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Brief Encounter Chapter 21
Do I need to tell Shane? Do I have to burden her with my problem? After all this time? She’s been there for me and I don’t want to burden her with any of my problems
Shane: Bette?
Bette: Yeah?
Shane: What is up with you? You can talk to me Bette. Tonight, now, tomorrow and whenever. I will always be here for you, just like you have always been there for me.
Bette: Thank you Shane. I’m just
Shane: Yeah?
Bette: The person who rang me it wasn’t work.
Shane: Who was it then?
Should I tell her? Should I tell her who it was?
Shane: Bette?
What if I tell her and then what? Would she expect us to get back together?
Shane: Bette? Are you ok?
I would love nothing more than to be given a chance to but
Shane: Bette, who was it?
Bette: Huh?
Shane: I’m sorry I’m not usually like this pushing you to tell me things I mean
Shane and I laughed a little. God I love Shane. She always has ways to brighten up my mood.
Bette: I know Shane but I’m just ok. Do you really wanna know who it was?
Shane: I don’t wanna push. You know that’s not my style But I’m here if you wanna talk to me I mean only if you’d tell me
Bette: Thank you Shane.
Shane: Not a problem
I gave Shane a hug and squeezed her hands in appreciation.
Bette: It was her Shane.
Shane: Huh?
Bette: Yeah her
Shane looked at me and scratched her head looking very confused.
Shane: Her?
Bette: Yeah HER No not Mel. It was Tina.
Shane looked at me. Her eyes unblinking. She must be as shocked as I was. Have I made a mistake by telling Shane? This is not the reaction I wanted.
Shane: I know it’s not Mel Bette.
Bette: What? How did you NEVERMIND
I guess Yoda will always be Yoda. Shane’s mouth suddenly turned into a huge smile.
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Hey Thumbs I thought you already out of the Blue LOL! Thank Gosh your Back it’s been a while you know that too LOL! It’s really glad that your writing back your been missed your Story and you know your fanfic fan Always here to read your Awesome Story Hey I still Love it Please don’t take another month to post this again LOL! Thanks Please continue post SOON.
*singing*:
Guess who’s back, back again??
YES it’s Thumbs, with an update..
=D i’m so glad u posted again, see you brought me back to life LOL.. and i love you so much right now for not leaving u hanging with a clif hanger..
But u really know how to take me to the edge of my seat, i was reading and waiting for Tina’s name to appear on my screen, then TAADAA, there is was.. *jumpin’* YES YES YEEEEEEEEESSSS..
Nice to see you back Thumbs!! I cant wait to see how Bette will react when she sees her love after three years ;) Its about time!! Post soon!.
WB T! I love your story. cant wait for B&T to meet. should be some great drama. later T
Phew….good, it was Tina! The build-up to their meeting is good, too good; I’m a little nervous; a little fearful of what impending doom you may have in store for our heros!
Would it be too much to beg that we don’t have to wait another month for another post? (hee-hee)
Thanks for sharing your ideas on Bette and Tina. **smiling**
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Get my girls together. Thumbs!!!!!!!!! What’s up?!?!?!?!?! Man this was great, I NEED another post SOON!! You’re so sweet, you’re a star!!!!!!
Ok Thumbs… so glad it was tina… now get them together… so has anybody figured out that the reason bette is in LA is because tina was in NY… that BITCH HELLY strikes again… so will bette or tina figure it out…. love this please don’t stay away so long
Welcome back.life gets in the way sometimes So glad it was Tina. Lets see if love goes onafter 3 yrs. They have miss each other in traveling. THANKS
Dude!!! wow you have me all warm and fuzzy now, are you sure your str8?? Just kidding LOL damm so what up girl, fuck what ya been doing, hmm maybe I don’t want to know the answer to that. OH say HI to your bf for me. LMAO
OK lets get to this story: first why hasn’t shane bitch slap bette yet, I’m like damm it took this whole fucking chappy to get to know who was on the phone. Anyways like I didn’t know but maybe some of the peeps didn’t know??
alright, well they must not have lives cause that a whole lot of time sitting in the fucking planes. I’ll fly to you no I’ll fly to you. WTF just meet in the middle
Shane just wants to be there so see can see how B&T get down, maybe shane could help them you know maybe give them some pointers. I have shit load more to say, but I have to wait for the shock of you posting to work it’s way out of my system. So I just might come back and comment again.
Take care, and bring me back something would ya.
PEACE OUT!!
Wellits about feking time u posted u big dyke. Loved it T. Hope u enjoyed your trip .
Well, well, well….its so cool to see an update from you! Finally they are going to talk! Unless of course Bette gets cold feet and flies back to NY. Nah, you wouldn’t do that, would you?
This has been a favorite of mine for awhile.I am glad updated the story.The cell conversation was great.Loved it.Bette and Tina need to be together.
Yipeeee!!!! Woo-woo-woo!!!! Thumbs is here!!!! Hey, I was so confused at first, though…major brain fart! I had to go back to your previous post just to make sure that I hadn’t missed something…cause surely you couldn’t have gone a whole frickin’ month without putting up a chapter! :o! He he! I love this story and I hopw you post again soon!!! Thanks.
ok first dont you dare make more mess between these two..is time to start to be together and try to work things out NO MORE DRAMA..lol..second..if you want some other words i have to tell in person for you..lol..amazing chapter T as always and please post soon.. dont be so lazy..lol.. :o)
hey – you’re back! great to see your name. When did Shane and Alice realize Tina went there? Did they see her at the Gallery?
woo hooooooooooooooo!! you are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yeahhh..sorry i’m kinda late to catch up. but hey,here i am! this is juz great..B&T get to meet finally!!! ok ok..i’m gonna read the next chapter now!
Yah you back and I’m glad you make my wish come true, thank you. Ok now let see about Bette and Tina meet again tomorrow. Post soon, thanks!