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    Coming Back – Chapter 17

    Story written on October 14, 2005 by CraZyClo.
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    Give it all away (Finale)

    Shane : I’m sorry.

    Carmen : I love you Shane, I’ll always do.

    Shane : I love you too.


    Shane kisses Carmen. Both of them haven’t feel that good since the last time they were really together. A tear came out from Carmen’s eye.


    Carmen : I love you so much.

    Shane : I love you too.


    (Silence)


    Carmen : Can you please try to get some help.

    Shane : Don’t ask me that.. I don’t want to.

    Carmen : I love you I really do, but I want you to be there.. I mean mentally, when you’re with me.

    Shane : I can’t.

    Carmen : Why ? I mean.. if you love me..

    Shane : I can’t.


    Carmen gets up.


    Shane : What are you doing ?

    Carmen : I don’t wanna stay.. I mean.. you don’t want to do any efforts even if I tell you I’ll help you.

    Shane : You don’t understand.

    Carmen : Hoo.. yeah.. I do you love your ***** more that me.

    Shane : Ahhhrrrr.. (she gets up) ***** you stop being such a KID.

    Carmen : A KID A KID? I offer you my help and my heart and you spit on it because of your *****.

    Shane : ***** YOU !


    Carmen gets out of the room and goes in the living room. Shane sits on her bed and starts doing herself a fix. Instead of putting half of the stuff in the spoon, she puts it totally. She was so upset because of Carmen that she haven’t notice it. She takes the water from the old glass of water on her desk. In the meantime, Carmen is in the kitchen with Marina trying to explain to her how she wants to help Shane with her drug addiction. In Shane’s room, Shane is heating the substance with her lighter. After a while, she take her syringe and sucks all the liquid in it. She puts the spoon on the desk and with her tie, she wrap her arm. She take the syringe and slowly inserts it in her arm. Finally she pulls the syringe to let the liquid mix with the blood that is sucking out of her veins. She slowly press the button to let the mixture into the vein. Peaceful, she is feeling, for first time since yesterday. She slowly unwraps the tie from her arm to let the blood go in her entire body. She lets herself fall on her bed and closes her eyes.

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    1. Thanks for leavinf comments on your general appreciation of the whole story (17 chapters). I want to know how you feel about the story. Thanks for reading and commenting.

    3. Yes, it’s true “all good things must come to an end”. This was Sad and Beautiful. Thank you so very much for the wonderful story, I thoroyughly enjoyed it. I’ll pop over to Life.com and see what you plant there. GOOD LUCK IN YOUR FUTURE WRITINGS,as I know they too will be wonderful…Until we meet again..

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