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    A Night in the D – Chapter 10

    Story written on December 14, 2005 by luvrgirl.
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    Truth. And consequences.


    Bette smiled gently at her. So gently. “No,” she said, “you’re not.”

     

    Tina nodded now. Silence descended on the room and suddenly Tina wanted out of it. Out of the silence, out of the room, out of the way of this bulldozer of a moment. She wanted never to leave, but if she had to leave, she wanted to leave now. The emotions played across her face, as her insides were seized by something not unlike panic. Bette almost gasped watching her.

     

    “Hey,” she said softly, which only made Tina feel like crying. Soothing Bette was back. That wasn’t going to make it any easier.

     

    “What are you thinking?” Bette asked, clutching Tina’s hand again as she tried to turn away.

     

    “I’m thinking I have to go. And you have to go.” She fought to keep the despair from her voice. “It’s perfectly symmetrical. It makes perfect sense.”

     

    “Oh.”

     

    Why was someone always saying that? Tina hated the word now, its noncommittal nature. But she was committed to getting out of there before the whole noncommitment thing got any worse. She pulled her hand from Bette’s and reached with the other to retrieve her jacket from the floor. Bette stood, but Tina was moving so fast she wasn’t sure she could catch her. Or should. The feeling of helplessness Tina had experienced earlier shot through Bette as she watched the blonde’s fa&#231ade fall back into place, her vulnerability shrouded by resolution.

     

    The door opened and Bette felt her heart constrict. Something said no, don’t let her go, but she felt frozen to the floor. Numb to the bone. Tina turned back only briefly, to offer a smile Bette now knew to be a forced one.

     

    “Checkout’s at noon,” she said, her eyes bright with tears.

     

    Bette couldn’t speak and only nodded, trying to say something with her eyes before Tina turned away and closed the door behind her. She stood unmoving, imagining the blonde’s rapid escape down the hallway, and swallowed hard at the image of Tina’s face-that fake smile, those real tears-before finally turning away herself, avoiding the mirror as she did so, not wanting to choke on her own fake smile, on her own genuine regret.

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    Comments

    1. You are an AMAZING writer. My conjecture: Bette will leave. And then she wouldn’t help coming back later to get her T. It wouldn’t have meant (as) much if they had been able to get together right now, right there.

    3. OMG, always so close and then not. I agree with the others, I believe a blizzard is needed to keep Bette around a few more days. Love the teasing and the indecisiveness. Looking forward to next update.

    6. Ok I know this whole thing took longer than 5 minutes. So shouldn’t Tina be fired for staying away from her job that long? No seriously just kidding great update.

    7. GULP now im getting all misty…that was really sad i know they hardly know each other but theres that connection thingie!!! YOU KNOW!!!THE ONE THEY HAVE!!lol ok getting carried away now!lol at the start must admit the thought of a hot sexy fling/one ngt stand was VERY appealing but now i like the way its going! god help my hormones!!lol cause there coulld be something deeper going on here! either way your some tease!!! thanks still lovin it!

    8. I am so loving this story. I am glad they did do it…I love the verbal foreplay…it just builds the moment up. I’m thinking this will be one of those stories where they met, go their seperate ways then meet up several months later unexpectedly…but then they find themselves in a relationship. Anyway you go I’ll be reading.

    11. luvr..I think my tibette heart is hurting…you are wonderful and I am so addicted to your story..I hope you post again..like tonight…or morning. I need drinks…now…albeez…you are in bed aren’t you?

    15. AHHH!!! I don’t know what to say! I am in a panic!! waaa!!! please get me out of this misery!! LOL! sorry I was being overly dramatic! I am just confused… I feel giddy… excited… scared… confused, wait i already said that! You see! I am rambling! God! post soon… =)

    26. how about another powerful snow storm? and then again, bette can just stay, tina has to get out of her shift some time…great story, intense, post soon

    31. I believe it was last night I glanced over maybe 2 lines on the very first page and thought, “Oh God this is gonna be boring as hell,” but am definitely glad I gave it and you another chance. The style of this fanfic reminds me of a movie I’d watch on the Independent Film Channel at 3 AM and then obsess about it for the next week or so. I’m really interested to see how the next few chapters go and if they will set the tone for rest of the story, or if we will get thrown for a loop in the end.

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