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My Immortal-Final Chapter
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Tina just stood staring at Bette’s back wishing she knew what was going on in Bette’s mind.
“im sorry I hurt you but I was trying so hard not to. That morning when you were going to Washington and you accidentally touched me. I wanted so much to just take your hand and wrap it around me tightly hoping you would never let me go. But I was so confused then. Hearing you apologise for touching me made me realise what I was doing to you.”
Bette was thinking back to the pain she felt that morning when she woke up and things felt right. She was next to her lover and holding her. Then the reality set in.
Tina walked up behind Bette and gently rested her hands on Bette’s waist hearing her sigh gently.
“im sorry it’s taken me so long to put these feelings behind me Bette but its you who I love and adore. There is no-one else I want to be with. Im so sorry for not telling you how much I love you sooner. I wanted to tell you when you rang that night you were with the senator in
Tina was now holding Bette. Losing herself in Bette’s hair. Enjoy one of the things she missed so much, touching and smelling Bette. She always did smell good.
The radio in the background and their breathing were the only sounds in the room. Bette turned around and fell into Tina’s embrace. Both crying for they pain they had caused each other and the time they wasted.
When they stopped crying they just concentrated on each others breathing, all that had been said tonight and the song which came on the radio, My Immortal. Slowly they separated and looked into each others eyes both seeing what they had been looking for..love. Tina slowly reached up and brought their lips together. Slowly and cautiously tasting and exploring each other again. Bette slowly brought her hand to the back of Tina’s head deepening their kiss but not for the last time, for the first time again.
My Immortal – Evanescence
I’m so tired of being here.
opressed by all my childish fears.
And if you have to leave,
I wish that you would just leave.
cause your presence still lingers here,
and it won’t leave me alone.
These wounds won’t seem to heal,
this pain is just too real,
there’s just too much that time cannot erase.
When you cried I’d wipe away all of your tears,
When you’d scream I’d fight away all of your fears.
I held your hand through all of these years.
But you still have…
All of me.
You used to captivate me by your resonating light,
Now I’m bound by the life you left behind.
Your face it haunts, my once pleasant dreams
Your voice has chased away all the sanity in me.
These wounds won’t seem to heal,
this pain is just too real,
there’s just too much that time cannot erase.
When you cried I’d wipe away all of your tears,
When you’d scream I’d fight away all of your fears.
I held your hand through all of these years.
But you still have…
All of me.
I tried so hard to tell myself that you’re gone.
But though you’re still with me,
I’ve been alone all along.
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Excellent chapter, this is the way the things should be! this was amazing chapter with a talk that they needed so much time ago. thanks i hope you continue writting cause you girls have a lot of talent
i hope u continue corona
I hope S3’s ending could be like yours. Great story. Thanks.
Great update.I love that song.I agree don’t leave it at that.
Please keep writing! This is the kind of story us tibette fans need. We aren’t getting it from IC. Thank you so very much.
My, see how much hope you gave to us, all the emotionally fragilized Tibettes ? I so agree with missyang here : if only we could have this kind of hope at the end of S3… — Many thanks for your story and please, please, come back to us, write again !! You truly are talented. ^_^
That story was just excellent!!!! PLEASE START a new story from the end of this one.
Great chapter. But just one more please. We need to see them together. Thanks for the post.
Really enjoyed your writing..please continue!
No end please! TBC!!!! =)
This is an amazing story! I really love how you tied the song into it. Thanks SO MUCH!!
Absolutely…..Excellent. Since u started these posting…I have looked forward to your story more than S3….Enjoyed this immensely
Wish that would happen on the show. Enjoyed your story.
That was excellent ..But cant believe your leaving it there…..it doesnt have to be The End…Or does it!!!Great Writting Thanks
Brilliant story, but it can’t end there, let us have some loving between Bette and Tina, please post another chapter.
Excellent. Great. wish IC could read your and get a few ideas… lol But now.. you can’t leave it there. Please continue with this. I’ll read it forever. Please? Great chapter :)
Excellent story, please continue with some tender loving!
I wish S3 would end like this. I hope you write another story. :)
Take a bow! I hope you’ll write another story soon.
Wow excellent and amazing. I hope you will continue and make them together and happy again. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
I have never read something so true and beautifully and heartbreaking at the same time…gosh you got all those answers and questions we wanted from the show. The pain they cause on each other is just too much for anyone of them to bare, hopefully this time it’s really forever
Another great story, thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Its too bad Ilene didn’t have some of the writers on this site for writing the series as we would have had the most incredible series ever written about our community. Communication in relationships is always important along with clarity and honesty.
Thanks you!