared for this day for almost 2 years now.
     
    Bette: I trusted you.
     
    Tina: Bette, please, I never meant…
     
    Bette: What Tina? Never meant to hurt me? Is that what you were going to say? Well save it, because I am tired of the apologies. I do not forgive you and I never will.
     
    Alex stood up and walked over to Bette. He tried to wrap his arms around her. Bette pushed him away and began walking toward Tina.
     
    Bette: I want you to look at me!
     
    Tina turned away.
     
    Bette slammed her hands down on the table causing a loud bang.
     
    She jumped in her seat.
     
    Bette: Look at me. Just ***** look at me!
     
    Tina used all of her strength to force her eyes to meet Bette’s.
     
    Bette: Look at what you’ve done to me!
     
    Bette’s voice was cracking and her hands shaking, tears began to well up in the corner of her eyes, but she never let them spill. She wouldn’t give Tina that satisfaction again.
     
    Bette: Look at what I’ve become!
     
    Bette looked around the room. She let her eyes settle on Daphne. 

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    2. Damn girl the worst thing about going away is that I will miss this story. The good thing is that it will all be here for me to catch up on when I get back.. Thanks so much for this I really needed that little hug with the two of them at least feeling for a few mere moments. You are a tease. Thanks

    4. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!

      Author, author!!!!

      Three curtain calls, in short order!

      I am right there in that theatre with them. Thank you for not being afraid to make Bette vulnerable, destroyed by the loss. All the better to come back from, glorious and victorious! I love that Tina will be (I hope) providing the vehicle for Bette’s comeback! The work they do together will be a solid foundation that their relationship previously lacked on the first go-round!!!!
      And please, don’t let Tina become Arthur Miller to Bette’s Marilyn (After The Fall). Bette is, after all, Tina’s muse. Writers sometimes despise that which inspires them, the deep relationship with their creativity.

      I Love This Story!!!!

    5. alright, i’m officially saying that i feel more sympathy for bette than tina. i know they both got hurt, but bette was smashed into a thousand pieces that were buried in desert sand. i think that this sequel has has more drama in it’s 11 chapters than anything in can’t help falling in love. i think it seems that way because earlier they had bumps but were still together. they had alex and alice which provided some of the greatest comedy written. without those two things i’m feelin the pain! and it’s fantastic. plz post again today if you can. broken bette’s monologue is written beautifully by the way.

    6. Aww Flair..lm your reading bitch right now! I can’t get enough of this story.. I can picture it all in my head perfectly!! Just to have them in the same room makes my heart beat faster..x

    8. Im yelling, (do you hear me all the way there). finally they are in the same place for a few moments. tina really needs to figure out how to be repentent. i knew she didnt mean to hurt her, but sheesh, she did change/come out to show her love. alice/alex. glad they are there to support. my knees are damn sore, girl. but please another one if you can.

    9. Ahhh this is soo heartwrenching and I seriously can’t get enough. Was it fortunate for Tina to be able to hold Bette in her arms again? Will Bette accept the role as herself? I can’t wait to find out. Thanks, flair!!

    10. Tina has to run after Bette and beg for forgivness, she needs to fight and fight hard for the love of her life. Maybe that’s what Bette wants, Tina not giving up and willing to do what is neccesary to get her back and prove to her that she will never let her go or hurt her like that again. Love your story Flair.

    11. this was excellent again! everytime i read it i wonder why tina broke up with bette in ur previous story. anyways, i guess the question here is not why it happened but how to move on from there? awaiting ur next installment:)

    12. TRUST Ido believe that will be the key to all of this. Bette started this by breaking up with Tina on voice Mail, then Tina rejected Bette in arizone, Do they and will they trust eachother again, Can each one regain that trust. Love can be the desiding factor, Thanks for a beautiful chapter.

    17. Thank you again for your beautiful writing, I truly love this story. I am eagerly awaiting you next post! Best wishes from a ‘Nederlander’ (which means dutch (wo-)man)

    22. OK I thought they back each other OMG! this is more intense it’s killingg ME LOL! How long they going civil to each other come on give them a brick Oh My flair Thanks.

