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Vignettes: Chapter 75
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“No, it’s fine, really.”
“I just want to let you know that if Bette likes you so much, I’m sure I will, too. I’m excited to get to know you, Tina.”
Tina smiled into the camera. “The feeling’s mutual.”
The camera cut back into another scene, obviously some time later. Tina was standing in the kitchen, Alice taping her talk to a couple of women. The camera slowly moved to Alice’s left to find Bette. She was leaning against a wall with her arms folded across her chest. She was watching Tina.
“Whatchya doing, Bette?”
“Nothing.”
“It looks like you’re drooling over Tina again.”
“I am not.” Bette glared into the camera. “Can’t you turn that thing off?”
“No, I’m documenting your relationship with Tina.”
“In the matter of one party? And it’s barely a relationship.”
“Yet.” Alice corrected. “You like her.”
“Yes, I do.”
“You love her.”
“What?” Alice zoomed in on Bette’s face.
“You heard me.”
“Why do you say that?”
“It’s obvious. She’s different, isn’t she?”
“She’s… “ Bette grinned. “She’s… wonderful.”
Alice turned the camera around to her own face and rolled her eyes.
“Just tell the camera you love Tina.”
“Alice, turn that stupid thing off or else I’m not talking to you anymore.”
“Will you talk to me if I turn it off?”
Bette nodded. Alice brought the camera down and dropped it to her side, but she never turned it off. Even though the ground was on the screen, their conversation was clear.
“What are you thinking when you watch Tina over there?” Alice asked.
“She is so hot! Look at her! And look how those girls are looking at her. It drives me crazy to see other people so blatantly into her. That one talking to her now obviously wants to take all of her clothes off.”
“She apparently isn’t the only one.” Alice muttered.
“I just… can’t believe she chose me, Al.”
“Bette, you’re wonderful. Don’t doubt that. Tina’s a lucky girl.”
“I’m so much more lucky. I don’t deserve her.”
“You deserve all the best and if that’s Tina, then go for it.”
Bette lowered her voice. “I plan to, Alice. I really do. I think I love her.”
“Love?”
“Love.”
The camera cut to another scene and Alice’s face filled the screen.
“Well, you heard it, folks, from Bette’s own mouth. She’s in love and she’s going for it. Someday they’ll thank me for this, just as long as they make it til they’re old and gray.”
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very cool update- thanks!
i’m so in love with this story….i hope The End will have at least 30 parts *hint*…i love the way you brought the past back again, i was always wondering what was on that tape…post soon again
This is one of the best stories on this site. I hope also that there is a bit more wrap up to the ending. Thanks.
Always glad to see another chapter out of you. Also relieved (so to speak) that Tina was merely sitting on the toilet, not SITTING on the toilet. Alice’s moon was enough of that sort of thing! There better be more to this movie!
That’s lovely. Bette’s soooo cute when she’s shy.
Yes. Another perfect chapter. Thanks so much for posting.
So sweet and tender.
Your the best, totally the best…pls more !!!
great use of the tape from the past – awesome story – more please
Fareast, this has been a beautiful insight into a long-term relationship. The glimpses you have shown us reminds us of how tenuos life is and how the slightest of touches, the quickest of glances and the softest of whispers can influence a life more dramatically than we realize. We often forget those early days in the hustle and bustle of daily life, but should never forget to treasure them. Newfound love is full of discovery and startling admissions, but if we look closely we’ll see that discovery and admissions continue as our relationship grows – we just have to be more persistent in taking joy in them. A story that will always be a favorite of mine. As others have voiced…I hope there is a protracted ‘end’.
I just caught up with the story, and its still and good as it was in the begining. I know the parties not over cos their has to be more to say and see. Can’t wait, and Julianne and Dakota too cute.
Do i have to say how much i love this story that i might weep if it really came to an end?? I’m so loving this documentry video tape..
Please,please,please don’t let this story end. I’m lovin’ it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the home movie :) your amazing storytelling will be missed.
you’re a really awesome writer! i thoroughly enjoyed reading your series and i really really really hope you continue to write!!!!
so cute! You’re amazing as usual. Thanks for posting!
I ALSO HOPE THE END WILL HAVE ABOUT 30 PSRTS… LOVE THIS STORY… PLEASE UPDATE SOON
I’m so sad to see this story coming to an end. You know how much I’ve enjoyed it from the start. The approach you took at the beginning was refreshingly different, as was the jump ahead in time to deal with the children as they got older. I hope you will consider writing another story for us.
I love this story! I’ve missed reading it for a while because a certain someone has been occupying all of my time! But after reading this update I’m definitely going to go back and catch up to the present (or in this case the past)…can’t wait for more! Thanks!
I am such a sucker for good writing! I loved this chapter, but know in my heart that it is not the final end, just the beginning of the end….
What can I say? I love this story. It is so well observed and beautifully written. I have really appreciated the pacing of it and your excellent use of flashbacks. I would love you to continue this story for ages yet, but could you at least give us lots of details of the video and how the rest of the evening pans out for the girls. This story really is a gem. Thanks for all you have posted and I look forward to reading you new fics once season 3 airs in the UK.
You know I love this story of yours Fareast – sorry I have been away for some time now. But been buzy with work and it is my day off…so what better than to read up on your amazing story here. Wonderful work – keep going