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Do You Remember When? – CG’s Chapter
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“I don’t really know where to start T.” said Bette, with a helpless shrug.
“Would you like me to help you out?” asked Tina, grasping hold of Bette’s hand, immediately understanding that this wasn’t easy for Bette.
“Please.” replied Bette, thankful for Tina’s sympathy.
“OK. The first thing I remember is how excited you were that you were getting to see your father. How your eyes lit up at the thought that you were going to get to spend some time with him. It made me happy to see you so excited, but then there seemed to be this nervousness about you. It was like you knew that our meeting wasn’t necessarily going to go as you hoped.”
“I remember now. When we were getting dressed to go to the restaurant I couldn’t decide what to wear…”
“Always a sign that you’re nervous about something.” interrupted Tina.
“Eventually you picked something out for me, and I remember standing in the middle of our bedroom while you did up my shirt for me. My hands were shaking too much to do it myself.” laughed Bette, self-consciously.
“It would have been so much more fun to be…”
“Get your mind out of the gutter Tina.” scolded Bette, light-heartedly.
“Sorry, but…”
“So, once we were both dressed, even with the doing up of the buttons taking slightly longer than intended.”
“Do you remember how long that kiss lasted?”
“It wasn’t three hours and eighteen minutes.”
“No, it was twelve minutes.” replied Tina, looking pleased with herself.
“How can you remember that?”
“For the same reason that you can remember that our first real kiss lasted three hours and eighteen minutes. Because, even though every kiss we share means everything to me, there are some that mean even more.”
“Even more than everything?” asked Bette, her eyebrow raised.
“We’re getting off the point.” reminded Tina, laughing at Bette’s incredulous tone.
“That kiss made us late.” laughed Bette.
“Yeah, not an auspicious start.” replied Tina, grimly.
“No.” agreed Bette, now feeling even more uneasy about the direction that this conversation was taking.
“So what happened after that?”
“We drove to the restaurant, quickly from what I remember.”
“Do you remember what we talked about?” probed Tina, gently.
“Am I going to find myself having some great revelation at the end of all of this?” asked Bette, getting slightly frustrated.
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What a wonderful conversation, among other things. :-) Something we will never see on the show…Bette and Tina actually talking…saying things that can’t fit into one short sentence. Thanks!
Great dialogue…..Cannot wait 4 round 2…bio….
WOW, Melvin and sex in one chapter!!! And the three hour and eighteen minute kiss!! LOL That was really great mate. You still really don’t realise how good your writing is do you?? You know, when we talked about which chapter you wanted to write as part of our deal I certainly never expected to see and NC17 and Melvin!!! LOL Perfect B&T mate – thank you so much.
Great post… and great dialogue between Bette and Tina. They actually talk about there feelings, which is what most people do in a relationship, but I guess IC is a bit off. Who would have thought that talks about Melvin could lead to sex on the kitchen counter. Can’t wait for the update.
Great, as usual!
What a cliffy….I hope Jo let you write a follow-up :o))
Wow…so “sitting” on the counter is unhygienic….lol. BOTH of you ladies blow me away with your writing…it’s crazy. If only Melvin could see them now…and to know talking about him was foreplay…lol. Keep posting! Both of youse.
this was wonderful, the talk, the memory, the loving…wonderful
So much of what you both write, as well as as others is the talking, the communication, the description, the dialogue, banter…it all forms to create a beautiful tale. A brilliant chapter, thankyou!
wow
That was a very enjoyable post. : )
hotttttttttttttttttttttttt
Who knew talking about a diapproving parent could get Tina, Bette, and the rest of us so hot? Unhygenic? Well, the old folks have a saying that everybody eats a peck of dirt in their life. I’m willing to bet Bette’s partaken of Tina’s ass a time or two already, so what’s the problem?
that was very sweet and very funny PPS
Love the mixture of sex and talk! Round 2 coming up???
Awesome chapter – what a great conversation and I love where it led them and us. thanks for teaming up on this one.
Excellent, the dialogue, their interaction and the love they share, if only this will happen sometime in S4, you doing great!
Love this now lets see how Jobadge does. You did very well. considing you were writing about Melvin thanks
Wow, Bette is standing up to her dad to protect the love of her life. I just wish that you would write more happy stories about B&T not sad ones.
Melvin and hot sex–who would have expected those two in the same chapter? Hope you get to do a follow-up!
Well, citygirl, gotta say, you certainly have guts! It takes a hell of a writer to accept the challenge to write one chapter of Jobadge’s “Do you remember when…”! And I won’t lie by saying that I didn’t have myself some expectations…;) Well, I think it’s safe to say that you’ve more than definitely met them!!! It was a great chapter, tender, loving, hot, but also very smart and, I’ve gotta say, very loyal to Jo’s storyline!!! So, congratulations to you, and thanks a lot for this moment of pure pleasure! K.
The topics of Melvin and sex remind me of “Melvin at the Beach” or whatever B&T named that sex tape in AmandaMG’s story. xD Nice chapter!
That was a wonderful chapter, Citygirl! Thank you so much!
excellent story. I’m missing your writing, pleas come back with anoher story.
Melvin was a asshole some times but he just come from a different time were lesbians weren’t really the right thing especially not a biracial couple, but he eventually he came along just a lil too late, and Tina still love Bette despite it all