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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 7
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That next week…
Everyone had arrived at the hotel that Dana was staying at, and were currently trying to get settled in and their schedules sorted out.
“So what time are Dana’s games? And when are we going shopping?” Carmen asked excitedly.
“She has a game in 3 hours, so what ever we do, we have to make sure we have plently of time to get are special passes from her manager. Dana said she got us kick ass seats!” Shane exclaimed.
“Well I’m in for shopping!” said Tina. “Me too!” Jenny followed.
“Alright! What about you, sexy?” Carmen sauntered up to Shane and gave her a seductive look before she winked at her.
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“Damn…I want to, but I think Bette and Al already roped me into drinks by the pool.” Shane pouted. “If I get burnt I am gonna be so fucking pissed.”
“Awww. It’s ok baby. If you get burnt, I will run the Aloe all over you, free of charge.”
“Promise?” Shane asked with a laugh.
Carmen leaned into kiss her and pulled back with a wink. “Promise. Bye babe.”
Shane, Bette and Alice waved them off and went about getting ready for the pool.
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Meanwhile…
“So…thanks again for coming Lara. It means a lot to me.” Dana said quietly.
“Dana, you know I wouldn’t have missed it. Thank you for inviting me.” Lara was trying to catch the athletes eye, but Dana wasn’t having it.
“Have you heard from the others? Did they make it in ok? You don’t have to wait here with me. I am going to have to go warm up soon anyway…” Lara cut her off with a kiss. Dana was hesitant at first, but began kissing her back moments later.
Lara pulled away and flashed her sweetest of smiles. “I think it’s the cutest thing ever when you ramble. Have you ever been told that you ramble?”
“Yeah…a few times…sorry.” Dana had a far off look in her eyes that Lara couldn’t read.
“Don’t be sorry silly. I just told you I like it.” she watched as the athlete began to blush. “Look, I know you have a lot on your mind right now, but you are going to kick so much ass out there. Just stay focused and play like you always do. You’ll be great! And as for your friends, they have reported in and are currently shopping and/or working on their tans. They sent their love and best wishes. Satisfied?” Lara asked with a smirk.
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Ah – such torture to stop right there… It’s going to be a long night and a long wait until the next update. Great Update!
hell yeah its gonna be a long night.
awesome. definitely looking forward to what the night may bring. thanks for posting!
Right so I don’t remember if I’ve actually commented yet but if I haven’t let me tell you that you’re rocking the shit with this story. Great job I love the comic spin you put on this story, can wait to see some Danish lovin’…there better be Danish lovin! Yes that is a threat and I do back them up lol.
Where have you been – missed you so much. What an ending to the chapter, you have left us on a cliffhanger yet again – please, please post soon – don’t leave it so long as I get withdrawal symptons, and it’s not nice!!!
I would like to have been at that tennis match…or in that pool for that matter! Only to witness such a tension between these two would make me melt. I sometimes really wonder why I could be all content after reading a Danish fic…when you (and all Danish writers in general) proceed to let nothing actually happen between the two of them.You’re such a teaser! :P Ah well, I just live for the moments that all seems to be right for Danish. :D LOL @ Dana’s reaction to Alice swaying her hips. And as for the night…they can’t deny their feelings for each other after all that has happened this evening. Luckily Lara is in a deep coma…and she will hopefully stay for it in a while. *evil grin*
My dear, dear friend. I thought that I had lost you forever! Words cannot express how HAPPY I am that you are back. When I saw you updated, I almost had a heart attack. You need to warn a girl next time before you take a break and then just randomly post. I need to prepare myself! Ha ha. But seriously, fucking awesome chapter! The tension between Danish literally gave me goosebumps. I was so hoping that they would go at it in the pool! Ha ha. They still have to get through the night together though, and I’m hoping beyond hope that there’s a little Danish lovin in the next chapter. Or are you going to make me sad and continue to keep our girls apart for a little while longer? :-( That whole tennis thing cracked me the hell up. You’re brilliant babe! Well, I just chugged two cups of coffee, and I’m on a little bit of a coffee buzz, so I’ll stop rambling. I fucking love you too, and keep up the good work! :-P
ahhhhh how evil to stop right there! lol fantastic job Suz i never lost hope that youd soon post again and what a post it was! Leave it to Jenny to ruin the danish moment! :P I cant wait to see those 2 find their way back to each other tho i hope in the next chap which i know will be posted soon! right right? lol but yeah i know its gonna be a long night for those 2 which is great :) again awesome chap I hope you dont loose yourself again because your doing a bang up job!
Oh no! Suzie the stress you put me through leaving it there…I just reread it and it’s amazing how these girls act. Cannot wait for this night that’s coming up, more interruptions perhaps…Well at least they are in the same room let’s just hope they lock it! Great update as ever and looking forward to the next one.
I’m glad that your inspiration finally came back to you.Really glad, in fact. That suspense was really starting to kill me. Flippin awsome update! Damn Jenny for ruining the pool moment though. Please update soon because I’m really looking forward to what’s going to happen during that long night!
Damn awsome chapter, although the teasing was a little mean! Ha I so thought they were going to go for it in the pool, damn my thoughts! Hope you update soon, it was great.
very nice. love all the tension and teasing.
Argh, bloody Jenny!!!!! Fan-friggin-tastic chapter. Please dont leave it so long to post again, i cant take the suspense. Great writing as always xx
Glad to see you’ve found your muse…your take on Danish, especially when it’s just the two of them, is so sweet. Now, if they can only get past their mutual fear and on with the lovin’! Please post soon.
ahhhh and i can’t wiat to see what happens!!!
I don’t know how it’s even possible that I haven’t commented on this story yet … but I am seriously loving it. You’re doing an excellent job & I can’t wait for more.