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    A Night in the D – Chapter 10

    Story written on December 14, 2005 by luvrgirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=58290
    Author Notes:

    Truth. And consequences.

     

    “Take off your jacket.” It came out as an order but Bette’s eyes said please.

     

    Tina felt sweat forming on her brow. She sighed, shaking her head and moving one hand to her hip. “I told you I can’t stay.”

     

    “I know that,” Bette responded, her eyes roaming Tina’s body. Tina reddened further and shifted her weight back to both feet. She felt helpless before Bette, helpless before her situation, and it was beginning to kill her buzz.

     

    “You know I want to stay.”

     

    “I hear you saying it,” Bette returned, raising an eyebrow. “But I also hear you saying I have five minutes with you and I’ve already used them. Am I right?”

     

    Tina looked chagrined. “Right.”

     

    “Right,” Bette confirmed, leaning forward and again grazing Tina’s lips with her own. “So can you please take off that jacket? I’d like to see your body for the thirty seconds I have left.”

     

    Tina started to protest but felt her buzz returning. Fuckthis woman flipped her switch like no other. “You take it off,” she said.

     

    “Oh.” For the first time, Tina noted, the word sounded like a peep out of Bette too. She savored the feeling.

     

    “Unless that makes you uncomfortable.”

     

    Bette scoffed, reaching towards her. “I’m never that uncomfortable, believe me.”

     

    Tina stepped back, laughing, and pulled the jacket tightly around her. “Wait, you look dangerous. Maybe I should do it myself.”

     

    “No, please, if you need help” Bette reached again.

     

    “I think I’ve got it.” With one quick move, Tina shrugged the jacket off her shoulders and let it fall to the floor. She hoped that was smooth, and the look on Bette’s face suggested that it was. What was that look by the way? Lust?

     

    “Why so many buttons?” Bette asked.

     

    Tina blushed. “Oh.” The peep again. She looked down and unbuttoned the first two, brushing the hair from her face as her head returned upright. Bette was smiling at her, encouragingly, and the heat factor was rising in the room. “Better?” she asked.

     

    “Mmm, much.”

     

    Bette sat back suddenly onto the bed and motioned with her head for Tina to approach. Despite feeling unsteady on her feet, Tina did so, stopping in front of Bette and allowing her to take her hands in her own. Bette gazed up at her. “I’m so sorry you have to work,” she said softly. “I could look at you for hours.”

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    Comments

    1. You are an AMAZING writer. My conjecture: Bette will leave. And then she wouldn’t help coming back later to get her T. It wouldn’t have meant (as) much if they had been able to get together right now, right there.

    3. OMG, always so close and then not. I agree with the others, I believe a blizzard is needed to keep Bette around a few more days. Love the teasing and the indecisiveness. Looking forward to next update.

    6. Ok I know this whole thing took longer than 5 minutes. So shouldn’t Tina be fired for staying away from her job that long? No seriously just kidding great update.

    7. GULP now im getting all misty…that was really sad i know they hardly know each other but theres that connection thingie!!! YOU KNOW!!!THE ONE THEY HAVE!!lol ok getting carried away now!lol at the start must admit the thought of a hot sexy fling/one ngt stand was VERY appealing but now i like the way its going! god help my hormones!!lol cause there coulld be something deeper going on here! either way your some tease!!! thanks still lovin it!

    8. I am so loving this story. I am glad they did do it…I love the verbal foreplay…it just builds the moment up. I’m thinking this will be one of those stories where they met, go their seperate ways then meet up several months later unexpectedly…but then they find themselves in a relationship. Anyway you go I’ll be reading.

    11. luvr..I think my tibette heart is hurting…you are wonderful and I am so addicted to your story..I hope you post again..like tonight…or morning. I need drinks…now…albeez…you are in bed aren’t you?

    15. AHHH!!! I don’t know what to say! I am in a panic!! waaa!!! please get me out of this misery!! LOL! sorry I was being overly dramatic! I am just confused… I feel giddy… excited… scared… confused, wait i already said that! You see! I am rambling! God! post soon… =)

    26. how about another powerful snow storm? and then again, bette can just stay, tina has to get out of her shift some time…great story, intense, post soon

    31. I believe it was last night I glanced over maybe 2 lines on the very first page and thought, “Oh God this is gonna be boring as hell,” but am definitely glad I gave it and you another chance. The style of this fanfic reminds me of a movie I’d watch on the Independent Film Channel at 3 AM and then obsess about it for the next week or so. I’m really interested to see how the next few chapters go and if they will set the tone for rest of the story, or if we will get thrown for a loop in the end.

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