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    My Immortal-Final Chapter

    Story written on March 1, 2006 by corona.
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    Its the End but Is it.

     

    “you were afraid of me?” this bothered Bette. Why was she afraid. She began thinking it was because of the provocations night, because of what they did to each other.

     

    Tina broke Bette’s train of thought. “I was afraid of the unbelievable power you had over me. I was afraid of letting you hurt me again. I was weak for you, with you and about you. I never thought you could hurt me. I never thought you could cheat. You looked down on everyone who cheated, Jenny, your father even fucking Gabby. Why couldn’t you talk to me? Why wouldn’t you let me help you? How could you look for comfort in the arms of another woman?

     

    This time Tina was looking for answers. She stared at Bette.

     

    “cause”

     

    “cause what Bette”

     

    “because I didn’t want you to think I was weak. I was supposed to be supporting you and taking care of you and I failed. I wasn’t even there with you when we lost our child cause or some opinionated bigot. I will never forgive myself for not holding your hand in that room. For not wiping your tears away and for not being there to take you home. I wasn’t there for you when you needed me most”

     

    Bette was inconsolable now.

     

    “I didn’t deserve you Tina”

     

    Tina didn’t realise how much guilt Bette had felt over not being there that day. She had never dreamed of blaming or punishing Bette for not being there.

     

    Bette had her head in her hands crying remembering that day. She felt Tina’s hand on her should and quickly stood up. She couldn’t handle Tina’s pity.

     

    “please don’t do that Tina. I cannot handle you feeling pity for me right now”

     

    “Bette when it’s from someone who loves you its called compassion. I love you so much Bette, more after tonight than I ever thought I could. I know I hurt you. We hurt each other. I’ve forgiven you for what happened and I never felt any anger toward you for not being there on that day. You were there when you could and you held me all that night that’s what mattered. You loved me and cared for me and comforted me that’s what I needed from you”

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    1. Excellent chapter, this is the way the things should be! this was amazing chapter with a talk that they needed so much time ago. thanks i hope you continue writting cause you girls have a lot of talent

    6. My, see how much hope you gave to us, all the emotionally fragilized Tibettes ? I so agree with missyang here : if only we could have this kind of hope at the end of S3… — Many thanks for your story and please, please, come back to us, write again !! You truly are talented. ^_^

    16. Excellent. Great. wish IC could read your and get a few ideas… lol But now.. you can’t leave it there. Please continue with this. I’ll read it forever. Please? Great chapter :)

    21. I have never read something so true and beautifully and heartbreaking at the same time…gosh you got all those answers and questions we wanted from the show. The pain they cause on each other is just too much for anyone of them to bare, hopefully this time it’s really forever

    22. Another great story, thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Its too bad Ilene didn’t have some of the writers on this site for writing the series as we would have had the most incredible series ever written about our community. Communication in relationships is always important along with clarity and honesty.
      Thanks you!

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