    23. Your flair for the dramatic strikes again. I’m glad Bette got the part and I was hoping when she was asked who has going to play Tina, she would have said herself.

      I’m hoping she changes her mind and make Melanie HER understudy. Who else better to play the part of Bette and Tina than Bette and Tina!

      Post again soon.

    25. OMFG!!! That was amazing. I loved it. You know, I know Bette’s pain personally and in her “adution” I was moved to tears. I didnt even get teary with when they broke up, but that was excellent. Are you yourself an actress?? Damn that was so good. I hope Bette gets better, if not with Tina then just overall happy, they both deserve at least that. Pleae post soon.

    26. Can Bette ever trust Tina again?….Bette playing herself in the play and the 2 of them working that closely together? lots of anger to get passed….and lots of sparks to get FLYING! YAY! Love the story as always.

    28. i am fucking spechless..that was amazing Tina dont live in regret if she wants Bette again then fight for her but only if she knows for sure what she wants otherwise step of bitch ok im sorry for call Tina bitch but we all can feel how devastated Bette was and is and this is not right play with her heart..ok..fucking amazing please stop my misery..lol.LOVE IT as always your ROCK!!!!

    34. WOW!…This was just so, so, so, so, so, so rich!!! One second I’m LMFAO at Bette’s sarcastic quip: “I’m pretty sure I know the lines…”, then the next second I’m blown back in my chair watching bug-eyed as she releases her caustic catharsis. Excellently executed tirade, by the way. Certainly had my rapt attention. Don’t know what else to say right now…except I see a potent storm brewing on the horizon! Better put the top up…the loan hasn’t come through yet on the Hummer. Anxious for more, Flair.

    35. They say that hind sight is 20/20, so I guess it may be cleansing for Bette to revisit their relationship via the play. It should help her heal and in healing she should be better able to go forward…with or without Tina.

    36. What could I say to you, dangerous temptress who never stops to seduce your audience/readers with such an endless rollercoaster ??
      A new chapter, a new jewel. Each time you succeed the same miracle !

      And here, once more, you show us the range of your gift for changing tones : when drama reaches a summit point, here’s come back the comedy. Tears, sighs, laughs, sighs again… Do you really want to emotionally destroy us, dearest tormenter ? (lol) Well, well, I think we – your beloved readers ! – all will slowly disappear one after one, deadly strinked in our hearts, like Christie’s Ten Little Indians… and finally there will be nobody to post any comment ! Aaaah, now that would be your worst nightmare, hmmm ? (… thanks for that, Alice !)

      Speaking about Alice… god, she was great facing this insufferable Daphne, I was all applauses in my seat far behind ! “I am your worst nightmare”… yeah, go !!
      Now, tell me, I bet you met a lot of sweet naïve Melanie and irritating Daphne in your artistic life, didn’t you ? Between Stanislavsky and Eve Arrington’s methods, hmm ?
      (Well, perhaps your Daphne isn’t such a bad girl, after all… wait and see ! And I like very much this gentle little Melanie, there’s something both funny and touching about her.)

      Yesterday, you made me painfully relate to Tina’s test and today, it was like if I shared Bette’s breaking down… Only the best authors are able to do that to their readers. That’s for you – and you know I mean it.

      Finally, last but not least : your last line just got me… That’s pure romantic drama’s essence ! I melt once more – …surprise ? Of course not !

      Now you learned to us that “everything in New York is by yelling”, I’ll use this method with you to beg an other chapter : PLEEEEEAAAASE !!!!! (… is it yelling enough ??)

    40. Flair,Flair,Flair. I think you actually almost rendered me speechless. I just had to take a peek to see if you had posted before I try to do some work. Now I’ll be anticipating your next update all day. You just keep getting better and better. “I think I know the lines”. Lets hope Bette takes the part, then ooooooooooooooooooooh I can’t wait. Fantastic as usual, please post again before end of day.

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