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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 4
LATER THAT NIGHT
Alice was actually feeling a little better tonight, between the three medications she was feeling no pain, actually numb would better describe the way she felt, and at this time numb was feeling pretty good. The group had left around 10 that night, so between running to the doctor’s, her bath, the visits, and her wonderful meds, she thought tonight she would be able to get a good night’s sleep.
Though she was having trouble keeping her eyes open, she still would notice Dana every now and then coming into her room, and after about the fourth time of her noticing Dana, and wondering how many times she hadn’t noticed, she finely called Dana into her room. “Dana please just come to bed already, I’ll probably need my nightmare slayer tonight anyway.”
Dana was grateful that Alice had given her an in, so she could sleep in her room. She had planned to crawl in bed with her once she had fallen to sleep, and slip out before she woke up, but it was obvious Alice was wise to her. As Dana was crawling into bed Alice decided to start treading lightly in to a subject she knew Dana wasn’t ready to hear about. “Dana, I really think we need to address this need you have to be with me all the time. Don’t get me wrong, I love having you around. Plus you’re best pillow slash nightmare slayer I’ve ever had. But you know you can’t keep this up?” Dana moved closer to Alice, once again placing her arm around Alice’s waist. When Alice entwined their fingers, Dana reached up and kissed the back of Alice’s head. “I know, just until you’re OK.” As Dana was drifting off to sleep she heard Alice say. “Dana, I am OK.”
NEXT MORNING
Dana could not believe how upset she was at Alice, Alice had put her foot down and told Dana she didn’t want to see her for at least two hours, three would be even better. She wanted her to go workout, or what ever, just as she put it “get out of the ***** house.” She was a grown women, she was a professional athlete, she knew when she needed to work out. And she was mad as ***** that Alice was being like this.
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(18 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
i love it and please keep writing you are amazing deb!!
this story hits close to home. Thanks for the update.
This story is very touching in a lot
of ways. It’s horrible to visualize
what was done to Alice but I believe
you have written very well. Not over
the top! I am glad the next chapters
will be happy ones for the Danish!
Jesus Christ! Poor girls:( They better catch those bastards, i cant see them in so much pain. At least they have great friends:) Amazing story Deb…good as always…hopefully ur next chapter will be up in a bit:D
great I can’t wait to read the rest to see how they both deal with this as this is something that i would not wish on anyone but it dose happen and it is good to address the issue please post again very soon I love all your storys to date that I have read
hi there, i agree with you totally about alice’s character, the “im ok and can handle anything syndrome” because its me too. The story is great .. post soon please.
This is a great story. Thank you.
i am in such denial…i found myself focusing on the whole ‘couples’ therapy and their pending relationship, romantic angle rather then looking too close at the pain. so i made myself go back and read it again. as i said after the last chapter, i think this is your best work so far.
Deb, I am luving u man…this is sum deep shit..they r lving in deep shit..but im an optimist & im thinking it’ll get better.i Luv it..please continue soon…thnk you 4 writing this piece..Post s00n..
Deb, this is your best work to date. It’s so painfully real and addressed an important issue that society has turned a blind eye to. Thank you for writing this.
wonderful chapter, and i agree on your view of Alice. I’m glad things will get better for them, keep going, it’s brilliant.