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Casual Acquaintances… part 7. The conclusion.
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“I know my darling, believe me, I know.”
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Tina had a few hours to kill before she embarked on her new life with Bette, so she decided to pack her cases in the trunk and drive into West Hollywood and meander round the stores.
A bit of therapeutic shopping would do her the world of good and take her mind off the conversation she could envisage that would be going between Bette and Alice. Tina felt bad for Alice but she loved Bette and nothing and no one was going to stop them from being together.
“You’re sure they’ll definitely arrive before noon.” Tina asked handing her credit card over to the sales assistant.
“They’ll definitely be there, yes.” The assistant smiled.
“And you’ve got the address, right?”
“We have. Would you like to check the details are correct again madam?”
Tina shook her head realising she’d already checked the details three times already and that the smile on the young woman’s face was beginning to wear thin.
“No, that’s ok. Thank you.”
“Thank you madam. And have a nice day.”
“You too.”
She rushed out of the store feeling a little embarrassed at the amount of times she had asked the assistant to check the address and struggled to place her credit card inside her wallet.
She was struggling so much to get it in her wallet she never saw the on coming vehicle approaching at high speed, as she dismounted the side walk to cross the road to reach her car.
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It was almost noon and Bette began pacing up and down the living room, repeating over and over in her head the prepared speech she had got lined up for Alice, when the phone rang.
“Oh you better not be ***** cancelling on me Alice.” She cursed out loud.
“Hello, Alice you “
Those were the last words she spoke.
It was Eric.
She stood motionless, for how long she didn’t know, listening to the words which were barely audible but she heard every single one.
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Eric is gotta by lying.And what do you mean by the end.
well, you just totally killed my mood here, you can’t just kill tina, maybe she’s just in the hospital, please don’t do it to us
now i understand why you apologized before the story. Ouch, please let it be crazy nightmare or something this story is too good to end here
OH…MY…GOD….ARE YOU KIDDING ME!!! You cannot do this to Bette. She is so in love with Tina and then Tina dies. What!!!! Just reading this chapter made me cry. I agree, you cant just kill Tina like that unless you take Bette with her. I am so bummed. I hope there is a sequel or something to calm my nerves. My Goodness!
ok, if your tired of this story and you have another with several chapters just waiting to be posted then ok…forgiven…but if not your not forgiven….something, anything pls
beautifly written ending….but there are not enough stories that center around these two just being happy…there is always some drama involved…or one of them dies…i do encourage a continuation of some sort…but props for the writing
Can anything really be said for that??? took me a few times to reread and im still trying to reread and get what i actualy saw…good prank? everyone knows its all about bette and tina…one with the other. but the end….? other than that…way to keep the edges of the seats occupied. ;)
OMG! that was sad I can’t believe that this is really shock to read Whoa! OMG! WHY! WHY! did you kill Tina OK! BUT still I don’t KNOW that to say, Anyway Thanks it’s SO sad really Oh! BOY Thanks for THAT!!
wow…how black? Having a bad day are we? Well I hope it gets better and Tina isn’t really dead….please??
whaddayah mean?! .. You totally killed the mood you cant just kill of Tina like that , make it like a nightmare or something , pls lol
Ok what do you mean The End? Please don’t let Tina die and please don’t let anything happen to them, this is killing me. Please post soon, thanks!
you just f’ucked up my mood. fuck
AAAGH!!! I hate it when one of them gets killed off!!!! great story though…
ok that is bullshit…why oh why? Albeez are you reading this story? I need my gin and tonic, please! Forget it just bring me the whole fucking bottle.
That was SO MEAN!!!! You just killed off T ,didn’t you?!?!?!?!? *wicked laugh* It was pretty disturbing…*heeheehee*
Is traffic in LA really this dangerous? There have been dozens of fatal and near fatal car accidents in the fanfic on this site. It’s carnage on a colossal scale. And it was a mean way to end a very enjoyable story.
Ahh come on guys lifes not all hearts and flowers,no its not a dream. Take a deep breath and repeat after me.. T is dead… T is dead! evil grin.. mwahaaaaaa.
Hey Hunts. What a chapter. Loved it up till the car hit Tina. So sad, but so loving. Have a great day.
OK… That just F*CKED up my Friday morning! This is a sh*tty way to end what was a good story.
YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEY! What the…how could you just…why would…. BAH!!!! Okay, I’m really hoping the little ellipses after ‘The End…’ entail a continuation. A nightmare, perhaps? A misunderstanding? A miracle resurrection?! We enjoy your writing too much for you to just cut the story short!!
WHOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NO WAY! Shit, I felt such an erray of emotions with this whole story, BUT, this chapter, OMG, I was feeling so good reading it, and the next minute I had tears in my eyes, REALITY OR NOT!, Bloody excellent written mate, go and write a book!, Look forward to the next story xxx
WHOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAA, NO WAY!!!!!! What an erray of emotions I felt reading this whole story, BUT this chapter, I was feel soooooooo good and then I found myself crying! Bloody Hell Hunts, wake up from the nightmare, or do a ground hog day or SOMETHING, Bloody excellent writing mate xx
I regret that you felt the need to end the story like this. Forgive me for not understanding how you could keep us on such a high, then a complete low?!?