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    God she’s beautiful chpt. 7

    Story written on September 7, 2005 by vakkav.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56494
    Author Notes:

    A Bette and Tina beginning VAKKAV’s version

    Bette sits in the chair

    Alice: Bette that was mean

    Bette: I’m sorry I’m just upset

    Alice: I know but by taking it out on your friend won’t help

    Bette: That’s true. Do you accept my apology?

    Alice: I do as long as it doesn’t happen again

    Bette: It won’t

    Alice: Ok now what happened with the artist from earlier?

    Bette: He bailed

    Alice: No way

    Bette: Yes he bailed just before I had gotten there

    Alice: What a bummer

    Bette: Tell me about it. We were both just getting to a deep converation when my cellphone went off

    Alice: You shouldn’t have answered it

    Bette: This is my job Alice. It’s my career basiaclly. I can’t just not answer my phone

    Alice: What could a missed call do?

    Bette: Alot like lose your clients. You should know this

    Alice:I just think that you have to take risks sometime. What kills you only make you stronger. They were capable of handling it. I mean you didn’t hire them for no reason. You are the boss Bette. I just wish that things would have went better between you too

    Bette: Me too. I haven’t felt this way before Alice. That’s how I know that what I’m feeling is real. Have you ever been next to someone but wanted to touch them and couldn’t better yet kiss them but you just couldn’t? I mean you would give anything for me to give you the time of day just to show them that it was worth the risk

    Alice: Yeah all the time. The reason why I don’t take it is because I’m scared

    Bette: Scared of what?

    Alice: Love

    Bette: No way. How come you never told me?

    Alice: It’s embarassing. I guess the truth comes out when you drink huh?

    Bette laughs

    Bette: That’s right. But how will you know how it feels if you don’t try it. You must atleast test it out and see what the feeling brings on. You never know it might broaden your horizon a bit

    Alice laughs

    Alice: Enough with all the mushy stuff. Now what are we going to do with you young lady?

    Bette: I don’t know but I sure hope that whatever it is it comes sooner than later

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    9. oh good. an alice thats not a psycho, stalking, book writing, pootie chasing, nympho all up in bette. how refreshing. tina shooting pics. this is working out nicely. thanks.

    10. Just caught up with the last four chapters. Still lovin this story. Its so cute how you get them just close enough and then something always comes up. But I so can’t wait till they actually get together, there just too cute.

    12. Why am I feeling Alice as Cyrano? I think she has an unrequited love for
      Bette.

      The Tina/Eric relationship is a mystery. She certainly has a lot of free time on her hands. Don’t sleep, Eric!

      I like the details about setting up the new gallery, wooing artists, etc. Those help create a true sense of time and place, making the art industry more than a trendy notion. Sometimes in other stories the lack of detail can make Bette seem like a well-dressed fashion paper doll rather than an inspired career woman. Her work is a major part of her life, and you give it an equivalent portion of your story. Jennifer Beals made the comment that onf of the challenges in her portrayal of Bette was to inform herself about being an museum director. I think you’ve got a good handle on it.

      Thanks!

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