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Lovesong
“Are you fucking insane?” Bette asked her bewildered. All I saw was black because Alice arm still had my head tucked inside.
“Alice, shes drunk, not dead.” Tina countered.
“Really?” She asked me. I shook my head yes and she let me go, but remained seated on the floor cross legged looking up at the unfolding disaster that was Bette and Tina. Just like nothing ever happened. Now we were both sitting here watching our own version of As The World Turns. Pass the popcorn.
“I love you Alice.” I whispered to her.
“Dont worship me yet kid, were not out of this yet.”
“Howd you know where I was?”
“You live here.”
“Right.”
“Youre really drunk.” She said patting my head.
“So are you.”
“You aint just whistling dixie, Judy-Jude.”
“Howd you get here?”
“Cab.”
“Howd you know to come over?”
“Shane. She said come fix this. and hung up.”
“Cryptic.”
“Yeah well it wouldnt be Shane if it wasnt, so.”
“Have a told you that I loved you, yet?” I ask her
“Never hurts to hear again.”
“I like your glasses.”
“Youre a terrible flirt when youre drunk , you know that.”
“Yeah but the things I do when I get really stinkin…..”
“We can hear you two you know.” Tina said from the couch across from us.
“And you are a terrible flirt. Period, Judy”
“Yeah well, I charmed the pants off of your lovely Tina here.”
“What? When?” Tina asked. It was at this moment after I rubbed my eyes and really got a good look at them, I realized that they were sitting next to each other. Not only that, but the adoption papers were in Bettes hands. Better keep talking to keep from breaking the spell of civility.
“Five years ago, when you guys came up for my mothers birthday. I hit on Tina.” I say proudly.
“You what?” Bette asked in a semi-raised voice. “You never told me that.” she continued, turning to Tina. Wow, I think I detect a bit of jealousy coming from my unflappable cousin.
“She offered me pot. I would hardly call that flirting.” I shrug my shoulders.
“Hey, I dont offer that to just anyone. I thought you were special enough to mark the day of mothers birth and a night with the stuffy Porters, with a little toke.”
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i luv your sense of humor…please continue!!!pretty please!!!!!!!!
Hey GoGo13, please continue. I want to know whether Jude and Dani get together. Whether Bette and Tina decide to move back in together. And I must say, with your sense of humour… I just want to read more of your stories. So keep it coming. Thanks.
You could continue, lets get the baby in the middle. Two drunks is two to many. thanks
I have been reading and enjoyed it all. You should write another and might I say, please keep Jude.
What? Bette opened the packet and buddied Tina? No, give her more suffer, heehee. I’m evil.
NO way this should be the ending. This story has a lot of life left in it.. Please continue :o)
Yeah, this needs to continue!!
In some ways I understand why you feel this is a place to end, but I do love the character Jude and would hate to see you leave her behind entirely. If you decide this is the end, at least do a sequal. Personally, I think there is still a lot you can do with this story. So, my vote is to continue.
you kno wi want a happy ending… but this was too quick… at least bette should have told tina to get the baby… something…
You CAN NOT STOP NOW. Too much more to say and explore with these two, with the situation they are in. Please continue. Thanks for the post.
now we will hunt you down, don’t even think of ending……pls
well, if this is the end then i think you should post a sequel…how B&T got back together finally and their life
Judy and Alic is funne, now let Bette and Tina talk and work thing out!
Your dialogue was fantastic! Thanks!
Please continue with this story. I like Jude and would like to see her help Bette, Tina and Angelica heal. They don’t have to move in together, but it would be nice to see them date (maybe double date with Jude and Dani) and include time spent with the baby. I am just glad that Tibette are at least on the same page again.
“Oh my God, you killed her!!!” I swear you made me spit my lemon bar. That was so good. Don’t end this story. It’s very clever.