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Vignettes: Chapter 75
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Bette and Tina were still dancing when Dakota snuck through the door with Shane and Zoe. The three moved quickly into a dark corner in the back of the room and were setting up some equipment. The wall behind Bette and Tina was covered with a giant white curtain that Dakota started to pull back to reveal a very large screen. This caught her mothers’ eyes. Bette raised an eyebrow at Tina.
“Do you know anything about this?”
Tina shook her head.
At the end of the song, Dakota talked into a microphone.
“Would everyone please take their seats? Thank you.” She waited a few more minutes for everyone to shuffle around and get situated. Shane stood on one side of her and Zoe was on the other.
Dakota cleared her throat. “It’s time for a toast.” She nodded to Shane who took the mic.
“Hello. I’m Shane in case anyone out there doesn’t know me. I’d like to say a few words about Alice and Dana.” She paused for a moment and looked around nervously, shoving one of her hands deep into her pocket.
“I’ve known Alice and Dana for a long time. A really long time actually. And I’ve never known two better women… except Bette and Tina, of course… and my wife, too… ok, nevermind. You get the point. They are good women. They’ve had their hard times and some days I didn’t think they’d make it, but they always proved me wrong. Thank god for that because they are never as happy as they are when they’re together. And they’ve always been there for me, no matter what. They helped raise my son and love him like their own. Well… you all know them. What more do I need to say? Be sure to not ever take their friendship for granted. Congratulations you guys.”
Shane raised her glass and smiled at the couple.
Zoe and Dakota stepped up to the microphone next and let out big grins to their mothers.
“Dakota and I would like to say a few brief words about our awesome moms.” Zoe said. “I love both of my mothers. That goes without saying. But sometimes it’s nice to say it, just to remind them. I’m honored to have them as parents.”
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very cool update- thanks!
i’m so in love with this story….i hope The End will have at least 30 parts *hint*…i love the way you brought the past back again, i was always wondering what was on that tape…post soon again
This is one of the best stories on this site. I hope also that there is a bit more wrap up to the ending. Thanks.
Always glad to see another chapter out of you. Also relieved (so to speak) that Tina was merely sitting on the toilet, not SITTING on the toilet. Alice’s moon was enough of that sort of thing! There better be more to this movie!
That’s lovely. Bette’s soooo cute when she’s shy.
Yes. Another perfect chapter. Thanks so much for posting.
So sweet and tender.
Your the best, totally the best…pls more !!!
great use of the tape from the past – awesome story – more please
Fareast, this has been a beautiful insight into a long-term relationship. The glimpses you have shown us reminds us of how tenuos life is and how the slightest of touches, the quickest of glances and the softest of whispers can influence a life more dramatically than we realize. We often forget those early days in the hustle and bustle of daily life, but should never forget to treasure them. Newfound love is full of discovery and startling admissions, but if we look closely we’ll see that discovery and admissions continue as our relationship grows – we just have to be more persistent in taking joy in them. A story that will always be a favorite of mine. As others have voiced…I hope there is a protracted ‘end’.
I just caught up with the story, and its still and good as it was in the begining. I know the parties not over cos their has to be more to say and see. Can’t wait, and Julianne and Dakota too cute.
Do i have to say how much i love this story that i might weep if it really came to an end?? I’m so loving this documentry video tape..
Please,please,please don’t let this story end. I’m lovin’ it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the home movie :) your amazing storytelling will be missed.
you’re a really awesome writer! i thoroughly enjoyed reading your series and i really really really hope you continue to write!!!!
so cute! You’re amazing as usual. Thanks for posting!
I ALSO HOPE THE END WILL HAVE ABOUT 30 PSRTS… LOVE THIS STORY… PLEASE UPDATE SOON
I’m so sad to see this story coming to an end. You know how much I’ve enjoyed it from the start. The approach you took at the beginning was refreshingly different, as was the jump ahead in time to deal with the children as they got older. I hope you will consider writing another story for us.
I love this story! I’ve missed reading it for a while because a certain someone has been occupying all of my time! But after reading this update I’m definitely going to go back and catch up to the present (or in this case the past)…can’t wait for more! Thanks!
I am such a sucker for good writing! I loved this chapter, but know in my heart that it is not the final end, just the beginning of the end….
What can I say? I love this story. It is so well observed and beautifully written. I have really appreciated the pacing of it and your excellent use of flashbacks. I would love you to continue this story for ages yet, but could you at least give us lots of details of the video and how the rest of the evening pans out for the girls. This story really is a gem. Thanks for all you have posted and I look forward to reading you new fics once season 3 airs in the UK.
You know I love this story of yours Fareast – sorry I have been away for some time now. But been buzy with work and it is my day off…so what better than to read up on your amazing story here. Wonderful work – keep going