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    Coming Back – Chapter 17

    Story written on October 14, 2005 by CraZyClo.
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    Give it all away (Finale)


    Carmen : Let me help you.

    Shane : Thanks.


    Shane finally gets up, not without difficulties.


    Carmen : I’ll give you some pain killers.

    Shane : If you don’t mind.. I’ll take some

    Carmen : Doctor also tells that you have to go to the hospital to take some methadone.

    Shane : What.. no.. I mean.. I don’t wanna take that..

    Carmen : Please Shane.. do this..

    Shane : You were at the hospital.. I mean you .. of course you did get me in the hospital.

    Carmen : Shane, you had blood everywhere, what did you want me to do ?

    Shane : Nothing.

    Carmen : Nothing are you crazy I don’t wanna let you die.

    Shane : What if I did !

    Carmen : ***** you !


    Carmen goes in the room and gets her clothes. With all that noise, Marina gets up to see what is happening.


    Marina : What is happening here ?


    Shane goes in her room to look in her back pack to see if the drug is still there. Carmen and Marina gets in the room.


    Carmen : What are you doing?

    Shane : Not of your business.

    Marina : Shane!

    Shane : ***** you too.


    Marina gets upset and leave the room. Shane finally finds her stuff and put it on her bed.


    Carmen : Please Shane, don’t do that I want to help you.

    Shane : You want to help me?

    Carmen : Yes! Of course! What kinda question is this? I love you!

    Shane : Let me do a fix.

    Carmen : Why don’t you go in the hospital to get help, and to stop taking all of this *****?

    Shane : I don’t want to.

    Carmen : Please do this for me and if you don’t wanna do this for me please to it for you, because I don’t wanna lose you again.

    Shane : I don’t wanna lose you either.

    Carmen : You know, since.. Jenny’s story, I wanted so much to be back with you.

    Shane : I wanted too, but you never listened to me.

    Carmen : (looks down) I know.. I think I was too upset.

    Shane : I understand.

    Carmen : When I saw you yesterday,.. it killed me to see you like that.

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    1. Thanks for leavinf comments on your general appreciation of the whole story (17 chapters). I want to know how you feel about the story. Thanks for reading and commenting.

    3. Yes, it’s true “all good things must come to an end”. This was Sad and Beautiful. Thank you so very much for the wonderful story, I thoroyughly enjoyed it. I’ll pop over to Life.com and see what you plant there. GOOD LUCK IN YOUR FUTURE WRITINGS,as I know they too will be wonderful…Until we meet again..

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