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A Night in the D – Chapter 10
The kiss was hot, it was. But short.
Tina had pressed her lips so tightly against Bette’s that there was no room for movement, though Bette’s hand moved unconsciously to Tina’s waist, and Tina’s hand slid to Bette’s elbow, keeping it there. Tina broke first, smiling out of the kiss just as she had smiled into it. Her eyes sparkled as she leaned back to get a good look at Bette. “I think we’ve had a misunderstanding,” she whispered sexily.
“I agree,” Bette said, leaning forward. “Let me explain further.” She brushed her lips lightly against Tina’s, near the edge of her mouth, then flush. Tina’s mouth opened just enough for Bette to flick her tongue against Tina’s top lip, sliding it in and up, taking a long lick and slipping back out. Tina groaned deeply and pressed closer. So hot, Bette thought. And it was then that she remembered the skirt. She reached with her left hand and lightly gathered the hem.
“Mmmm,” Tina said, her mouth still covered by Bette’s, but detaching. “Don’t do that.”
Bette smirked lightly, then leaned in Tina’s direction again. Though she came up with air, she kept the skirt in hand, pulling back to look at Tina, while curling her fingers under the fabric, caressing Tina’s lower thigh.
“Oh god,” Tina breathed out, arching gently against Bette’s crotch. “Don’t do that either.”
But Bette’s body kept swaying closer, pulling her tighter, and if Tina had been able to think as well as feel, she would have noticed that she too was pressing herself against Bette’s lower half, while the rest of her hung back, begging to be chased.
Bette laughed. “You’re such a tease, my god. Every move says I want you, I don’t want you.”
Tina looked incredulous. “Well I have no idea how I’m pulling that off. As far as I know, no part of me doesn’t want you.”
Bette was taken aback again, by Tina’s honesty, her vulnerability, her tendency to trip into self-revelation. To Bette it was like watching someone cross against the light repeatedly, without fail. It was almost too much.
She slipped her arms from around Tina’s waist, bumping her center slightly against Tina’s before letting go. “Hey,” Tina said, reddening. “Easy there.”
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(51 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
You are an AMAZING writer. My conjecture: Bette will leave. And then she wouldn’t help coming back later to get her T. It wouldn’t have meant (as) much if they had been able to get together right now, right there.
Well Done. Looking forward to the next installment.
OMG, always so close and then not. I agree with the others, I believe a blizzard is needed to keep Bette around a few more days. Love the teasing and the indecisiveness. Looking forward to next update.
You are now in my FAVORITES, because I love this story and I always look forward to another WONDERFUL CHAPTER….THANKS
OMG, stay,stay,stay…..
Ok I know this whole thing took longer than 5 minutes. So shouldn’t Tina be fired for staying away from her job that long? No seriously just kidding great update.
GULP now im getting all misty…that was really sad i know they hardly know each other but theres that connection thingie!!! YOU KNOW!!!THE ONE THEY HAVE!!lol ok getting carried away now!lol at the start must admit the thought of a hot sexy fling/one ngt stand was VERY appealing but now i like the way its going! god help my hormones!!lol cause there coulld be something deeper going on here! either way your some tease!!! thanks still lovin it!
I am so loving this story. I am glad they did do it…I love the verbal foreplay…it just builds the moment up. I’m thinking this will be one of those stories where they met, go their seperate ways then meet up several months later unexpectedly…but then they find themselves in a relationship. Anyway you go I’ll be reading.
I love this story and I love your subtle writing. Can’t wait to read what happens next!
I love this story. Your words seem to truly capture the emotions between the two of them. Please make them get together.
luvr..I think my tibette heart is hurting…you are wonderful and I am so addicted to your story..I hope you post again..like tonight…or morning. I need drinks…now…albeez…you are in bed aren’t you?
Wow. That was achingly lovely. I really enjoy this story.
I can’t help but moan in unison every time either Bette or Tina does. lol
oh let it snow a blizzard or something so they can get together high water, airport can have problems just keep her there
AHHH!!! I don’t know what to say! I am in a panic!! waaa!!! please get me out of this misery!! LOL! sorry I was being overly dramatic! I am just confused… I feel giddy… excited… scared… confused, wait i already said that! You see! I am rambling! God! post soon… =)
Great story! So sexually charged, heartwrenching, and raw. Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow — blizzard time. Please continue.
this is fucking awesome! please post soon.
WOW. THIS IS SAD!
You must bring them together as I’m completely entranced by this story. Please post again today.
WOW! I hope Bette gets snowed in! Please post again soon!
Great story! You know, they have been having snow regularly in Michigan these days–maybe they’re due for a big blizzard! Thanks for the great story!
wonderful yet again!
I absolutely love this story… you keep me waiting for each post…Thanks and keep up the great work!
miss your flight, blizzard anything just stay
Your story is one of the most compelling, sexually charged and heart wrenching to date (and well written to boot). Thank you.
how about another powerful snow storm? and then again, bette can just stay, tina has to get out of her shift some time…great story, intense, post soon
make the post longer
no shit lg my heart was consticting along with theirs..i said goddamn what a rush!!!
you have NO idea what this is doing to me == excellent
Wow!!! My heart was in my throat throughout that whole chapter!!! Excellent!!! Thanks!
I believe it was last night I glanced over maybe 2 lines on the very first page and thought, “Oh God this is gonna be boring as hell,” but am definitely glad I gave it and you another chance. The style of this fanfic reminds me of a movie I’d watch on the Independent Film Channel at 3 AM and then obsess about it for the next week or so. I’m really interested to see how the next few chapters go and if they will set the tone for rest of the story, or if we will get thrown for a loop in the end.
Let it snow.letit snow.let it snow. thanks
This is a great story. I have no clue where you are taking us, but we need our B&T together as a couple–Please!
wow, that was great
love the story. please post again soon.