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Casual Acquaintances… part 7. The conclusion.
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The guy started flirting with his eyes, thinking he stood a chance with the infamous Bette Porter, oblivious to the fact that she was ***** and could never be interested in him.
“Well if there’s no joke you’ve got a fabulous disposition.”
Eager to discourage his flirting that her incessant smile seemed to be encouraging she cuttingly said. “Try telling that to my girlfriend.” Then turned away.
Girlfriend. In real terms she supposed Alice was still her girlfriend, but she knew it was just a formality until she made Alice realise that they would be better off being friends, and that she too would see that Tina was the only woman Bette could spend the rest of her life loving. If only things were that easy. Bette lived in hope.
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The next morning just before ten, Bette made a call to Tina.
Tina instinctively, knew it was, her and eagerly snapped up the phone.
“Hello.”
“T?”
“Hello who is this?” She said feigning ignorance.
“T don’t give me that *****, did you tell him?”
“Look Bette your living in a dream world, what we had was thrilling, exciting, but we both know it was just make believe. Now it’s over and we’re back in reality just forget about it I have.”
Bette ignored her completely. “I’m telling Alice it’s over today, she’s coming by my place at noon.”
She tried not laugh.
“T Tina did you hear what I said?” Bette almost demanded.
Tina sighed deeply. “Bette, do what you have to do . . .”
“Oh I intend to. What about you?” Bette couldn’t believe what she was hearing.
She took a deep breath. “Right at this moment I’m throwing all my clothes in to a suitcase.”
A broad grin escaped across Bette’s face and her lungs finally heaved a sigh of relief.
” I could kill you Tina. You told him.”
“I told him.”
“A few more hours T and we get our forever. I love you baby.”
“I love you too Bette, more than you’ll ever know.”
“T?”
“Yes baby?”
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Eric is gotta by lying.And what do you mean by the end.
well, you just totally killed my mood here, you can’t just kill tina, maybe she’s just in the hospital, please don’t do it to us
now i understand why you apologized before the story. Ouch, please let it be crazy nightmare or something this story is too good to end here
OH…MY…GOD….ARE YOU KIDDING ME!!! You cannot do this to Bette. She is so in love with Tina and then Tina dies. What!!!! Just reading this chapter made me cry. I agree, you cant just kill Tina like that unless you take Bette with her. I am so bummed. I hope there is a sequel or something to calm my nerves. My Goodness!
ok, if your tired of this story and you have another with several chapters just waiting to be posted then ok…forgiven…but if not your not forgiven….something, anything pls
beautifly written ending….but there are not enough stories that center around these two just being happy…there is always some drama involved…or one of them dies…i do encourage a continuation of some sort…but props for the writing
Can anything really be said for that??? took me a few times to reread and im still trying to reread and get what i actualy saw…good prank? everyone knows its all about bette and tina…one with the other. but the end….? other than that…way to keep the edges of the seats occupied. ;)
OMG! that was sad I can’t believe that this is really shock to read Whoa! OMG! WHY! WHY! did you kill Tina OK! BUT still I don’t KNOW that to say, Anyway Thanks it’s SO sad really Oh! BOY Thanks for THAT!!
wow…how black? Having a bad day are we? Well I hope it gets better and Tina isn’t really dead….please??
whaddayah mean?! .. You totally killed the mood you cant just kill of Tina like that , make it like a nightmare or something , pls lol
Ok what do you mean The End? Please don’t let Tina die and please don’t let anything happen to them, this is killing me. Please post soon, thanks!
you just f’ucked up my mood. fuck
AAAGH!!! I hate it when one of them gets killed off!!!! great story though…
ok that is bullshit…why oh why? Albeez are you reading this story? I need my gin and tonic, please! Forget it just bring me the whole fucking bottle.
That was SO MEAN!!!! You just killed off T ,didn’t you?!?!?!?!? *wicked laugh* It was pretty disturbing…*heeheehee*
Is traffic in LA really this dangerous? There have been dozens of fatal and near fatal car accidents in the fanfic on this site. It’s carnage on a colossal scale. And it was a mean way to end a very enjoyable story.
Ahh come on guys lifes not all hearts and flowers,no its not a dream. Take a deep breath and repeat after me.. T is dead… T is dead! evil grin.. mwahaaaaaa.
Hey Hunts. What a chapter. Loved it up till the car hit Tina. So sad, but so loving. Have a great day.
OK… That just F*CKED up my Friday morning! This is a sh*tty way to end what was a good story.
YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEY! What the…how could you just…why would…. BAH!!!! Okay, I’m really hoping the little ellipses after ‘The End…’ entail a continuation. A nightmare, perhaps? A misunderstanding? A miracle resurrection?! We enjoy your writing too much for you to just cut the story short!!
WHOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NO WAY! Shit, I felt such an erray of emotions with this whole story, BUT, this chapter, OMG, I was feeling so good reading it, and the next minute I had tears in my eyes, REALITY OR NOT!, Bloody excellent written mate, go and write a book!, Look forward to the next story xxx
WHOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAA, NO WAY!!!!!! What an erray of emotions I felt reading this whole story, BUT this chapter, I was feel soooooooo good and then I found myself crying! Bloody Hell Hunts, wake up from the nightmare, or do a ground hog day or SOMETHING, Bloody excellent writing mate xx
I regret that you felt the need to end the story like this. Forgive me for not understanding how you could keep us on such a high, then a complete low?!?