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    Coming Back – Chapter 17

    Story written on October 14, 2005 by CraZyClo.
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    Give it all away (Finale)


    Previously


     

    Shane : Can you come sleep with me?

    Carmen : Yes, of course.


    She takes of her shoes and pants and come in the bed with Shane. She take Shane in her arms and put Shane ‘s head on her breast. Shane starts crying. A tear fall from Carmen’s eye.

     

     

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    SHANE AND MARINA’S HOUSE – MORNING

    10:39 AM



    Shane wakes up, she’s still in Carmen’s arms. Carmen is still asleep and Shane don’t want to wake her up. After a moment to figure out what happened for they ended up like that she starts crying.


    He raped me Did he ? It’s not clear I want a fix Everything is so blurry FIX He raped me. Carmen wasn’t there, when did she arrived ? .. FIX.. God! I need a fix Do I still have some in my bag ? Carmen I love you (she gets closer to Carmen) .. he raped me. FIX..FIX..


    She gets really lost in deep thoughts, so she haven’t notice that Carmen just woke up. Unconsciously Shane has some little spasms, she’s still thinking of her fix.


    Carmen : Hi.


    Shane gets back to Earth and tries to focus on Carmen.


    Shane : Hum.. hi.

    Carmen : You okay?

    Shane : Hurm.. yeah.


    Carmen takes Shane in her arms and hold her.


    Shane : Can I ask you a question ?

    Carmen : Yes of course.

    Shane : Wha what happened ?

    Carmen : You don’t remember ?

    Shane : I remember getting in the Planet, talking with Jeff, going out and making myself a fix,.. but everything after is kinda little blurry. I.. I think he raped me.


    Carmen looks at her stunned.


    Shane : Did he..?

    Carmen : Yes (murmured)


    Shane’s eyes becomes full of tears.


    Shane : Did he do something else ?

    Carmen : He beat you and I think he stole you ?

    Shane : Did I still have my stuff.. you know ?

    Carmen : Humm.. I.. I don’t know.


    Shane automatically gets up, she instantly falls back on the bed her ribs and her arm is too painful and she had totally forgot.


    Carmen : (worried) Are you okay ?

    Shane : mmmmmrrrr yeah. Umm.


    Carmen goes to help her getting out of bed.

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    1. Thanks for leavinf comments on your general appreciation of the whole story (17 chapters). I want to know how you feel about the story. Thanks for reading and commenting.

    3. Yes, it’s true “all good things must come to an end”. This was Sad and Beautiful. Thank you so very much for the wonderful story, I thoroyughly enjoyed it. I’ll pop over to Life.com and see what you plant there. GOOD LUCK IN YOUR FUTURE WRITINGS,as I know they too will be wonderful…Until we meet again..

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