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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 4
Dana had agreed to go workout for two hours, then she would head home, shower and they would have time to make it to the couples therapist, which of course Dana still thought was silly. She didn’t mind a therapist, she just didn’t see the point of a couples therapist.
Alice for her part promised she would not go anywhere and she would keep her cell phone right beside her, so if Dana felt the need to call, Alice could answer immediately. Plus Alice personally made sure Dana’s ringers on both her home phone and her cell phone were turned back on.
Alice was feeling pretty good about the day ahead. She noticed when she got up this morning most of the swelling around her eyes and nose was gone. Her eyes were mainly black, and greenish now, which really was an improvement to the red, purple, and yellow color they had been on the previous days. She could almost see the healing starting. Plus her ribs were only mildly sore, granted she was taking pain medication four times a day. But she wasn’t hurting and that was all that mattered.
So all in all Alice was feeling pretty good about the day.
As she sat there reading the paper and drinking her coffee, everything came crashing down. In the local section of the paper there was an article about a murder the night before. Now granted there were murders almost everyday in LA, but this murder happened outside the new Lipstick lounge. Though the article didn’t say much, Alice knew. The Lipstick lounge was becoming one of the most popular ***** bars is West Hollywood. And the victim was a 26 year old, female banker who was leaving the bar with her companion. It said they were assaulted, before the perpetrators killed one of the women. The article said nothing about a robbery or domestic violence, only they were assaulted before they killed her. Though the article didn’t say it was anything about it being a hate crime, Alice knew, and though the article didn’t say anything about it being the same men, Alice just knew.
When Dana walked into her kitchen and saw the coffee dripping from the wall, with one of her coffee cups broken on the floor below it. Then noticed Alice by the table, huddled in a ball crying. She knew.
Alice’s world had just come crashing down.
TBC
Guys don’t have a lot to say after this chapter, other then it will start to get better for them.
Alice still has a lot to confront. I know, I know I always make Alice a little fragile. But I don’t know, I think there is a lot about Alice, that the L Word writers haven’t shown us yet. I think under all her compassion, sweetness, funniness and “I’ve got it all together act” is a very fragile person, who is waiting for that one person to love her. But then maybe we all are. Deb
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(18 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
i love it and please keep writing you are amazing deb!!
this story hits close to home. Thanks for the update.
This story is very touching in a lot
of ways. It’s horrible to visualize
what was done to Alice but I believe
you have written very well. Not over
the top! I am glad the next chapters
will be happy ones for the Danish!
Jesus Christ! Poor girls:( They better catch those bastards, i cant see them in so much pain. At least they have great friends:) Amazing story Deb…good as always…hopefully ur next chapter will be up in a bit:D
great I can’t wait to read the rest to see how they both deal with this as this is something that i would not wish on anyone but it dose happen and it is good to address the issue please post again very soon I love all your storys to date that I have read
hi there, i agree with you totally about alice’s character, the “im ok and can handle anything syndrome” because its me too. The story is great .. post soon please.
This is a great story. Thank you.
i am in such denial…i found myself focusing on the whole ‘couples’ therapy and their pending relationship, romantic angle rather then looking too close at the pain. so i made myself go back and read it again. as i said after the last chapter, i think this is your best work so far.
Deb, I am luving u man…this is sum deep shit..they r lving in deep shit..but im an optimist & im thinking it’ll get better.i Luv it..please continue soon…thnk you 4 writing this piece..Post s00n..
Deb, this is your best work to date. It’s so painfully real and addressed an important issue that society has turned a blind eye to. Thank you for writing this.
wonderful chapter, and i agree on your view of Alice. I’m glad things will get better for them, keep going, it’s brilliant.