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My Immortal-Final Chapter
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Tina stood there looking at Bette, who hadn’t turned around. Tina presumed that Bette thought she had left her and was in shock to have heard her voice.
“Bette? Will you please come inside with me?”
Bette couldn’t believe that Tina was still here. Why was she still here. Bette could only think bad thoughts, maybe she didn’t want to end it with me with the baby here cause she was afraid of me getting upset and causing a scene or was there another reason for her to be here. She turned around to face Tina when she asked her inside. They looked at each other for a few seconds and Bette slowly walked past her into the house.
When she got into the house she noticed the radio on. Tina must have turned it on while she was waiting for Kit to collect Angie. She sat down on the couch. Never remembering ever feeling so uncomfortable in her own house. She was afraid to look at Tina, she was afraid of what she would see in her eyes.
Tina sat down across from Bette. She didn’t want to make Bette more uncomfortable by sitting beside. She could see how uncomfortable she was just being in the same room as her.
” I would never take Angelica away from you Bette. You have to know that. No matter what happens between us you are her mother. She is who she is because of you. I wouldn’t have her if we hadn’t been together for 8 years. I could never inflict that much pain on you. I know how devastated you were when we lost him”
“so devastated I fucked up our lives”, Bette said regrettably.
“this isn’t helping Bette”
“and you fucking men is?”
” please stop this Bette, please just listen to me.”
Tina stood up and started walking around the room. Unable to keep still.
“the hardest thing I ever did was inflict that pain on you by telling you the feelings I was having. I tried to stay distant from you while I tried to figure out what was going on. I could see you were hurting. It was killing me. I was trying so hard to make things normal but I ended up being a complete bitch to you. I went from being the happy housewife to an angry uncaring bitch. I got so caught up in the money we didn’t have, the adoption, you not working and me having to go back to work. Everything seemed to be on my shoulders and I was blaming you for everything and anything. I think the feelings came from total insecurity. All of a sudden we had a child, were back together and had no income coming in, it all happened so quickly and I was scared we were falling apart”
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Excellent chapter, this is the way the things should be! this was amazing chapter with a talk that they needed so much time ago. thanks i hope you continue writting cause you girls have a lot of talent
i hope u continue corona
I hope S3’s ending could be like yours. Great story. Thanks.
Great update.I love that song.I agree don’t leave it at that.
Please keep writing! This is the kind of story us tibette fans need. We aren’t getting it from IC. Thank you so very much.
My, see how much hope you gave to us, all the emotionally fragilized Tibettes ? I so agree with missyang here : if only we could have this kind of hope at the end of S3… — Many thanks for your story and please, please, come back to us, write again !! You truly are talented. ^_^
That story was just excellent!!!! PLEASE START a new story from the end of this one.
Great chapter. But just one more please. We need to see them together. Thanks for the post.
Really enjoyed your writing..please continue!
No end please! TBC!!!! =)
This is an amazing story! I really love how you tied the song into it. Thanks SO MUCH!!
Absolutely…..Excellent. Since u started these posting…I have looked forward to your story more than S3….Enjoyed this immensely
Wish that would happen on the show. Enjoyed your story.
That was excellent ..But cant believe your leaving it there…..it doesnt have to be The End…Or does it!!!Great Writting Thanks
Brilliant story, but it can’t end there, let us have some loving between Bette and Tina, please post another chapter.
Excellent. Great. wish IC could read your and get a few ideas… lol But now.. you can’t leave it there. Please continue with this. I’ll read it forever. Please? Great chapter :)
Excellent story, please continue with some tender loving!
I wish S3 would end like this. I hope you write another story. :)
Take a bow! I hope you’ll write another story soon.
Wow excellent and amazing. I hope you will continue and make them together and happy again. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
I have never read something so true and beautifully and heartbreaking at the same time…gosh you got all those answers and questions we wanted from the show. The pain they cause on each other is just too much for anyone of them to bare, hopefully this time it’s really forever
Another great story, thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Its too bad Ilene didn’t have some of the writers on this site for writing the series as we would have had the most incredible series ever written about our community. Communication in relationships is always important along with clarity and honesty.
Thanks you!