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Do You Remember When? – CG’s Chapter
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“What was that for?” asked Tina, smiling for the first time.
“You looked a little sad, so I thought I might try to cheer you up.”
“I’m OK.” replied Tina, looking away slightly.
“Are you, really?” asked Bette, knowing that Tina wasn’t exactly telling the truth.
“It’s just that…well…”
“What T? You can tell me. What’s wrong?”
“Your father’s coming today and…I don’t want to hurt you Bette. We’ve been doing so well. I feel closer to you now that I have done in such a long time. It’s just that I…it’s not easy for me.”
“I know, and intend to do something about that. I don’t quite know what yet, but you deserve his respect and I’m going to make sure that he understands your place in my life.”
“Oh yeah, and what would that be?” asked Tina, teasing.
“The woman I love, the woman who’s right beside me in everything I do, the woman who makes my life infinitely better just by being the first person I see every morning, the woman who I’m never going to let go and amazingly the woman who doesn’t seem to want to let go of me.”
“I’m never giving up on you Bette.” whispered Tina, unshed tears dancing around the corners of her eyes at Bette’s words.
“That’s good.” whispered Bette, in reply.
“Do you remember when I first met your father?”
“I thought that this game was supposed to be about happy occasions.” said Bette, grimacing at the memory.
“No, I think it’s about what made us the people we are today, and about what’s made us stronger as a couple.”
“You think meeting my father made us stronger as a couple?” asked Bette, surprised.
“Yes, well, not stronger exactly but after I met him I knew how much you loved me.”
“But he never acknowledged you once, not as my partner….”
“And he still calls me Ms. Kennard, even now. But that’s not what I’m talking about.”
“Tina, I’m confused.” admitted Bette.
“OK, you tell me about what you remember about that night and I’ll tell you about what I remember.”
Bette paused for a second, not really understanding what Tina was trying to achieve with this. Bette knew in her heart that her father had always treated Tina, not badly, but certainly never with the consideration that he should have done. Bette also knew that this tore at the heart of her, the woman that she loved, more than anything, against the man who, despite everything, she still wanted to please and know that he was happy with the decisions that she made. There seemed to be no easy answer to this for Bette but she knew that if she wanted to patch up this tear then she should go along with what Tina wanted.
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What a wonderful conversation, among other things. :-) Something we will never see on the show…Bette and Tina actually talking…saying things that can’t fit into one short sentence. Thanks!
Great dialogue…..Cannot wait 4 round 2…bio….
WOW, Melvin and sex in one chapter!!! And the three hour and eighteen minute kiss!! LOL That was really great mate. You still really don’t realise how good your writing is do you?? You know, when we talked about which chapter you wanted to write as part of our deal I certainly never expected to see and NC17 and Melvin!!! LOL Perfect B&T mate – thank you so much.
Great post… and great dialogue between Bette and Tina. They actually talk about there feelings, which is what most people do in a relationship, but I guess IC is a bit off. Who would have thought that talks about Melvin could lead to sex on the kitchen counter. Can’t wait for the update.
Great, as usual!
What a cliffy….I hope Jo let you write a follow-up :o))
Wow…so “sitting” on the counter is unhygienic….lol. BOTH of you ladies blow me away with your writing…it’s crazy. If only Melvin could see them now…and to know talking about him was foreplay…lol. Keep posting! Both of youse.
this was wonderful, the talk, the memory, the loving…wonderful
So much of what you both write, as well as as others is the talking, the communication, the description, the dialogue, banter…it all forms to create a beautiful tale. A brilliant chapter, thankyou!
wow
That was a very enjoyable post. : )
hotttttttttttttttttttttttt
Who knew talking about a diapproving parent could get Tina, Bette, and the rest of us so hot? Unhygenic? Well, the old folks have a saying that everybody eats a peck of dirt in their life. I’m willing to bet Bette’s partaken of Tina’s ass a time or two already, so what’s the problem?
that was very sweet and very funny PPS
Love the mixture of sex and talk! Round 2 coming up???
Awesome chapter – what a great conversation and I love where it led them and us. thanks for teaming up on this one.
Excellent, the dialogue, their interaction and the love they share, if only this will happen sometime in S4, you doing great!
Love this now lets see how Jobadge does. You did very well. considing you were writing about Melvin thanks
Wow, Bette is standing up to her dad to protect the love of her life. I just wish that you would write more happy stories about B&T not sad ones.
Melvin and hot sex–who would have expected those two in the same chapter? Hope you get to do a follow-up!
Well, citygirl, gotta say, you certainly have guts! It takes a hell of a writer to accept the challenge to write one chapter of Jobadge’s “Do you remember when…”! And I won’t lie by saying that I didn’t have myself some expectations…;) Well, I think it’s safe to say that you’ve more than definitely met them!!! It was a great chapter, tender, loving, hot, but also very smart and, I’ve gotta say, very loyal to Jo’s storyline!!! So, congratulations to you, and thanks a lot for this moment of pure pleasure! K.
The topics of Melvin and sex remind me of “Melvin at the Beach” or whatever B&T named that sex tape in AmandaMG’s story. xD Nice chapter!
That was a wonderful chapter, Citygirl! Thank you so much!
excellent story. I’m missing your writing, pleas come back with anoher story.
Melvin was a asshole some times but he just come from a different time were lesbians weren’t really the right thing especially not a biracial couple, but he eventually he came along just a lil too late, and Tina still love Bette despite it all