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    God she’s beautiful chpt. 7

    Story written on September 7, 2005 by vakkav.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56494
    Author Notes:

    A Bette and Tina beginning VAKKAV’s version

    Bette: Come in

    The opens…

    James: Bette there is a woman here to see you?

    Bette smles

    Bette: She is where is she?

    James: She’s in the lobby

    Bette thinks about her reactions and decides to calm down

    Bette: Who is it?

    James: Alice Pie-

    Bette: I know who she is could you send her back please

    James: Will do

    Bette turns towards the window in her office…She peers out viewing the outside…The woman enters the office

    Tina: Boy are you happy to see me?

    Bette smiles at the sound of the voice…She turns around slowly and blushes

    Bette: Tina. My god how did you know I was here

    Tina: You can thank Alice for that one

    Bette: She called you

    Tina: Yes. She called me in for my first assignment

    Bette: And what is that?

    Tina reveals the black camera…Bette smiles

    Bette: Your kidding right?

    Tina: I’m kidding

    Tina makes a straight face and so does Bette

    Tina: No I’m not serious I’ll be working here for the next couple of weeks. I got the job.

    Bette: Congratulations

    Tina walks closer to Bette….

    Tina: Not only do I develop photos

    Tina raises the camera to Bette’s face…She snaps a picture

    Tina: I shoot them too

    Bette smiles…Tina looks at her and Bette looks at her too…The blond steps closer and closer…Tina leans into Bette…She moves closer and closer…Bette grabs her

    Bette: Not yet. Not like this. Ok?

    Tina nods her head

    Bette: Your not ready

    Tina: How did you know?

    Bette: I can see it in your eyes. You reacted in instinct not from here

    Bette places her hand over Tina’s heart..

    James: Bette

    Both women jump…Bette looks up at James

    James: We need Ms. Kennard in the lobby

    Bette looks at Tina

    Tina: I’ll see you around

    Bette: Alright

    Tina backs away from the brunette…She turns around and looks at her one last time before she follow James out the door…When she was out of sight Bette exhaled…The temptation and the heat just rose over 104 degrees…In the heat you sweat severally…She thinks to herslf about how it would feel to work around her…She knew that she wasn’t ready and that is fine…But what she didn’t know was when and would it actually be worth taking…The days until the gallery opens will tell her alot and possibly give her a sign…A good one she hoped…She sctually felt bad about breaking up the happy home…But what she didn’t understand was if she too was acting on instict…It couldn’t be because her feelings came from the heart…She thought as too how she could ever look Eric in the face…Then again Tina is and adult…It’s not like she was married…She was available like the next person passing by in the wind…She thought some more before taking off that day and she dreamed of Tina that night…

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    9. oh good. an alice thats not a psycho, stalking, book writing, pootie chasing, nympho all up in bette. how refreshing. tina shooting pics. this is working out nicely. thanks.

    10. Just caught up with the last four chapters. Still lovin this story. Its so cute how you get them just close enough and then something always comes up. But I so can’t wait till they actually get together, there just too cute.

    12. Why am I feeling Alice as Cyrano? I think she has an unrequited love for
      Bette.

      The Tina/Eric relationship is a mystery. She certainly has a lot of free time on her hands. Don’t sleep, Eric!

      I like the details about setting up the new gallery, wooing artists, etc. Those help create a true sense of time and place, making the art industry more than a trendy notion. Sometimes in other stories the lack of detail can make Bette seem like a well-dressed fashion paper doll rather than an inspired career woman. Her work is a major part of her life, and you give it an equivalent portion of your story. Jennifer Beals made the comment that onf of the challenges in her portrayal of Bette was to inform herself about being an museum director. I think you’ve got a good handle on it.

      Thanks!

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