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    A Night in the D – Chapter 10

    Story written on December 14, 2005 by luvrgirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=58290
    Author Notes:

    Truth. And consequences.

     

    Tina gulped. There it was again: the disbelief. But she was close enough to see every aspect of Bette’s beauty and the effect was devastating. “I” she hesitated. “I might not be able to take that.”

     

    “You underestimate yourself.”

     

    Tina nodded a bit, smiling amusedly. “You’re not looking at you.”

     

    “I was, earlier, in the mirror.”

     

    “Oh yeah?” Tina laughed and went to motion with her hands, but Bette held them tightly. She resisted gulping again. “If I were you, I wouldn’t get out of the mirror either.”

     

    Bette rolled her eyes and smiled. “So cheeky.” Tina shrugged, smiling back, wondering if her hands felt as hot and clammy as she did.

     

    “For your information, I was looking in the mirror because I felt nervous, not because I felt confident.”

     

    Tina eyed Bette. “Nervous about what?”

     

    Bette’s amusement flickered in her eyes. “You know what.”

    “I don’t.”

     

    “You’re underestimating yourself again.”

     

    At this Tina broke into a large smile. “I’m always doing that with you.”

     

    “You are.”

     

    “You freak me out.”

     

    “I thought you were the freak,” Bette countered.


    “I am, and you’re making it worse.” Tina was enjoying this exchange, standing over Bette, watching her reflection in Bette’s eyes. It was so warm. It was so hot.

     

    It was so time to go.

     

    Closing her eyes, sighing deeply, she squeezed Bette’s hands tightly before releasing them. Bette hung on momentarily, then let go too. She sighed back.

     

    “You have to go.”

     

    “I do.” Tina stared for a moment, then allowed herself to reach and touch Bette’s hair, to trace a line down the side of her face. So beautiful, she thought.

     

    “I really don’t know what to say.”

     

    Bette nodded slowly, rapt at the feel of Tina’s fingers against her skin. The whole experience of Tina was so warm. So hot. “I don’t know what to say either,” she admitted, turning her head and deftly pressing her lips against Tina’s exposed wrist.

     

    Tina felt it there. And everywhere. Her hips ached forward and her eyes closed. But when they opened, her whole face clouded over. “I’m not the only one who has to go, am I?” she whispered, as a roar began to build inside her head.  

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    1. You are an AMAZING writer. My conjecture: Bette will leave. And then she wouldn’t help coming back later to get her T. It wouldn’t have meant (as) much if they had been able to get together right now, right there.

    3. OMG, always so close and then not. I agree with the others, I believe a blizzard is needed to keep Bette around a few more days. Love the teasing and the indecisiveness. Looking forward to next update.

    6. Ok I know this whole thing took longer than 5 minutes. So shouldn’t Tina be fired for staying away from her job that long? No seriously just kidding great update.

    7. GULP now im getting all misty…that was really sad i know they hardly know each other but theres that connection thingie!!! YOU KNOW!!!THE ONE THEY HAVE!!lol ok getting carried away now!lol at the start must admit the thought of a hot sexy fling/one ngt stand was VERY appealing but now i like the way its going! god help my hormones!!lol cause there coulld be something deeper going on here! either way your some tease!!! thanks still lovin it!

    8. I am so loving this story. I am glad they did do it…I love the verbal foreplay…it just builds the moment up. I’m thinking this will be one of those stories where they met, go their seperate ways then meet up several months later unexpectedly…but then they find themselves in a relationship. Anyway you go I’ll be reading.

    11. luvr..I think my tibette heart is hurting…you are wonderful and I am so addicted to your story..I hope you post again..like tonight…or morning. I need drinks…now…albeez…you are in bed aren’t you?

    15. AHHH!!! I don’t know what to say! I am in a panic!! waaa!!! please get me out of this misery!! LOL! sorry I was being overly dramatic! I am just confused… I feel giddy… excited… scared… confused, wait i already said that! You see! I am rambling! God! post soon… =)

    26. how about another powerful snow storm? and then again, bette can just stay, tina has to get out of her shift some time…great story, intense, post soon

    31. I believe it was last night I glanced over maybe 2 lines on the very first page and thought, “Oh God this is gonna be boring as hell,” but am definitely glad I gave it and you another chance. The style of this fanfic reminds me of a movie I’d watch on the Independent Film Channel at 3 AM and then obsess about it for the next week or so. I’m really interested to see how the next few chapters go and if they will set the tone for rest of the story, or if we will get thrown for a loop in the end.

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