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    Brief Encounter Chapter 21

    Previously on Brief Encounter (imagine it’s JB’s voice just like on tv)

     

    I heard a muffle at the other end.  I sniffled and wiped the tears.  I cleared my throat while trying to sound casual.

     

    Bette:  Sorry I can’t hear you.  You’re going to have to speak up.  Hello?

     

    I heard an indistinct sound. 

     

    Bette:  I still can’t hear you.  Please speak up (I pressed my cell to my ear to listen closely)

     

    And then there it was a familiar voice whispering groggily calling out my name

     

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    Voice at the end:  Bette

     

    Oh my god oh my ***** god  Could it be?

     

    Voice:  Bette Bette

     

    Bette:  He Hello? 

     

    Voice:  Bette?

     

    Bette:  This is  This is she

     

    Voice:  It is you

     

    Bette:  Umm Yeah.  Is that Is that you?

     

    Voice:  Bette I, yeah it is me

     

    Bette:  Oh my god my ***** god!   It is you!

     

    Voice:  Bette  Where are you?  Are you okay?

     

    Bette:  I’m in LA  I’m at

     

    Voice:  I know… I know you’re there

     

    Bette:  You do?

     

    Voice:  Yes I do  I’m just I don’t

     

    Bette:  How do you?  I mean, why are you?

     

    Voice:  I don’t know why I’m calling I mean

     

    Bette:  No, no it’s ok I wasn’t. 

     

    Voice:  Are you busy?  Am I interrupting you? 

     

    Bette:  That’s not important.  Where are you now?

     

    Voice:  I’m in New York to see youbut you’re in LA

     

    Bette:  You’re in New York?

     

    Voice:  Yes Betteand (lines crackled)…I’m flying to LA (crackles) tomorrow morning.

     

    Bette:  What?  No… Don’t come here.  I’m flying back to New York tomorrow night.  I’ll see you there  Please?

     

    Voice:  But, I’d rather see you there Bette

     

    Bette:  No really, I will see you tomorrow in New York; I haven’t seen you in like

     

    Voice:  I know

     

    We both fell silent; both not knowing what to say to each other.  All I know is that I need to talk to her.  I need to tell her things I should have.  I shouldn’t have let things go out of hands.  I need to tell her the truth.  And if not soon I don’t think I might be able to.  I was just thinking about it a few minutes ago with Shane.  And when the opportunity shows itself, I’m usually not one to back away.  I am, after all, Elizabeth Porter, no matter how much had changed.

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    Comments

    1. Hey Thumbs I thought you already out of the Blue LOL! Thank Gosh your Back it’s been a while you know that too LOL! It’s really glad that your writing back your been missed your Story and you know your fanfic fan Always here to read your Awesome Story Hey I still Love it Please don’t take another month to post this again LOL! Thanks Please continue post SOON.

    2. *singing*:
      Guess who’s back, back again??
      YES it’s Thumbs, with an update..

      =D i’m so glad u posted again, see you brought me back to life LOL.. and i love you so much right now for not leaving u hanging with a clif hanger..
      But u really know how to take me to the edge of my seat, i was reading and waiting for Tina’s name to appear on my screen, then TAADAA, there is was.. *jumpin’* YES YES YEEEEEEEEESSSS..

    3. Phew….good, it was Tina! The build-up to their meeting is good, too good; I’m a little nervous; a little fearful of what impending doom you may have in store for our heros!

      Would it be too much to beg that we don’t have to wait another month for another post? (hee-hee)

      Thanks for sharing your ideas on Bette and Tina. **smiling**

    4. AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Get my girls together. Thumbs!!!!!!!!! What’s up?!?!?!?!?! Man this was great, I NEED another post SOON!! You’re so sweet, you’re a star!!!!!!

    5. Ok Thumbs… so glad it was tina… now get them together… so has anybody figured out that the reason bette is in LA is because tina was in NY… that BITCH HELLY strikes again… so will bette or tina figure it out…. love this please don’t stay away so long

    6. Welcome back.life gets in the way sometimes So glad it was Tina. Lets see if love goes onafter 3 yrs. They have miss each other in traveling. THANKS

    7. Dude!!! wow you have me all warm and fuzzy now, are you sure your str8?? Just kidding LOL damm so what up girl, fuck what ya been doing, hmm maybe I don’t want to know the answer to that. OH say HI to your bf for me. LMAO

      OK lets get to this story: first why hasn’t shane bitch slap bette yet, I’m like damm it took this whole fucking chappy to get to know who was on the phone. Anyways like I didn’t know but maybe some of the peeps didn’t know??

      alright, well they must not have lives cause that a whole lot of time sitting in the fucking planes. I’ll fly to you no I’ll fly to you. WTF just meet in the middle
      Shane just wants to be there so see can see how B&T get down, maybe shane could help them you know maybe give them some pointers. I have shit load more to say, but I have to wait for the shock of you posting to work it’s way out of my system. So I just might come back and comment again.

      Take care, and bring me back something would ya.
      PEACE OUT!!

    8. Well, well, well….its so cool to see an update from you! Finally they are going to talk! Unless of course Bette gets cold feet and flies back to NY. Nah, you wouldn’t do that, would you?

    9. This has been a favorite of mine for awhile.I am glad updated the story.The cell conversation was great.Loved it.Bette and Tina need to be together.

    10. Yipeeee!!!! Woo-woo-woo!!!! Thumbs is here!!!! Hey, I was so confused at first, though…major brain fart! I had to go back to your previous post just to make sure that I hadn’t missed something…cause surely you couldn’t have gone a whole frickin’ month without putting up a chapter! :o! He he! I love this story and I hopw you post again soon!!! Thanks.

    11. ok first dont you dare make more mess between these two..is time to start to be together and try to work things out NO MORE DRAMA..lol..second..if you want some other words i have to tell in person for you..lol..amazing chapter T as always and please post soon.. dont be so lazy..lol.. :o)

    12. woo hooooooooooooooo!! you are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yeahhh..sorry i’m kinda late to catch up. but hey,here i am! this is juz great..B&T get to meet finally!!! ok ok..i’m gonna read the next chapter now!

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