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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 4
As Dana laced up her shoes she yelled at Alice. “I getting out of the ***** house, are you happy.” Dana also made a point of slamming the door as she left not caring what her neighbors thought.
Alice stepped out of her bedroom after hearing Dana slamming the door. That was hard, she thought to herself, but she knew Dana needed to start learning to be away for her. Tournament season was about to start, and if Dana didn’t get over this separation anxiety, it was going start interfering with her career. Funny thing was if it was up to Alice, she wouldn’t mind having Dana around 24/7, and Dana was probably the only person she felt that way about. But unlike Dana, she knew the road the two of them were taking was unrealistic and probably unhealthy.
COUNTRY CLUB TENNIS COURTS
Dana made a point of being gone four hours, just to show Alice she could do it. It was hard because after the first hour all she really wanted to do was go home. The first hour at the club, she spent hitting tennis balls, hitting them as hard as she could. This helped her get a lot of the anger she was carrying out, but after the release of anger and adrenaline, she could feel the anxiety coming back.
She sat down on the bench on the edge of the court and tried to reason with herself what was going on in her head. She knew Alice was OK, she looked like *****, but she really was OK. She also knew she needed to continue with her own life, but at the present time, it really was hard for her to stay focused on anything other then Alice. She didn’t understand why everyone was pushing her away from Alice. It had only been a few days since the beating, they just needed to give her time to get over it, plus this wasn’t about her this was about Alice.
And then she thought about Alice. She knew some of her problems was the fact that as she stood there watching Alice being beaten the other night, she realized she felt like she was dying, along with her. She didn’t know if she would ever get the image out of her head of Alice curled in a ball, as the man continued to kick her. He just kept kicking her, no matter how much she cried or begged, he just kept kicking Alice. And she could do nothing, which upset Dana even more. She was fit, ***** she was an athlete, but all she could do was beg and cry. And had Shane not come by, Alice would be dead and all she could do was beg and cry. Dana reached up and wiped the tears that were forming in her eyes. She looked at her watch seeing she had let enough time pass. “***** this.” she said as she headed back to the club house so she could pick up her stuff and head back home.
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(18 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
i love it and please keep writing you are amazing deb!!
this story hits close to home. Thanks for the update.
This story is very touching in a lot
of ways. It’s horrible to visualize
what was done to Alice but I believe
you have written very well. Not over
the top! I am glad the next chapters
will be happy ones for the Danish!
Jesus Christ! Poor girls:( They better catch those bastards, i cant see them in so much pain. At least they have great friends:) Amazing story Deb…good as always…hopefully ur next chapter will be up in a bit:D
great I can’t wait to read the rest to see how they both deal with this as this is something that i would not wish on anyone but it dose happen and it is good to address the issue please post again very soon I love all your storys to date that I have read
hi there, i agree with you totally about alice’s character, the “im ok and can handle anything syndrome” because its me too. The story is great .. post soon please.
This is a great story. Thank you.
i am in such denial…i found myself focusing on the whole ‘couples’ therapy and their pending relationship, romantic angle rather then looking too close at the pain. so i made myself go back and read it again. as i said after the last chapter, i think this is your best work so far.
Deb, I am luving u man…this is sum deep shit..they r lving in deep shit..but im an optimist & im thinking it’ll get better.i Luv it..please continue soon…thnk you 4 writing this piece..Post s00n..
Deb, this is your best work to date. It’s so painfully real and addressed an important issue that society has turned a blind eye to. Thank you for writing this.
wonderful chapter, and i agree on your view of Alice. I’m glad things will get better for them, keep going, it’s brilliant.