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Lovesong
“Bette, Jude is hurt let me…”
“Fuck that, dont go near her.” She said blocking Tinas path to me. Great, shes gonna let me die because I got involved in her love life. I should so call my mother.
“Bette, dont be childish, let me see if shes ok.” Tina said, but with a finality in her voice.
“Dont. Go. Near her. Shes a big girl. Old enough to get into this mess of me and you. Which by the way, I think is way pass done. If shes old enough to drink all that she did this time of day. Then she old enough to get up and get what she needs. Save the mothering for your child, Tina.” Now I may be on the verge of passing out, but I heard every word of that. That was beyond harsh. I hope Bette said that because shes still in shock that Tinas here. I can just imagine the face their both making now.
“That was low, Bette.”
“This me on my best behavior Tina. You havent seen low.” Bette told her in a low growl.
“Fine, take these please.” Tina said thrusting the package of papers at Bette.
“Whats this? A court summons to get half of the house?”
“No.”
“I know what youre doing here, Tina. I heard about you and Henry. So if you think that you can come crawling back to the community for sympathy, Im going to tell you now. No one wants you. Youre bad news. Moving back here wont change a thing.” I think Bette is reaching for straws on that one.
“Thats not what Im trying to do Bette. Im trying to make things better for us.”
“Us?”
“Yes. You, me ,and Angie.”
“One big fucking family.” Bette answered sarcastically.
“Fuck you, Bette.”
“Dont have me make some inappropriate remark to that statement Tina.” Jesus these two are dramatic. But not as dramatic as the flash I saw head towards me after Bettes words came out of her mouth.
“Oh my God, you killed her!!!!” Alice screamed directly in my ear because she came rushing in the house and cradled my head.
“You monsters! What did she do to you?”
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i luv your sense of humor…please continue!!!pretty please!!!!!!!!
Hey GoGo13, please continue. I want to know whether Jude and Dani get together. Whether Bette and Tina decide to move back in together. And I must say, with your sense of humour… I just want to read more of your stories. So keep it coming. Thanks.
You could continue, lets get the baby in the middle. Two drunks is two to many. thanks
I have been reading and enjoyed it all. You should write another and might I say, please keep Jude.
What? Bette opened the packet and buddied Tina? No, give her more suffer, heehee. I’m evil.
NO way this should be the ending. This story has a lot of life left in it.. Please continue :o)
Yeah, this needs to continue!!
In some ways I understand why you feel this is a place to end, but I do love the character Jude and would hate to see you leave her behind entirely. If you decide this is the end, at least do a sequal. Personally, I think there is still a lot you can do with this story. So, my vote is to continue.
you kno wi want a happy ending… but this was too quick… at least bette should have told tina to get the baby… something…
You CAN NOT STOP NOW. Too much more to say and explore with these two, with the situation they are in. Please continue. Thanks for the post.
now we will hunt you down, don’t even think of ending……pls
well, if this is the end then i think you should post a sequel…how B&T got back together finally and their life
Judy and Alic is funne, now let Bette and Tina talk and work thing out!
Your dialogue was fantastic! Thanks!
Please continue with this story. I like Jude and would like to see her help Bette, Tina and Angelica heal. They don’t have to move in together, but it would be nice to see them date (maybe double date with Jude and Dani) and include time spent with the baby. I am just glad that Tibette are at least on the same page again.
“Oh my God, you killed her!!!” I swear you made me spit my lemon bar. That was so good. Don’t end this story. It’s very clever.