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Lovesong
Previously:
“Did something happen today that you havent told Shane yet, Jude.” I thought about it. Alice drinking alone for no particular reason. When it clicked I felt the world drop from under my feet. I felt my eyes get big. I felt some real shock and a little fear as I recalled why I had been pacing in front of the window an hour ago. I called Alice as soon as found out. Thats got be why shes drinking. Must be gearing up for the ass kicking that shes sure to get after tonight.
“Oh shit. I got to go home.” I say standing up a little wobbly but determined. No sooner that I said that, a familiar looking SUV pulled up to Bettes curb, coming to an uneasy stop.
“Whos that?” Dana asked.
“Tina.” I simply said.
“Call me, later.” I waved off Shanes attempt to help me to the house. Before I got there however, before I even got off of the porch, Tina had reached the door. And Bette had answered. And she had also slammed it, before Tina had uttered a sentence.
“Well,” I said turning to Shane and Dana when I reached the last step, “that I can honestly say was the only thing today that was completely expected.”
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Chapter 6
“Tina. Tina. Thats not going to work.” I told her as I reached the distressed blonde banging on the door.
“Youre not in there?” She asked. Maybe the door hit her in the face and shes confused.
“No, Im not.” I looked at her carefully. “Have you been drinking?”
“No. I figured if you were in there you could at least let me in.”
“No such luck, Im afraid.” This time it was her turn to look at me. Really she didnt have to look at my closely, Im sure she could smell the alcohol.
“Rough day? Or did she find out everything?”
“As….as much as she….needssss to know.” I said. Or I think I said it. Tinas pacing near the door and my efforts to control the spinning in my head were making me a little nauseous.
“Tina, please. I….I am a little…..”
“Drunk. Yeah I gathered that. You smell like a bar.” She said, smiling the tiniest of smiles.
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i luv your sense of humor…please continue!!!pretty please!!!!!!!!
Hey GoGo13, please continue. I want to know whether Jude and Dani get together. Whether Bette and Tina decide to move back in together. And I must say, with your sense of humour… I just want to read more of your stories. So keep it coming. Thanks.
You could continue, lets get the baby in the middle. Two drunks is two to many. thanks
I have been reading and enjoyed it all. You should write another and might I say, please keep Jude.
What? Bette opened the packet and buddied Tina? No, give her more suffer, heehee. I’m evil.
NO way this should be the ending. This story has a lot of life left in it.. Please continue :o)
Yeah, this needs to continue!!
In some ways I understand why you feel this is a place to end, but I do love the character Jude and would hate to see you leave her behind entirely. If you decide this is the end, at least do a sequal. Personally, I think there is still a lot you can do with this story. So, my vote is to continue.
you kno wi want a happy ending… but this was too quick… at least bette should have told tina to get the baby… something…
You CAN NOT STOP NOW. Too much more to say and explore with these two, with the situation they are in. Please continue. Thanks for the post.
now we will hunt you down, don’t even think of ending……pls
well, if this is the end then i think you should post a sequel…how B&T got back together finally and their life
Judy and Alic is funne, now let Bette and Tina talk and work thing out!
Your dialogue was fantastic! Thanks!
Please continue with this story. I like Jude and would like to see her help Bette, Tina and Angelica heal. They don’t have to move in together, but it would be nice to see them date (maybe double date with Jude and Dani) and include time spent with the baby. I am just glad that Tibette are at least on the same page again.
“Oh my God, you killed her!!!” I swear you made me spit my lemon bar. That was so good. Don’t end this story. It’s very clever.