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    God she’s beautiful chpt. 7

    Story written on September 7, 2005 by vakkav.
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    A Bette and Tina beginning VAKKAV’s version


    Bette walks back towards her office and closes the door…She is upset and she is sad because she has to wait a whole 2 days to see her angel again…She feels like a leaf in the wind being blown from end to end waiting patiently and wanting to see Tina Kennard all over again…

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    DAY 4 THAT EVENING…

    Bette arrives home to her empty house…She places her bags on the desk…She noitices the light on the answering machine is blinking…As she gets closer she realizes that she has 3 new messages…Before she listens to them she changes her clothes…She makes her way into the kitchen and pours herself a glass of wine…The brunette heads into the livingroom and presses the button on the machine…She haves a seat on the couch and listens…

    <beep> Message on Monday June 4 12:45 p.m.<beep> Hey Bette’s it me Kit. I wanted to let you know that I will coming to town in a couple of days. This might seem like alot to you but I need a place to stay for a couple of days. I am sorry that it’s on such short notice but I don’t have no where else to go. Maybe when I get there we can go and hang out. Maybe at a club or something. You pick my treat. I love you. Bye <beep> Monday June 4 5:00 p.m.<beep> Hey Bette it’s me Alice. Why are you avoiding my call. I am worried about you know. Now call me back please. I atleast want to make sure that your alive. Call me back I’m waiting by the phone. Bye<beep>Monday June 4 6:00 p.m.<beep> <click><beep> End of messages<beep>

    Bette: What the *****?

    Bette gets off the couch…She walks over to the device and presses the button

    <beep> No new messages

    Bette places the glass on the desk…She retrieves her cellphone and she calls Alice

    Alice: Where the ***** have you been?

    Bette: Out

    Alice: Just out huh?

    Bette: That’s it

    Alice: Well did you know that your friend was worried sick about you?

    Bette: Why? I am grown Alice I can take care of myself

    Alice: Well it’s funny that you said that because you called me moping and groping

    Bette: I’m sorry next time I won’t call at all

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    9. oh good. an alice thats not a psycho, stalking, book writing, pootie chasing, nympho all up in bette. how refreshing. tina shooting pics. this is working out nicely. thanks.

    10. Just caught up with the last four chapters. Still lovin this story. Its so cute how you get them just close enough and then something always comes up. But I so can’t wait till they actually get together, there just too cute.

    12. Why am I feeling Alice as Cyrano? I think she has an unrequited love for
      Bette.

      The Tina/Eric relationship is a mystery. She certainly has a lot of free time on her hands. Don’t sleep, Eric!

      I like the details about setting up the new gallery, wooing artists, etc. Those help create a true sense of time and place, making the art industry more than a trendy notion. Sometimes in other stories the lack of detail can make Bette seem like a well-dressed fashion paper doll rather than an inspired career woman. Her work is a major part of her life, and you give it an equivalent portion of your story. Jennifer Beals made the comment that onf of the challenges in her portrayal of Bette was to inform herself about being an museum director. I think you’ve got a good handle on it.

      Thanks!

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