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My Immortal-Final Chapter
Bette interrupted,” so why did you push it further?”
Tina sighed deeply ran her hands through her hair and sat down again. Five minutes went past and know one spoke. The radio and their own thoughts keeping them occupied.
“I remember 8 years ago having the scariest most confusing feelings. One day I was in a happy relationship with a great guy who really cared for me. Then I had the most amazing 15 seconds of my life to that point. I was completely blown away. You woke something up in me. I will never forget that kiss. I completely changed my life for you. I lost everything I had and knew to start a new life with you. Have you any idea how scared I was? You had been out for years and in numerous relationships and for you to describe the most life changing decision I have ever made as ” a meaningless dalliance in the land of alternative lifestyles” hurt me more than you can imagine”
“I never loved anyone the way I love you”, Bette felt she needed to interrupt, she did regret say what she did but she was so upset at the time hat her life was falling apart.
“then why the fuck would you throw it all away to fuck the carpenter???” Tina wasn’t planning on getting angry she just wanted to talk but this was a question that hadn’t been answered and she needed an answer.
Bette winced when she heard Tina shout what she did. All she could do was apologise, “im sorry”
” I know your sorry Bette. But you don’t realise how hard it was for me to see you touch her and to know it wasn’t just a one time thing. I nearly came back to you so many times because I just needed you. I wasn’t complete without you. Why do you think I drove past the house at 2 am that morning? I wasn’t exactly just passing. But I knew I couldn’t just fall straight back into your arms. I was too afraid of you hurting me again. I remember taking some things from the house when you were out and I needed you so badly. I sat on the bed and cried holding your pillow, grasping onto something of you. When I finally stop crying the first thing I see is a photo of you and her together. I wanted and needed you but I couldn’t let myself have you. I ached for you but I feared you”.
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(110 votes, average: 3.54 out of 5)
Excellent chapter, this is the way the things should be! this was amazing chapter with a talk that they needed so much time ago. thanks i hope you continue writting cause you girls have a lot of talent
i hope u continue corona
I hope S3’s ending could be like yours. Great story. Thanks.
Great update.I love that song.I agree don’t leave it at that.
Please keep writing! This is the kind of story us tibette fans need. We aren’t getting it from IC. Thank you so very much.
My, see how much hope you gave to us, all the emotionally fragilized Tibettes ? I so agree with missyang here : if only we could have this kind of hope at the end of S3… — Many thanks for your story and please, please, come back to us, write again !! You truly are talented. ^_^
That story was just excellent!!!! PLEASE START a new story from the end of this one.
Great chapter. But just one more please. We need to see them together. Thanks for the post.
Really enjoyed your writing..please continue!
No end please! TBC!!!! =)
This is an amazing story! I really love how you tied the song into it. Thanks SO MUCH!!
Absolutely…..Excellent. Since u started these posting…I have looked forward to your story more than S3….Enjoyed this immensely
Wish that would happen on the show. Enjoyed your story.
That was excellent ..But cant believe your leaving it there…..it doesnt have to be The End…Or does it!!!Great Writting Thanks
Brilliant story, but it can’t end there, let us have some loving between Bette and Tina, please post another chapter.
Excellent. Great. wish IC could read your and get a few ideas… lol But now.. you can’t leave it there. Please continue with this. I’ll read it forever. Please? Great chapter :)
Excellent story, please continue with some tender loving!
I wish S3 would end like this. I hope you write another story. :)
Take a bow! I hope you’ll write another story soon.
Wow excellent and amazing. I hope you will continue and make them together and happy again. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
I have never read something so true and beautifully and heartbreaking at the same time…gosh you got all those answers and questions we wanted from the show. The pain they cause on each other is just too much for anyone of them to bare, hopefully this time it’s really forever
Another great story, thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Its too bad Ilene didn’t have some of the writers on this site for writing the series as we would have had the most incredible series ever written about our community. Communication in relationships is always important along with clarity and honesty.
Thanks you!