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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 6
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Dana was up early today. She had been tossing and turning all night, but sleep was always just out of reach. She had went out to dinner with Lara the night before and had a wonderful time. When they finished eating, they had gone for a walk along the beach, holding hands and stealing shy glances at each other. However, for some reason, when it was time to ask Lara back to her place, she couldn’t do it. She had never been with the redhead. Sure they had kissed and groped on several occasions, but every time they got to the point to of no return, Dana found herself pulling away. Slowing things down. She had told herself that it was because she didn’t want to rush their relationship, but deep down, she knew it was more than that. Much more. Alice Pieszecki had somehow managed to dig a whole so deep in the athletes heart, that she was beginning to wonder if she would ever have room for someone else. It was the most frustrating thing Dana had ever experienced. All she wanted to do was move on and find happiness. She hoped that one of these days, she would find it with Lara. But each time Lara got to close, each time she felt the redhead knocking on the door to her heart, Dana back away. It was like, her brain was screaming at her to go for it, but her damn heart was filled with only Alice. She saw her everywhere and in everything. A month of her absence had done nothing but make the ache worse. Dana thought that she was feeling better, and assumed that Lara had a huge part to do with it, but when she, quite literally ran into Alice the other day, she realized that she was doing no better. She was simply looking the other way. It made her think of the times when she was little and got into trouble. She would hear her parents coming towards her and knew that she was about to be punished. So she would close her eyes tight and turn her back to them, fully believing that it would make the problem go away. "I can’t see you, you can’t see me!" she would say, over and over. Her parents would just stand there patiently until Dana thought the coast was clear, and then when she opened her eyes, reality would come crashing back in around her. Yesterday, had been wonderful and horrible all that the same time. She missed Alice desperately. Seeing her was like a burst of energy. But at the same time, it only made the heart ache that much worse. It was damn near impossible being around the blond without wrapping her up in her arms and never letting her go. She had tried to be strong, but Alice was too much. With one pleading look, she had agreed to meet for coffee.
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Jeah me, first to leave a comment on this beautiful chapter that had me in tears yet again. That scene with the window oh man! That killed me…I’m so glad you had a nice holiday and that your writing again. I’ve missed this story. Looking forward to the tournament and of course the amazing Danish scenes that will follow without a doubt. I love how you’re telling this story and that you are taking your time. Happy Dansih in the making I can feel it. Thanks suzie for your amazing writing and I will be back for any story you may write! Luv Ya.
I don’t think they’re over either, but maybe Dana will try to let Lara in. I wonder what surprises you have up your sleeve for the tournament.
Surely they’re not over – you can’t let them be over!! Now that you are nice and relaxed after your holiday, you must bring them together once and for all – please keep this wonderful fiction going forever!!
ok gang…let me interject here…I guess I must have wrote this update a bit too hastily? because everyone seems to think that the Dana/Alice relationship is over…it’s not. Sorry if I have misslead anyone. LOL. You guys know where my heart lies :)hang in there
suze – great update. you portray alice and dana so well. i’m glad you are back from vacations. i look forward to many many posts. i love this story. can’t wait for the drama and jealousy to unfold while at the tournament.
Ok, so I’m a complete goofball, because somehow I missed your last update. I was like, wait, chapter 6? What? So of course I read both of them, and I have to say babe….DAMN! You made me laugh and cry all at the same time! It’s good to have you back! :-) By the way, glad to see that the Danish relationship isnt over. Because that would just be very very sad, and I would have to come find you and slap you upside the head. He he. Love ya!
Enjoying this fan fic is a complete understatement. I would go so far as to say I adore it, although I’d adore it more if there was a little more Danish action (hint hint). My fics are currently in the process of being written, I’m struggling because I really had the attention span of a two year old. But please post soon, it’s just an awsome story.
So glad that you’re back, it felt like forever since you had last posted, even though I’m sure that’s an exaggeration:) Anyways, it was nice to see Dana and Alice at least talking again, but the tournament sounds like it’s going to be very interesting. Poor Alice:( I loved this chap and I can’t wait for the next!
whoa! the last time i was here you were just at chap 1 lol and i was smitten with this wonderful story but you have really out done yourself! and really glad that you have! lol I’m all caught up been doing that lately with everyones stories lol got a long way to go but :Sigh: words words you just rock! and ty ty ty for sticking with this story i really do love it! :) Cant wait for your next post!!
Hey Suze.. another great chapter! Alice and Dana slowly building their friendship back up and feeling their emotions was very real. The window scene was very intense [loved it]. I took it that Dana was trying to convince herself that the relationship was over by expressing a goodbye..but in her heart Dana knows that she can never truly deny her love for Alice!! The Danish path never runs smooth and i expect there is more confusion, drama,jealousy…etc to come in this wonderful story,lol. Post very soon babe. Thanks.
Aww, so sweet and get heartbreaking. Love the story, please post again soon. xx
I’m glad I made you laugh, it nice to know I can do something in return for your wonderful writing. :D And may I add one thing to your summary? One true love…and that’s what Dana and Alice are that to each other. Dana will figure out why it’s not working with Lara, she is not Alice. And I know everybody has already said something about it, but I loved the window-scene (made me think of the scene in Romeo + Juliet). So I’ll be waiting until you have picked up on my hint. ;)
Sorry for not posting earlier, ive been away on holiday (with my new wife of course lol) anyway great chap again, i feel so sorry for heartbroken alice, please fix it soon. Yay a gush reunion, I’m sure me and the wife could find the time in our busy schedules( consisting of staying in bed most days *winks*) to make it to the party. LOL xxxx