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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 6
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"Two coffee’s, coming right up." Alice watched the woman leave before she brought her attention back to Dana. She was playing with the corner of her napkin and biting her lips in that nervous way that Alice was so fond of.
"So…" She stated.
"So…" Dana replied without looking up.
Alice had been so excited that Dana had agreed to meet, but now that she was sitting here in front of her, she found herself at a loss for words. She reached out and lightly touched the athletes hand, stopping her attack on the napkin.
"Dana, thank you for coming." She said quietly. Dana finally looked up at her and gave her a shy smile, shrugging her shoulders. "I mean it. I have really missed you Dana."
Dana looked back down at her napkin. "I’ve missed you too, Alice."
Alice felt her heart swell at the words. Dana may not have been looking at her, but she could her the sincerity in them. Just then, their waitress came back with their coffee’s. Alice thanked the woman and took a sip from her cup.
"Oh Jesus! Al! How’s your elbow? Sorry. I completely forgot ti ask about it." Alice smiled as Dana reached across the table and gently turned her arm over.
"It’s ok Dana. Really. I mean, I won’t be kicking your ass in tennis anytime soon, but give me a week or so and I’ll show you how it’s supposed to look." She winked. "But thanks for asking."
Dana laughed and shook her head at her. "You are SO full of shit, Pieszecki! I would beat you with one arm behind my back and a spoon for a racket. You have got to be the least athletic person I know!" Dana teased.
"Whatever! I’m offended Ms. Fairbanks. How would you know how good or bad I am at tennis? Have you ever seen me play?" Alice asked.
"Well…no…wait Al, have you EVER played tennis? I mean you have to actually play for someone to see you." Alice flipped her friend off before finally giving in.
"Ok. You caught me. So I have never played a day of tennis in my life. That doesn’t change the fact that I will kick your ass good and properly when I am back at 100 percent." And just like that, they were back. They joked and caught up like old times, both women secretly relishing the others company far more than they should have been. One coffee turned into three and lunch and the next thing they knew, it was 2:00.
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Jeah me, first to leave a comment on this beautiful chapter that had me in tears yet again. That scene with the window oh man! That killed me…I’m so glad you had a nice holiday and that your writing again. I’ve missed this story. Looking forward to the tournament and of course the amazing Danish scenes that will follow without a doubt. I love how you’re telling this story and that you are taking your time. Happy Dansih in the making I can feel it. Thanks suzie for your amazing writing and I will be back for any story you may write! Luv Ya.
I don’t think they’re over either, but maybe Dana will try to let Lara in. I wonder what surprises you have up your sleeve for the tournament.
Surely they’re not over – you can’t let them be over!! Now that you are nice and relaxed after your holiday, you must bring them together once and for all – please keep this wonderful fiction going forever!!
ok gang…let me interject here…I guess I must have wrote this update a bit too hastily? because everyone seems to think that the Dana/Alice relationship is over…it’s not. Sorry if I have misslead anyone. LOL. You guys know where my heart lies :)hang in there
suze – great update. you portray alice and dana so well. i’m glad you are back from vacations. i look forward to many many posts. i love this story. can’t wait for the drama and jealousy to unfold while at the tournament.
Ok, so I’m a complete goofball, because somehow I missed your last update. I was like, wait, chapter 6? What? So of course I read both of them, and I have to say babe….DAMN! You made me laugh and cry all at the same time! It’s good to have you back! :-) By the way, glad to see that the Danish relationship isnt over. Because that would just be very very sad, and I would have to come find you and slap you upside the head. He he. Love ya!
Enjoying this fan fic is a complete understatement. I would go so far as to say I adore it, although I’d adore it more if there was a little more Danish action (hint hint). My fics are currently in the process of being written, I’m struggling because I really had the attention span of a two year old. But please post soon, it’s just an awsome story.
So glad that you’re back, it felt like forever since you had last posted, even though I’m sure that’s an exaggeration:) Anyways, it was nice to see Dana and Alice at least talking again, but the tournament sounds like it’s going to be very interesting. Poor Alice:( I loved this chap and I can’t wait for the next!
whoa! the last time i was here you were just at chap 1 lol and i was smitten with this wonderful story but you have really out done yourself! and really glad that you have! lol I’m all caught up been doing that lately with everyones stories lol got a long way to go but :Sigh: words words you just rock! and ty ty ty for sticking with this story i really do love it! :) Cant wait for your next post!!
Hey Suze.. another great chapter! Alice and Dana slowly building their friendship back up and feeling their emotions was very real. The window scene was very intense [loved it]. I took it that Dana was trying to convince herself that the relationship was over by expressing a goodbye..but in her heart Dana knows that she can never truly deny her love for Alice!! The Danish path never runs smooth and i expect there is more confusion, drama,jealousy…etc to come in this wonderful story,lol. Post very soon babe. Thanks.
Aww, so sweet and get heartbreaking. Love the story, please post again soon. xx
I’m glad I made you laugh, it nice to know I can do something in return for your wonderful writing. :D And may I add one thing to your summary? One true love…and that’s what Dana and Alice are that to each other. Dana will figure out why it’s not working with Lara, she is not Alice. And I know everybody has already said something about it, but I loved the window-scene (made me think of the scene in Romeo + Juliet). So I’ll be waiting until you have picked up on my hint. ;)
Sorry for not posting earlier, ive been away on holiday (with my new wife of course lol) anyway great chap again, i feel so sorry for heartbroken alice, please fix it soon. Yay a gush reunion, I’m sure me and the wife could find the time in our busy schedules( consisting of staying in bed most days *winks*) to make it to the party. LOL xxxx