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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 6
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"How can this possibly be a good thing?" Dana stated to her empty condo. She looked in the mirror and tried to give herself a pep talk.
"Ok Fairbanks. ONE cup of coffee. That’s it. Just as friends. You have done this a million times with Alice. It doesn’t have to be weird…It doesn’t have to be painful…it’s just coffee." Dana finished her monologue. She was satisfied with herself and left for The Planet. She got there at 9:00 as they had agreed and parked her car. She spotted Alice through the window as she approached the café. She stood outside for a moment to watch the writer. She was looking at her laptop a little too hard. Her head shot up to scan the faces of every person that walked by her. Dana smiled at this. ‘She’s looking for me…and she’s just as nervous as I am.’ Dana took a deep breath and pushed her way through the door.
Alice arrived at The Planet early to make sure they would have a table and do some work for the magazine. So what if she wasn’t getting any work done? Alice sat nervously waiting for Dana to arrive. She jumped at every person that passed her, hiding the disappointment when they weren’t Dana. She looked back down at her computer and began to type the ABC’s when she heard a familiar voice in front of her.
"Is this seat taken?" Alice’s head snapped up immediately. She could see an amused grin playing at the athlete’s lips. She nodded for her to sit and watched in horror as Dana took her laptop from her and began to read her "Article."
"Wow Alice, L.A. Magazine has really got you hitting the hard stuff. The ABC’s are just out of control these days!" Alice blushed furiously and snatched her computer back.
"Fuck you Fairbanks." she said dryly. "I have writers block. Sue me."
"Writers block??? Reeeeeeeeeally…ok Al. If you say so." Dana added knowingly. "So…good morning, Al."
Alice met the brunettes eyes as she said this. They held each others gaze until their waiter interrupted them.
"What can I get you ladies?" The woman asked.
"Coffee" "Coffee." They said at the same time.
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Jeah me, first to leave a comment on this beautiful chapter that had me in tears yet again. That scene with the window oh man! That killed me…I’m so glad you had a nice holiday and that your writing again. I’ve missed this story. Looking forward to the tournament and of course the amazing Danish scenes that will follow without a doubt. I love how you’re telling this story and that you are taking your time. Happy Dansih in the making I can feel it. Thanks suzie for your amazing writing and I will be back for any story you may write! Luv Ya.
I don’t think they’re over either, but maybe Dana will try to let Lara in. I wonder what surprises you have up your sleeve for the tournament.
Surely they’re not over – you can’t let them be over!! Now that you are nice and relaxed after your holiday, you must bring them together once and for all – please keep this wonderful fiction going forever!!
ok gang…let me interject here…I guess I must have wrote this update a bit too hastily? because everyone seems to think that the Dana/Alice relationship is over…it’s not. Sorry if I have misslead anyone. LOL. You guys know where my heart lies :)hang in there
suze – great update. you portray alice and dana so well. i’m glad you are back from vacations. i look forward to many many posts. i love this story. can’t wait for the drama and jealousy to unfold while at the tournament.
Ok, so I’m a complete goofball, because somehow I missed your last update. I was like, wait, chapter 6? What? So of course I read both of them, and I have to say babe….DAMN! You made me laugh and cry all at the same time! It’s good to have you back! :-) By the way, glad to see that the Danish relationship isnt over. Because that would just be very very sad, and I would have to come find you and slap you upside the head. He he. Love ya!
Enjoying this fan fic is a complete understatement. I would go so far as to say I adore it, although I’d adore it more if there was a little more Danish action (hint hint). My fics are currently in the process of being written, I’m struggling because I really had the attention span of a two year old. But please post soon, it’s just an awsome story.
So glad that you’re back, it felt like forever since you had last posted, even though I’m sure that’s an exaggeration:) Anyways, it was nice to see Dana and Alice at least talking again, but the tournament sounds like it’s going to be very interesting. Poor Alice:( I loved this chap and I can’t wait for the next!
whoa! the last time i was here you were just at chap 1 lol and i was smitten with this wonderful story but you have really out done yourself! and really glad that you have! lol I’m all caught up been doing that lately with everyones stories lol got a long way to go but :Sigh: words words you just rock! and ty ty ty for sticking with this story i really do love it! :) Cant wait for your next post!!
Hey Suze.. another great chapter! Alice and Dana slowly building their friendship back up and feeling their emotions was very real. The window scene was very intense [loved it]. I took it that Dana was trying to convince herself that the relationship was over by expressing a goodbye..but in her heart Dana knows that she can never truly deny her love for Alice!! The Danish path never runs smooth and i expect there is more confusion, drama,jealousy…etc to come in this wonderful story,lol. Post very soon babe. Thanks.
Aww, so sweet and get heartbreaking. Love the story, please post again soon. xx
I’m glad I made you laugh, it nice to know I can do something in return for your wonderful writing. :D And may I add one thing to your summary? One true love…and that’s what Dana and Alice are that to each other. Dana will figure out why it’s not working with Lara, she is not Alice. And I know everybody has already said something about it, but I loved the window-scene (made me think of the scene in Romeo + Juliet). So I’ll be waiting until you have picked up on my hint. ;)
Sorry for not posting earlier, ive been away on holiday (with my new wife of course lol) anyway great chap again, i feel so sorry for heartbroken alice, please fix it soon. Yay a gush reunion, I’m sure me and the wife could find the time in our busy schedules( consisting of staying in bed most days *winks*) to make it to the party. LOL xxxx