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Vignettes: Chapter 75
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Alice had apparently pulled her pants back up and started to move across the room, taping the whole thing, camera jerking up and down. She sat down across from Bette and Tina who were talking with Shane.
“Hi Bette, hi Tina.”
“Hi Alice.” Shane said. Alice whipped the camera around so it was in Shane’s face. Shane scrunched up her face and pushed the camera away.
“Alice, what’s with the camera?” Bette asked.
“Just documenting my party.”
“How much have you had to drink?”
“Just a couple drinks, why?”
“No reason.” Bette laughed and snuggled closer to Tina.
“Think you can tear yourself away from Tina for a few minutes?”
“Why?”
“I’d like to have a few words with her privately.”
“Privately?”
Alice nodded and the camera moved up and down.
“It’s not up to me, ask Tina.”
“Tina?”
Tina looked at Bette who shrugged. “Alright, I guess.”
“Excellent! Follow me.”
The camera cut into another scene.
Tina was sitting across from Alice on a toilet. She was biting her bottom lip, obviously nervous, and she tucked her blonde hair behind her ear.
“So Tina… let’s get to know you a little better, ok?”
“Um… ok.”
“You’ve been dating Bette for just about a month now. How do you feel about that?”
“Good.”
“You’re new to the gang and I don’t know you that well. Don’t get me wrong, I like you so far, but I want to make sure you’ll take care of Bette.”
Tina furrowed her eyebrows as she watched Alice try to take another drink behind the camera. She threw her own head back and finished her drink.
“I’ll do everything I can to be good to Bette. I would never want to deliberately hurt her.”
“That’s good to know because she’s really falling for you.”
Tina sat up straighter. “She said that?”
“Well, not in so many words, but it’s true. I’ve known Porter for a long time and she’s never been like this with any other woman.”
“Like what?”
“She can’t get enough of you and all she wants is more. I think she loves you.”
Tina blushed deeply. “Well I like her too. I think I’m going to go find her now.”
Alice stood up with Tina.
“Did I make you feel uncomfortable? I’m sorry.”
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very cool update- thanks!
i’m so in love with this story….i hope The End will have at least 30 parts *hint*…i love the way you brought the past back again, i was always wondering what was on that tape…post soon again
This is one of the best stories on this site. I hope also that there is a bit more wrap up to the ending. Thanks.
Always glad to see another chapter out of you. Also relieved (so to speak) that Tina was merely sitting on the toilet, not SITTING on the toilet. Alice’s moon was enough of that sort of thing! There better be more to this movie!
That’s lovely. Bette’s soooo cute when she’s shy.
Yes. Another perfect chapter. Thanks so much for posting.
So sweet and tender.
Your the best, totally the best…pls more !!!
great use of the tape from the past – awesome story – more please
Fareast, this has been a beautiful insight into a long-term relationship. The glimpses you have shown us reminds us of how tenuos life is and how the slightest of touches, the quickest of glances and the softest of whispers can influence a life more dramatically than we realize. We often forget those early days in the hustle and bustle of daily life, but should never forget to treasure them. Newfound love is full of discovery and startling admissions, but if we look closely we’ll see that discovery and admissions continue as our relationship grows – we just have to be more persistent in taking joy in them. A story that will always be a favorite of mine. As others have voiced…I hope there is a protracted ‘end’.
I just caught up with the story, and its still and good as it was in the begining. I know the parties not over cos their has to be more to say and see. Can’t wait, and Julianne and Dakota too cute.
Do i have to say how much i love this story that i might weep if it really came to an end?? I’m so loving this documentry video tape..
Please,please,please don’t let this story end. I’m lovin’ it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the home movie :) your amazing storytelling will be missed.
you’re a really awesome writer! i thoroughly enjoyed reading your series and i really really really hope you continue to write!!!!
so cute! You’re amazing as usual. Thanks for posting!
I ALSO HOPE THE END WILL HAVE ABOUT 30 PSRTS… LOVE THIS STORY… PLEASE UPDATE SOON
I’m so sad to see this story coming to an end. You know how much I’ve enjoyed it from the start. The approach you took at the beginning was refreshingly different, as was the jump ahead in time to deal with the children as they got older. I hope you will consider writing another story for us.
I love this story! I’ve missed reading it for a while because a certain someone has been occupying all of my time! But after reading this update I’m definitely going to go back and catch up to the present (or in this case the past)…can’t wait for more! Thanks!
I am such a sucker for good writing! I loved this chapter, but know in my heart that it is not the final end, just the beginning of the end….
What can I say? I love this story. It is so well observed and beautifully written. I have really appreciated the pacing of it and your excellent use of flashbacks. I would love you to continue this story for ages yet, but could you at least give us lots of details of the video and how the rest of the evening pans out for the girls. This story really is a gem. Thanks for all you have posted and I look forward to reading you new fics once season 3 airs in the UK.
You know I love this story of yours Fareast – sorry I have been away for some time now. But been buzy with work and it is my day off…so what better than to read up on your amazing story here. Wonderful work – keep going