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Almost Here Chapter 1
No, Alice. You are not going to falter. This is it. This time, you’re going to pack up all your things. Once and for all. And maybe, clean up those damned coffee stains.
‘What is this?’ There was a post-it note with a hand-written message on a lettuce-green, frilly top of hers. It was Dana’s distinctively neat handwriting.
‘Please return me to the organic food produce section where I really belong. Thank you.’
‘You look like a walking Caesar’s salad, Al!’
‘I like this top!’
‘Why does it have to be so leafy?’ Pinching one of the leaves between her index finger and thumb, Dana’s eyebrows knitted together in a mixed expression of disgust and bewilderment.
‘So will you not wear it again?’ Dana said in a child-like voice.
‘Yes baby. I won’t wear it again.’ Pausing for a split second, she continued ‘Well at least not when I’m out with you.’
‘You horrible vegetable monster!’ Dana said in her most menacing voice, as she proceeded to tickle
Peeling the post-it off gently,
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(33 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
i love the flashbacks they are so danish! you are a great writer
Well I’m hooked! Great job, I really loved it, and that says a lot for me cos i’m more of a TiBette fic girl. But..good job! please continue!
I agree with Minna, always hope for Danish :D I like the 2nd part a lot, really gives insight into Alice’s reasons, lets hope Dana understands.
I really like it, loved the post-it notes on that lettuce shirt and on the tube that wasn’t the toothpaste (and on the forehead of course!) I never quite get the logic of breaking up with someone so you can stay together in the long run, but I’m sure Alice will convince me (and Dana) in Chapter 2. Great start mud!
Hey my favorite Housefly! Beautifully written, I’m so happy you’ve decided to write. I think I’m gonna start sticking post it notes everywhere and I blame you.
good story , you’re an ecellent writer. I love the post it notes too, so cute!
I said it before and I say it now: although this is full of angst there’s still hope for Danish. Alice clearly loves Dana and it doesn’t matter if you bring them back together or not.. there’s still the possibility to them to be together again. loving this! *5*