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    God she’s beautiful chpt. 7

    Story written on September 7, 2005 by vakkav.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56494
    Author Notes:

    A Bette and Tina beginning VAKKAV’s version

    Alice: It will trust me

    Bette and Alice continue to talk and express their feelings about life and love…They both end their night through laughter and past stories….

    DAY 5

    Bette is up and ready for work…Before she heads to her gallery she stops by the planet and grabs a cup of coffee and a bagel…

    Marina: Bette

    Bette turns around

    Bette: Hey Marina

    Marina: Hey whatever happened with the ***** blond?

    Bette: Nothing we still talk. Why?

    Marina: Well we are all hanging out tomorrow at LIDS why don’t you see could she join you? Alice and Dana are going together and Shane is coming with someone. Why dodn’t you bring her?

    Bette: I don’t think that would be possible

    Marina: Well have you called her and asked her?

    Bette: No. You see-

    A woman comes up behind Marina and taps her on the shoulder…Marina turns around

    Marina: Yes

    Woman: The alarm is going off in the back. You have to reset it

    Marina: Ok thanks

    Marina turns back to Bette

    Marina: Bring her

    Bette: But-

    Marina: Shhh bring her. I gotta go

    Marina heads to the rear of the building…Bette exits the planet annoyed…She drives out heading toward her gallery…She pulls up in front in her usual spot…The day feels dry with alot of heat…She makes her way up the stairs into her gallery…She is greeted by Heidi and James…

    Heidi: Good morning Bette

    Bette: Good morning

    James: Good morning Bette

    Bette: Good morning. What’s up for today?

    Heidi: Well for starters you have a couple appointments and you must pick out the design layout for the opening.

    Bette: Where is the layout?

    James passes the board to Heidi who passes it to Bette

    Heidi: Here you go

    Bette: Thanks

    Heidi: Why don’t you take your time deciding and James and I will get started picking the furniture for the evening

    Bette: Oh and Heidi

    Heidi: Yes

    Bette: Suprise me

    Heidi smiles

    Heidi: I will

    Bette: I’m in my office if you need me

    Heidi: Sure thing

    Bette makes her way down the hall into her office…She takes a seat on the floor and patiently picks out her layouts for the opening…She is excited as she picks what she likes…There is a knock at the door…Bette stands and fixes her clothing

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    9. oh good. an alice thats not a psycho, stalking, book writing, pootie chasing, nympho all up in bette. how refreshing. tina shooting pics. this is working out nicely. thanks.

    10. Just caught up with the last four chapters. Still lovin this story. Its so cute how you get them just close enough and then something always comes up. But I so can’t wait till they actually get together, there just too cute.

    12. Why am I feeling Alice as Cyrano? I think she has an unrequited love for
      Bette.

      The Tina/Eric relationship is a mystery. She certainly has a lot of free time on her hands. Don’t sleep, Eric!

      I like the details about setting up the new gallery, wooing artists, etc. Those help create a true sense of time and place, making the art industry more than a trendy notion. Sometimes in other stories the lack of detail can make Bette seem like a well-dressed fashion paper doll rather than an inspired career woman. Her work is a major part of her life, and you give it an equivalent portion of your story. Jennifer Beals made the comment that onf of the challenges in her portrayal of Bette was to inform herself about being an museum director. I think you’ve got a good handle on it.

      Thanks!

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