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Casual Acquaintances… part 7. The conclusion.
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She felt an overwhelming grief knotting in her stomach and a pulling at her heart, as she shut off the phone. A shiver ran up the back of her neck and the lump that appeared in her throat threatened to choke her. Bile started to rise in her throat and she ran towards the bathroom, where she collapsed to her knees by the toilet.
This was not happening. Her mind refused to comprehend what her heart already knew.
‘THIS IS NOT HAPPENING.’
THE VOICES IN HER HEAD SILENTLY SCREAMED.
She flushed the toilet and slowly rose from the coldness of the floor and steadied herself to her feet, as she heard a knock at the door.
“Bette Porter.”
She nodded staring blankly at the smiling delivery girl as she thrust a large bouquet of flowers in her hand.
She slowly closed the door behind her and took out the small envelope protruding out of the top of the flowers.
She held her breath and with tears in her eyes and her heart pounding out of her chest she read the words written on the card inside, fully aware now that the person who had wrote those words would never be able to do so again, Tina was gone and she was never coming back, and her heart literally smashed in to a million pieces. She ran her fingers over Tina’s handwriting, knowing the last person to have touched the card was her.
My darling Bette,
I hope your reading this before Alice has arrived.
I thought the flowers would make you feel better baby, for what
You are about to do. I know they probably won’t but they
Are beautiful, aren’t they? Not as beautiful as you but still.
I can’t wait to spend the rest of my life with you Bette.
I can’t wait for us to spend precious time together, making wonderful
memories for us to remember.
I’ll be forever grateful to you for finally showing me what love really feels like.
And I can’t wait to become your wife and have a dozen kids and grow old and grey together. Well maybe two, baby, I think having twelve kids would be pushing it.
Oh baby before I sign off, I want you to know something
You’ll always be my first my last and my forever.
T *****
PS. I LOVE YOU . . .
THE END….
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Eric is gotta by lying.And what do you mean by the end.
well, you just totally killed my mood here, you can’t just kill tina, maybe she’s just in the hospital, please don’t do it to us
now i understand why you apologized before the story. Ouch, please let it be crazy nightmare or something this story is too good to end here
OH…MY…GOD….ARE YOU KIDDING ME!!! You cannot do this to Bette. She is so in love with Tina and then Tina dies. What!!!! Just reading this chapter made me cry. I agree, you cant just kill Tina like that unless you take Bette with her. I am so bummed. I hope there is a sequel or something to calm my nerves. My Goodness!
ok, if your tired of this story and you have another with several chapters just waiting to be posted then ok…forgiven…but if not your not forgiven….something, anything pls
beautifly written ending….but there are not enough stories that center around these two just being happy…there is always some drama involved…or one of them dies…i do encourage a continuation of some sort…but props for the writing
Can anything really be said for that??? took me a few times to reread and im still trying to reread and get what i actualy saw…good prank? everyone knows its all about bette and tina…one with the other. but the end….? other than that…way to keep the edges of the seats occupied. ;)
OMG! that was sad I can’t believe that this is really shock to read Whoa! OMG! WHY! WHY! did you kill Tina OK! BUT still I don’t KNOW that to say, Anyway Thanks it’s SO sad really Oh! BOY Thanks for THAT!!
wow…how black? Having a bad day are we? Well I hope it gets better and Tina isn’t really dead….please??
whaddayah mean?! .. You totally killed the mood you cant just kill of Tina like that , make it like a nightmare or something , pls lol
Ok what do you mean The End? Please don’t let Tina die and please don’t let anything happen to them, this is killing me. Please post soon, thanks!
you just f’ucked up my mood. fuck
AAAGH!!! I hate it when one of them gets killed off!!!! great story though…
ok that is bullshit…why oh why? Albeez are you reading this story? I need my gin and tonic, please! Forget it just bring me the whole fucking bottle.
That was SO MEAN!!!! You just killed off T ,didn’t you?!?!?!?!? *wicked laugh* It was pretty disturbing…*heeheehee*
Is traffic in LA really this dangerous? There have been dozens of fatal and near fatal car accidents in the fanfic on this site. It’s carnage on a colossal scale. And it was a mean way to end a very enjoyable story.
Ahh come on guys lifes not all hearts and flowers,no its not a dream. Take a deep breath and repeat after me.. T is dead… T is dead! evil grin.. mwahaaaaaa.
Hey Hunts. What a chapter. Loved it up till the car hit Tina. So sad, but so loving. Have a great day.
OK… That just F*CKED up my Friday morning! This is a sh*tty way to end what was a good story.
YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEY! What the…how could you just…why would…. BAH!!!! Okay, I’m really hoping the little ellipses after ‘The End…’ entail a continuation. A nightmare, perhaps? A misunderstanding? A miracle resurrection?! We enjoy your writing too much for you to just cut the story short!!
WHOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NO WAY! Shit, I felt such an erray of emotions with this whole story, BUT, this chapter, OMG, I was feeling so good reading it, and the next minute I had tears in my eyes, REALITY OR NOT!, Bloody excellent written mate, go and write a book!, Look forward to the next story xxx
WHOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAA, NO WAY!!!!!! What an erray of emotions I felt reading this whole story, BUT this chapter, I was feel soooooooo good and then I found myself crying! Bloody Hell Hunts, wake up from the nightmare, or do a ground hog day or SOMETHING, Bloody excellent writing mate xx
I regret that you felt the need to end the story like this. Forgive me for not understanding how you could keep us on such a high, then a complete low?!?