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Casual Acquaintances… part 7. The conclusion.
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Eric let out a raucous laugh.
“You’ve got to be ***** kidding me Tina …let me get this right. You are leaving me.” He laughed again. “You are actually ***** leaving me, and not for another man, oh no for a ***** woman. You’ve gone insane!”
“No Eric I haven’t gone insane. I’ve fallen in love.” Tina replied calmly, waiting for the onslaught of abuse that was no doubt to follow.
” But another woman? Come on. You can’t be in love with her Tina you’re not even *****!” He stated matter of factly.
“You can’t choose who you fall in love with Eric.”
“I don’t ***** believe this.” Shaking his head he poured himself a drink.
“What don’t you believe? The fact that I’m leaving you or that I’m leaving you for a woman?”
Eric didn’t answer. Instead he walked through to the kitchen and sat down at the table.
The calmness of his demeanour was taking Tina by surprise, she had expected a torrent of abuse to be thrown at her, she wasn’t getting anything like that, and that scared her even more.
She followed him through to the kitchen and stood in the doorway.
“Well?”
“Well what Tina? What do you want me to say?”
Pulling out a chair Tina sat opposite him.
“I’m sorry Eric.”
Eric shrugged before taking a long pull on his drink. He wasn’t angry or upset in fact he was relieved.
“I knew you’d leave me eventually, I just never expected it to be for another woman.”
Tina smiled sadly.
“Me either. But you and me Eric, we’ve just been going through the motions for a long time, like you said it was going to happen eventually.”
He surprised Tina even further by reaching over the table and taking her hand in his.
“I’ve been a complete ***** to you Tina these past months, I’ve treated you like *****, I’ve chea . . .”
“I know Eric, and its okay, really it is.” She squeezed his fingers in hers.
“No it’s not okay Tina, I should have just been honest with you and told you I wasn’t happy in our relationship, but I was too much of a coward, I guess I wanted to have my cake and eat it, but if truth be known Tina I don’t think we ever truly loved each other. We should never have gotten married. “
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Eric is gotta by lying.And what do you mean by the end.
well, you just totally killed my mood here, you can’t just kill tina, maybe she’s just in the hospital, please don’t do it to us
now i understand why you apologized before the story. Ouch, please let it be crazy nightmare or something this story is too good to end here
OH…MY…GOD….ARE YOU KIDDING ME!!! You cannot do this to Bette. She is so in love with Tina and then Tina dies. What!!!! Just reading this chapter made me cry. I agree, you cant just kill Tina like that unless you take Bette with her. I am so bummed. I hope there is a sequel or something to calm my nerves. My Goodness!
ok, if your tired of this story and you have another with several chapters just waiting to be posted then ok…forgiven…but if not your not forgiven….something, anything pls
beautifly written ending….but there are not enough stories that center around these two just being happy…there is always some drama involved…or one of them dies…i do encourage a continuation of some sort…but props for the writing
Can anything really be said for that??? took me a few times to reread and im still trying to reread and get what i actualy saw…good prank? everyone knows its all about bette and tina…one with the other. but the end….? other than that…way to keep the edges of the seats occupied. ;)
OMG! that was sad I can’t believe that this is really shock to read Whoa! OMG! WHY! WHY! did you kill Tina OK! BUT still I don’t KNOW that to say, Anyway Thanks it’s SO sad really Oh! BOY Thanks for THAT!!
wow…how black? Having a bad day are we? Well I hope it gets better and Tina isn’t really dead….please??
whaddayah mean?! .. You totally killed the mood you cant just kill of Tina like that , make it like a nightmare or something , pls lol
Ok what do you mean The End? Please don’t let Tina die and please don’t let anything happen to them, this is killing me. Please post soon, thanks!
you just f’ucked up my mood. fuck
AAAGH!!! I hate it when one of them gets killed off!!!! great story though…
ok that is bullshit…why oh why? Albeez are you reading this story? I need my gin and tonic, please! Forget it just bring me the whole fucking bottle.
That was SO MEAN!!!! You just killed off T ,didn’t you?!?!?!?!? *wicked laugh* It was pretty disturbing…*heeheehee*
Is traffic in LA really this dangerous? There have been dozens of fatal and near fatal car accidents in the fanfic on this site. It’s carnage on a colossal scale. And it was a mean way to end a very enjoyable story.
Ahh come on guys lifes not all hearts and flowers,no its not a dream. Take a deep breath and repeat after me.. T is dead… T is dead! evil grin.. mwahaaaaaa.
Hey Hunts. What a chapter. Loved it up till the car hit Tina. So sad, but so loving. Have a great day.
OK… That just F*CKED up my Friday morning! This is a sh*tty way to end what was a good story.
YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEY! What the…how could you just…why would…. BAH!!!! Okay, I’m really hoping the little ellipses after ‘The End…’ entail a continuation. A nightmare, perhaps? A misunderstanding? A miracle resurrection?! We enjoy your writing too much for you to just cut the story short!!
WHOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NO WAY! Shit, I felt such an erray of emotions with this whole story, BUT, this chapter, OMG, I was feeling so good reading it, and the next minute I had tears in my eyes, REALITY OR NOT!, Bloody excellent written mate, go and write a book!, Look forward to the next story xxx
WHOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAA, NO WAY!!!!!! What an erray of emotions I felt reading this whole story, BUT this chapter, I was feel soooooooo good and then I found myself crying! Bloody Hell Hunts, wake up from the nightmare, or do a ground hog day or SOMETHING, Bloody excellent writing mate xx
I regret that you felt the need to end the story like this. Forgive me for not understanding how you could keep us on such a high, then a complete low?!?