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Almost Here Chapter 1
This morning, she had woken up and dragged herself to the bathroom half-asleep. When she opened her heavy-lidded eyes, there was a creature sporting a horrendous bed-head and a bright yellow Post-it stuck on its forehead staring at her from the mirror.
‘What the’
Whatever annoyance she was feeling disappeared immediately as she read what was on the paper.
‘I kissed you here.’ Followed by a huge smiley face and a pink heart.
Grinning from ear to ear,
‘Al. This is NOT toothpaste.’
Over the past 6 months, Dana had taken such good care of her. No one had ever, ever cared for her so much. And she knew, deep down in her heart, that Dana loved her truly. That she, Alice Pieszecki, was the woman of Dana’s affections, and the amount of love Dana had for her, was more than the love Dana had for tennis, more than the love Dana had for her own family, more than the love Dana had or would have for anyone in the past or future. She knew all of that, but her mind was already made up. In fact, it was made up two months ago. Just that she could not bear to go ahead with it. She didn’t want to let go, she would never want to let go of Dana, but this wasn’t a matter of choice. It would do the both of them good. At least she hoped it would.
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(33 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
i love the flashbacks they are so danish! you are a great writer
Well I’m hooked! Great job, I really loved it, and that says a lot for me cos i’m more of a TiBette fic girl. But..good job! please continue!
I agree with Minna, always hope for Danish :D I like the 2nd part a lot, really gives insight into Alice’s reasons, lets hope Dana understands.
I really like it, loved the post-it notes on that lettuce shirt and on the tube that wasn’t the toothpaste (and on the forehead of course!) I never quite get the logic of breaking up with someone so you can stay together in the long run, but I’m sure Alice will convince me (and Dana) in Chapter 2. Great start mud!
Hey my favorite Housefly! Beautifully written, I’m so happy you’ve decided to write. I think I’m gonna start sticking post it notes everywhere and I blame you.
good story , you’re an ecellent writer. I love the post it notes too, so cute!
I said it before and I say it now: although this is full of angst there’s still hope for Danish. Alice clearly loves Dana and it doesn’t matter if you bring them back together or not.. there’s still the possibility to them to be together again. loving this! *5*